Dragons: Lu Mingfei Recasts the Script

Creating original characters in fan fiction itself is risky, and what you write is not outstanding. I feel like I'm just a weird stitcher, and I'm not polite in what I write. I suggest you don't write about the original heroine below 🤐

To be honest, Lu Nuo and Lu Chen are very disliked in the fandom. Chen Wenwen didn't need to say more, she just treated Lu Mingfei as a fool. Many people don't like Nono either. Liu Miaomiao is actually pretty good, and Su Xiaoqiang is the most accepted in Shilan Sanmei.

We need more heroines and a harem😈

I want a harem😡I want a harem meow😡

Still Lu Xia Dejin 😍😍😍

There are too many personal settings, and it feels like I am no longer watching a Dragon Clan fan. There are more than a hundred chapters of the protagonist. The main targets in the early stage should be Xia Mi and Su Xiaoqiang, but every character has to be mixed in, making the plot very scattered. Each subplot is related to a different girl. The protagonist's combat power is also ridiculously suppressed, and he is still fighting for the fifth and sixth generations. Unless the self-created characters are well written, it will be difficult to have a sense of immersion, which will only make the readers feel more disconnected. Suggestion: The early plot can focus on Su and Xia, as well as the protagonist's increased combat power. In addition, more sugar can be added to the early plot, instead of constantly creating crises to keep readers excited and then depressed. Unfortunately, the author has written more than two hundred chapters and cannot change the way he writes it. I think it is a bit tasteless but it is a pity to abandon it. I hope I can write better and better in the future.

Is Chen Wenwen worthy? Why send something?

Just don't let Noono go Don't let Zero and Xiami go!

There must be Nuonuo, there are too few Lunuo

The plot settings are ingenious, but there is always a sense of fragmentation, a bit like a vulgar romance novel with the skin of a dragon character. The plot of the first one hundred chapters is very good, but there are too few exciting points, which makes it very tiring to watch. I just felt happy to come and watch He and the harem, but the plot turned out to be very depressing, with the protagonist using cheats but still being ruled by fate. The original novel is all about facing an ordinary black king in four or five years, and killing four major monarchs in the middle. This adds dimension to the worldview, which is very powerless to watch. Although I know that the ending may be good later, it will be very tiring to watch.

I don't understand why Lu Mingfei has Xia Mi as the heroine. There is basically no intersection between the two original works. There is no emotional interaction at all, so it is too outrageous to force an emotional line.

Don't want a harem, just have a single female protagonist, vote for Xia Ya

I want to see Lu Xia's sweet love

? ? ? ? ? ? Is this also a heroine?

Lu Ming must call him "Mom"?

Mai

Have you ever been a dragon? Just write, scribble some things randomly, and take it for granted.

Don't write about Chen Wenwen, she is too disgusting in the original novel

It's the first time I've seen so many heroines, fanfics

Why are so few people commenting?

Overall evaluation: The plot is unique and the emotional line is quite good.

Chen Wenwen……………………?

Good looking

I found that this author is a foot addict, and every female character in the book has an emphasis on the feet, and they are mentioned repeatedly 🤭

If you want to vote for a monthly ticket, you have to order other books

It's almost July, when will the new book be released? Or did you secretly open a trumpet account?