
Create the Strongest Entry Starting from Pirates
从海贼开始打造最强词条
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Didn't you kill the crane and then become a Shichibukai? ? After Weibull killed Zefa's students and became a Qibuhai, Zefa could even go crazy. If you kill Tsuru and become a Shichibukai, the navy will probably explode.
Now is the era of great repression
I Roger didn't get Shaky! I searched everywhere to find someone comparable to Xia Qi! I found a photo of Im, and was discovered by Im, so I was chased by the navy! Finally, I went to the final island and found out that I was dying, so I put Im's photo on the final island! The purpose of surrendering later is to let people know what the greatest treasure is So my bloodline, Roger, is extremely evil! Rocks' son is fine, but my son must die because of Im's photo!
Procrastination and water are the key to the problem. The biggest problem is that there is no excitement or climax based on water and procrastination. So what should I read in this book? Look at your armament and swordsmanship, can't you finish defeating the evil dragon in more than seventy chapters? Watching the protagonist play house in the East China Sea? Watching the protagonist pretend to be a presence in front of Zoro alone?
An entry comes to mind: "Heroic Good Man" Passive: Any action you take will be understood as a positive behavior by others and they will be moved by it! Active: After turning it on, the body's heat resistance will be improved (no dogs will eat the fruit if it is burned, do you like me to put it in the frying pan)?
The thought of the protagonist becoming the King of the Shichibukai, and then two years later a bunch of little protagonists showing up. I hate the cold. Just like Misaka Mikoto's group of Misaka sisters.
Garp is a clown, don't write Garp too well
The plot of the game against Aaron at the beginning was so poisonous that it caused me to die from the poison.
Who can keep reading? Who is already a god? He dominates the battle and dominates the plot. With so many buffs, Aaron has played dozens of chapters? He also asked Aaron to kill so many villagers. The protagonist really wanted to be a Shichibukai and was treated like a dog by the crane. It was so poisonous that I couldn't bear it. I couldn't stand it even if I didn't even see the subscription chapter. I specially ordered a chapter for fans to talk about. The author should rewrite the previous plot 🥵
When I read Chapter 68, the protagonist's skills cannot be used without the knife. If the knife is knocked away or stolen, will the protagonist be useless?
The data at the King of Effort began to collapse, and when it came to the endowment, the collapse was even worse. Zoro's training effect was 100 times, or 50 times less. The protagonist multiplied this by 200, and one day is equivalent to 27 years. In this way, he reached the top in one day (the book does not say that there is (what weakens the attenuation effect), but the written exercise has not reached the supernova level after months of training. In other words, Sauron's talent dropped off a cliff and abyss after cheating in this book. He will not reach the supernova level for decades. The protagonist is even worse. He will not reach the supernova level for hundreds or thousands of years.
Obtaining the results of 27 years of Sauron's training every day, the result is that the strength is improved a little every time. Is the combat power a bit too much? And the King of Effort entry is 200%, isn't that double? If it's not 2000%, then why can one day become 200 days? I'm a little confused. Can anyone explain it to me🤔🤔🤔
The new chapter stretches the intensity levels too far, while the intensity levels in the original work are not that wide.
Such as the title: The protagonist can win, old Rayleigh, but it is not bad that he cannot defeat Hawkeye before he is fully developed. After all, Hawkeye is bound to the king, Xiangsi is still very expressive Question: In the new chapter, he said that he and Rayleigh could not beat Aokiji together? The gap between two people of similar levels in One Piece cannot be widened. Oda himself said that no one can survive the two generals joining forces, even if the old Rayleigh and the undeveloped protagonist here are officially a general, there is a slight gap (mainly because of the lack of battery life) But it is not a problem for two people to join forces to crush the opponent. It is not a medium-level immortal who can crush the opponent to death and cannot turn over several times. It is useless. The level gap in One Piece is not so big.
The combat power system is completely broken, and the protagonist is useless even if there is water.
The latest story: Rocks is also a puppet of Im.
I just got started, but I was threatened by Im as the supreme hostage. I was mentally unstable, stabbed into my body, and turned into a puppet.
Colonel Smoker? ? ?
Are you afraid that if you have good grades and you don't write a good colonel, you have to write a colonel, which will stand out to you, right? Do you think you have something new?
