Great Writer 1980

Damn it, is this a common problem among Qidian copywriters? I have to do a copy of the song to pretend b😂

After the protagonist publishes a work, there are many people and many perspectives to describe their feelings. Then there is the reply received from that reader, and the content of that chapter is basically the reply from each reader, accounting for at least 75%. It just feels very watery.

The writing and plot arrangement are pretty good The only thing I feel bad about is the copied work I directly copied Lu Yao's life and Yu Hua's journey at the age of eighteen These are all famous works It looks too awkward and hurts my character

Why is the plot between each chapter not very coherent?

It's well written, but a bit explosive. Please recommend it. No editor will recommend this.

Can you not copy other people's achievements? You have traveled through time and been reborn to have some face and something of your own. Authors, don't write copycat stuff, write something different and see what makes you unique.

Not bad, keep this level 👍👍👍

Well written, will the protagonist go to Beijing in the future? People who go to Beijing are tired of seeing it. Will you be with Xiaoqiao?

You wrote Wasteland to stop Qianqian from peeing

The author still has something to say, but I feel that what the protagonist writes is not systematic, and I can't tell what the protagonist or the author really wants to express. Also, the writing is too fast and there are too many things. It is recommended to refer to the latest novel of Little Time Love Song, which is also a period copy. I think it is very well written.

Raise the whip to urge the code, add the quick code!

The writing is really good, it would be better if it were updated more 😁

The character of Xiao Qingmei is well portrayed, don't let it down! They are all period writings in which Jack and Su Diaosi counterattacked and thought they were inferior but pretended to be clowns. Don't open up a harem and keep this kind of simple writing style. It's brilliant! Nice!

I don't know why I don't have the idea to read on, I always want to jump directly to the chapter.

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Praise every day, and criticize today. In fact, follow your own pace. A reckless man who doesn't understand the rules of online writing will give people a better and spiritual impression. From the various shock reactions after the publication of the previous newspaper, to the plot of the train ride, it is obvious that the author wants to find the rhythm of the market, but your writing method is extremely inconsistent and utilitarian, and the middle degree is very poorly grasped. It is really fun to find a good rhythm to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger and all kinds of shocks, but other authors either have their own unique understanding, or their talents are so talented that every word is in the rhythm. .

The second half is well written, and the plot is more focused. In the first half, I still have an old problem. The perspective is cut too fast, and one word is confusing. This kind of perspective cutting is very useful in setting off the atmosphere, but if you only use it for two chapters, even gods can't handle it. Give the perspective back to the protagonist.

It's pretty good among Era's Chinese entertainment novels, and the writing style is good. Although it is written about things that happened forty or fifty years ago, the author can only rely on hearsay. There are many specious scenes and many fallacies. The most annoying thing is being a eunuch