Tracing the Origin of Immortality
修仙溯源
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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352Chapters
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The more I watch it, the more interesting it becomes. I feel it is suitable for being made into a TV series. The theme song "Purple" is more suitable 😎
The beginning is not good, it's just a bomb of settings. How about 😒 traveling to another world and sleeping with the villain's fiancée, and then escaping from birth to the world of immortality, and then exploring or plot dialogue to bring out the setting. The text is too dense and affects reading. The subsequent story is okay, but it can't arouse people's emotions.
To be honest, I admire your courage. I have opened 3 books, but none of them have been signed. The one I wrote more than 130,000 words couldn't get signed, so I wanted to give up. Brother, I have written 1 million words, but I still want to learn from you.
I hated your layout when I saw the first picture. It's such a long paragraph.
A hammer in the east and a stick in the west, eloquently
I think the description is good, but the necessary content cannot be omitted.
Everyone has a dream of cultivating immortality, but each one is different.