Regarding Aaron's plot, Chapter 4 on No. 9
The readers in the comment section are very angry, but it is true that there is no way to change the finished plot, so it has been decided to release four chapters in one go on the 9th, which is tomorrow. The rhythm of this part of the plot was not well controlled. I just thought about combining the characters of the Dragon Pirates with the improvement of the protagonist and looking for exciting points in other directions. I really did not consider the proportion of the plot length. I'm also afraid that Aaron will be criticized if I don't finish the game tomorrow, so I decided to release four chapters in four minutes tomorrow, which can be considered an apology from the author. This time, I'm sorry, I'll kneel down to the readers: One
The early stage was generally good, but later on, the story suddenly turned against the navy. From the moment He designed the protagonist, the whole rhythm was weird. The whole navy's top brass knew about the protagonist's situation. Normally, they would not frame the protagonist. They don't support a Shichibukai with good intentions?
Stop talking about devil powers. It looks really awkward. A group of people say you just don't listen, right? Could it be that if you write fruit powers and devil fruit powers, some people will criticize you?
Enough water
The matter of beating Aaron with a knife was revealed in dozens of chapters.
It's been a long time since I watched One Piece, and I don't know where the plot is going now, but are the Knights of God so powerful? After the protagonist fought with Kaido's mother, his domineering temperament and strength doubled, and it was 2 to 3 times. Why is it so troublesome to fight the knights like this? So what is Luffy's chance of winning in the manga? Turn into the sun and exhaust its lifespan, and finally transform into a black hole and die together? I understand this pressure on one's strength. After all, if one is too strong and overpowers the novel, it is easy for the novel to be unfinished. It's just a way of making money, so it's not shabby. But this pressure is too outrageous. In the novel, it is always said that domineering overpowers everything. If you are so domineering, even if you write twice as much, I will It's bearable. It's a protracted war at worst, but you still want to write that a qualitative change has occurred. The qualitative change took a long time, and you can't even crush it. You can just tie or have a slight upper hand with a knight, and barely suppress the immortality? Calculating it this way, the protagonist is only at the level of Jabba.
Suddenly I discovered that Luffy's combat power was faster than the protagonist's.
I came across a TikTok today, saying that it took Luffy 66 days from Drosresa to becoming the Yonko after the Battle of Onigashima. It is estimated that in a few months of plot time, he will reach Im's combat power 🙂
Kaido is greater than Roger. The argument is that after defeating the Valley of the Gods, Kaido at his peak still thinks that Lobai Luo is only a strong man who can fight with him and cannot defeat him. At the same time, Roger is not the strongest in the era. The strongest man with white beard and Kouzuki's invincible can defeat Roger. Don't brag about One Piece. Without Kouzuki, Roger will not be able to become the Pirate King in S.
I paid for the drug test and persisted until Alabasta was poisoned and died. I really couldn't resist it.
Hey, I didn't want to read it when I saw that Zoro was going to be recruited as a crew member. I wanted to recruit Nami earlier, so forget it. I kept recruiting people from the protagonist group, and then continued along the main plot. There was no own thing or idea at all, and I couldn't watch it at all. And I don't think Sauron would casually recognize someone as a captain. If you don't get his approval, he won't recognize you as a captain even if you kill him. If you kill him it's a super poisonous spot. The world of pirates, sailing and adventure, stories and companions form a magnificent and wonderful epic. You can form your own pirate group and start your own story. Hey, it looked pretty good at first, but I didn't expect it to be written like this at the end. I can only say that it's not suitable for me. See you again when the time comes!
Unimaginable water…an exaggeration of water
I specifically subscribed to a chapter to comment. I tried the poison myself and died from the poison.
Another author whose back was numbed by Oda
You said that the author can obviously write the protagonist and plot very well, so why does he have to write a systematic article?
This King of Effort plus Angel Wheel is too perverted. Even if the minimum is 10%, one day is still worth 2,000 days to Sauron.
Why not extract Bucky's entry?
Let's not talk about whether we can extract the devil fruit that breaks into pieces, but even if we extract a handful of Bucky's incredible luck, it will be fine. If you want to press it, there is no need to press it in this place. After all, grabbing the extraction term of highland barley refining is part of the fun.
Do you want to go to other worlds? Starting from Pirates, this name has been used to open the Tianliu?