Covering the Sky: the World and the World

Is this the harem stream or the eunuch stream? I watched the eunuch stream myself. I will help you recommend the readership of the harem stream. They are all active readers. As for the harem style, does it include Ji Ziyue? Is it a style that should be all-inclusive, or is it just a few girls? Should eunuchs practice cultivating wholeheartedly towards the Tao, or should they go to take care of old slaves? 🙂

The biggest problem with this book is that it does not explain the protagonist's clear source of power and division of combat power 1. The chaos of the ancient method will not work, unless you have the river flower, otherwise the world will change drastically, and the chaos of the ancient method will not work. You add a setting, saying that your Bone Chaosing Technique was taught by Emperor Huangtian himself and can be used. Then explain what state the protagonist is in, Luan Gufa? Don't just use a treasure tree to hit an enemy soldier on the ground, at least Huang can't do it. Just hit the supreme weapon casually before you can escape. Ye Fan defeated the imperial dynasty with the imperial soldiers in the Qingdi Immortal Pond. You can explain that the protagonist has something similar to an enemy soldier that can immobilize another imperial soldier. 2 Secret Realm Method, really, don't do those fancy things. First of all, the protagonist's Secret Realm method does not have the Imperial Scripture. Actually, I really don't understand how the protagonist became Huang's disciple and the most outstanding descendant of the Immortal King without having practiced the basic ancient methods and secret methods. Compared with bloodline, willpower and Taoist heart are more important. You have never practiced the basics. How did you come up with this assessment? It can be explained later that the protagonist practiced, then killed himself, and then rebuilt it in this life. In terms of version, you can say that Huang Immortal Emperor's secret realm method is definitely better than the secret realm method practiced by the great emperor in this life, but the good thing about Huang's secret realm method is that he is the beginning, the beginning. Don't add any vision or attributes to this secret realm method. The characteristics of the wild law should be like the body of chaos and the innate Tao embryo. It is the beginning, the universal law. All secret laws are extensions of the wild law. Looking back to the origin, all imperial laws are the food of the original law. To supplement, and fight against the opponents of the secret law, the protagonist should get stronger as he fights. The secret law is constantly corrected in the battle. I feel that the more busy the protagonist is, the clownier he becomes, and he is completely indifferent to the branches and leaves. 3 Don't let the protagonist fight across realms casually. Add some original settings. For example, Yuan Tianshi can definitely fight across realms, and you can kill the saint kings in the four extremes. For example, in the first killing formation, you can directly kill the immortal. You can say that the first killing formation is engraved on the protagonist's body in the protagonist's formation. You can add some cross-realm combat stuff to the protagonist that the original work has! Don't forget that the protagonist has unparalleled talent and relies purely on words. There are few magic arts that can fight across large realms, because no matter how sharp the knife is, your strength (mana) is only so much. Baoshu can clarify the eight postures that can be used to fight across realms. This kind of writing style, with all kinds of exaggerated pretensions like landslides and sky falling, shows how awesome the protagonist is, but even ten thousand sentences can't convince readers with just one sentence of the realistic setting of the original work. 4 Without adding master and blood according to talent, it is possible to rule out that the protagonist can become the Immortal Emperor without any problem. You have to say that kidney deficiency is another matter, but the protagonist is a native, unless you add some kind of reincarnation, and use the same face as Ye Fan, Huang, with some cheats that indicate that kidney deficiency is not a person. 5 The protagonist doesn't know how to pretend, so I will say two points. If the protagonist has something that can save his life, then he can directly talk to someone to talk to or fight. All the following plans to play against the loser will be a loss of status. The protagonist has no life-preserving items. The bloodline of a single Immortal King's parent and son is destined to become an emperor after at most five hundred years of the Supreme Curse. There was no need to cause trouble and reveal his identity five hundred years ago. Is there any incredible good thing that the protagonist has not seen in the fairyland? Just give me a hair, it will all be mine in five hundred years.

Will he definitely become the Immortal King? This is too awesome. The most awesome person in Immortal Ancient is probably the Little Immortal King.

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I remember that the Golden Goddess was outside, not in the restricted area at all. In the original text, I remember saying that when the Golden Goddess was beaten to death by Ye Hei, the Ancient Golden Emperor didn't even come out.

