Survival: from the Twisted Jungle

The survival content is okay, but I really can't stand the character of the protagonist. It's stupid and useless. We don't know why the author wrote it like this, or did he think that readers with this kind of male protagonist would have a sense of empathy? Just like those Japanese light novels, the male protagonist is nothing but gentle and useless.

The author wants to write about ordinary people growing up to be bosses But author, look at the title of your book, Survival Look at the title of the protagonist, Pioneer Is this something that ordinary people can accomplish? In the beginning, he is an ordinary person, why should he survive, why should he develop, why should he not die? Why should you not let him die? Then why did you name your book "Survival"? Couldn't you change it to "Eternal Life"?

After reading five chapters, there is nothing attractive. The 10,000-word golden finger has not unlocked a single achievement, which shows that it is too slow and too slow. It is a failure to deliberately write ultra-high difficulty to bring out the strength of the protagonist. Others are dead without the golden finger. The survival rate is almost 0. So what is the meaning of its existence? Brainlessly portraying the protagonist?

What the hell are farmers farming?

There's a reason why it's not popular. The life settings are quite thoughtful, but there are too many personal things, and interpersonal dealings are really hard to describe. It's very annoying.

After reading more than seventy chapters, I read the introduction and then the table of contents. I have a question. The protagonist is a pioneer and not an adventurer. Has he been deeply involved in this world? Aren't the pioneers laying a nail (a safe zone) in a world, and then the adventurers are responsible for it? This has always been in the same world, what is the difference between that and adventurers?

How should I put it, since we are all pioneers, then pioneering Slaanesh is also a kind of pioneering, right?

Running account, survival but system, a bit like game survival, not the conventional kind,

I'm speechless, I ordered everything, and this is the result! It's a trap!

Your protagonist is too lazy, why not change it to Chaos Neutral?

A daily guide that will appear in this book every few days 😰

Before I understood it, I asked how the author came up with four completely unrelated names, including the introduction 🤔

The story is well written, but the author's narrative style is really long-winded, and his writing style needs to be improved. His choice of words and sentences are down-to-earth if they sound nice, but they are rustic if they are straightforward. Really wordy

Entering a world twice and over 100 chapters, the plot is too slow

This early stage of single-player writing is too long, right?

Is it really feasible to take the system dominated by the main world to plunder another world? Isn't this using the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of the current dynasty?

The writing is okay, not like a novice, so come on!

Update quickly. I saved 100 photos and finished reading them in two days. What should I do? 🤔

In fact, the writing of this book is not bad. There are indeed some problems in the early stage, but the more I write in the future, the better it gets!

I really like the subject matter, but there are no more updates. 😭😭I cried to death

It's a bit hard to stretch, but it looks pretty good. I originally thought about raising it and seeing the results.