High Martial: When the Stars Ignite

I haven't touched the bag, but I'm giving you three investments.

Some thoughts on the creation of Cangkong's character: Cangkong is a good plug-in, but in recent chapters he has been helping the protagonist, from absorbing souls out of Star Fire City to conquering the blood wolves. I personally feel that Golden Finger appears too frequently, which greatly reduces Cang Kong's status. Cang Kong's rank should not be low based on the author's original creation, and his personality is not the one that has been protecting Shen Mo's growth. However, despite the frequent help, there is a conflict in the character structure before and after. So when it comes to Cang Kong's characterization, we need to consider the behaviors and motivations that fit Cang Kong's character. Character creation of Sister Cangkong: On the other hand, the character creation of Sister Cangkong is not particularly good. Several chapters have been introduced, just to portray Cangkong. Is it not easy? Her character has some conflicts with Sokong. In the end, I have three ideas. First: Cang Kong's character creation needs to be further refined, or the author can define Cang Kong's character and characteristics, depict behaviors that fit Cang Kong's character, and then promote the plot. Second: The role of Sister Cangkong should be separated from Cangkong soon? Better as soon as possible. If you can't grasp this character now, leave a clue and slowly shape it later. Third: If the author wants to take the path of Chuanxuan, the most important thing is to create the protagonist. After these few chapters, the protagonist is not very obvious, and there are some conflicts in the character. The protagonist's creation in the recent chapters seems childish, which is in great conflict with Shen Mo's analysis of the case and the character image created in the first few chapters. The above are personal suggestions. Just give the author a chance to read it. You should have your own ideas and plot lines. The whole book is still quite good after reading it. I feel that if I stick to it, the plot will not collapse and it will be a high-quality product. Come on!

The book will be released on March 25, and the monthly pass will come in April. Dear author, is your book signed directly? So strong!

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