(First of all, I really don't know how to speak based on the atmosphere, and I have been scolded by many friends. I have no intention of provoking the original book and fans. What follows is what I want to say about the book. Please forgive me if it makes people angry. Thank you for not killing me. 😭) I have not read the entire Zhetian trilogy. I only watched the anime "Perfect" and "Zhetian" before reading the original work. In my opinion, the author's book starts very well with the natives who are the disciples of Emperor Huangtian, and he starts practicing from the earth. In my opinion, wouldn't it be good to let the protagonist start practicing on the earth to have some self-protection, and then go to Beidou to open up wasteland. Otherwise, can he still be allowed to practice in the cave with Ye Fan? Then follow the original stories. And they say that the Zhetian people only become Zhetian souls when they fight. In my opinion, isn't the protagonist very good? While I was watching, he was either fighting or on the way to a fight. And I saw that when they were in the ancient mine of Taichu, although the protagonist felt that he was carrying a treasure without knowing it, he was after all a person from the era of Emperor Huangtian. He didn't even have a childhood, let alone know anything about the world. But this is indeed a problem. It depends on how the author arranges it. I still like this book very much. I hope the author will update it more. I will definitely vote more and subscribe after it is released Please, as long as there are chapter updates, I will do anything 😭

The most outstanding heir of the Immortal King, can he kill the big moon and the little roc with one move, instead of fighting with a bunch of weaklings?

It seems to be a combination of ancient chaos method and secret realm method. Can we walk on the immortal road in the mortal world?

Why not heaven and earth?

The current pace is two chapters a day, and one chapter is about 2000-2500 words. If there are more subsequent chapters, the number of words will be increased according to the plot of the chapter. Currently, I plan to write it until the end of the Holy Ruins Chapter, which is a harem flow. There are currently three female protagonists. If there are high-pitched comments, you can consider adding more. Thank you for your support. Please vote 🙏🌹

None of the protagonists in the fan fiction can kill the Ji family.

Author, it is impossible for you to have dual Eternal Dao Fruit with a single secret realm and Immortal King bloodline. It's a bit difficult for you to cross two realms 🙂

The writing is good, don't worry about being picky, if you keep writing, people will appreciate it. There are so many people in the world, and it must be difficult to reconcile the different tastes.

Are there any immortals with beautiful legs in the Eternal Star Realm?

The author should not give up and keep writing. Listen to other people's opinions and adopt them. As long as you keep writing, half of the work will be done.

Don't write about indigenous people in your next book. No one really reads about indigenous people. Unless you want to generate electricity for love, just pretend that I didn't say anything, or if you don't write a fanfic, just make your own original one. It doesn't matter if you are indigenous.

It's rare that someone is willing to take Hua Yunfei with him. Chased 😃

There is a problem in the first few chapters. Isn't Huang a taboo? Even mentioning his name is not allowed. A little fox demon can transform into Luang. Even if it is an illusion, he can't bear the cause and effect.

I don't understand why Ji Zi Mi can increase combat power by eight times and the Ten Evil Treasures can't increase combat power by 16 times? The ten evil treasures next door have entered the divine forbidden realm in the realm of great power, and there is also the secret skill of the other side, the Emperor of Time, the 9th level of the saint, who killed the genius who had just entered the great saint.

I gave up after about 60 chapters. Generally speaking, there are advantages and disadvantages Advantages: 1. Writing about indigenous people, having my own ideas, and wanting to write a long-term novel 2. Not overpowering the protagonist, and not licking anyone Disadvantages: 1. It looks too AI, too embarrassing, especially those exaggerated modifiers (it is definitely written by a real person, but it is difficult to evaluate 😃, the author still deserves recognition) 2. The combat power is too much. It's not that the protagonist does not meet the combat power of Shuangheng Daoguo. It's just that in Zhetian, a cosmology that only allows 8 taboos before enlightenment, the protagonist is still too powerful 🙂. In this way, the plot will collapse too easily in the later period or you will not know how to continue writing about the protagonist's combat power 3. Some settings are not very good. For example, ① The author sets the law of covering the sky to be incomplete, which I think is wrong (because the existence of the Tianxin mark can show that the ten thousand ways are at least complete, but the origin of the nine heavens and ten earths is weak and there is no immortal substance) ② The protagonist tells the Golden Ancient Emperor that it is unreasonable to open the Sixth Secret Realm to become an immortal here. After all, before the Secret Realm method came out, there were immortals, and the Sixth Secret Realm is the foundation of Taoism. It is not necessary to open the Sixth Secret Realm to become an immortal or immortal king (because Ye Fan in the original book did not open the Sixth Secret Realm when he became a mortal immortal) ③ It is not a good place for the Golden Ancient Emperor to be born, because the road to becoming an immortal will be opened immediately. To deal with a little Karami like the protagonist, at most one clone will be born 4. The plot is too bland, at least as far as I can see, it doesn't feel satisfying at all. The author wanted to write about the growth of the protagonist's character and strength, but I still feel the same now. He is still relatively naive and does not have the courage to be a disciple of the Emperor of Heaven. (In this regard, the author can write the protagonist in the direction of the "Ten Crowns", at least in this aspect. The data is definitely good. After all, the courage of the "Emperor" is really too strong, and it is in line with the identity of the protagonist. Or you can refer to the growth history of Ye Fan in the original work. At least the period when Ye Fan changed into Ye Hei in the original work is very interesting) Finally, the author's writing is still very good. After all, he can step out and write novels, which is already very strong. I wish the author will get better and better.