Rebirth 08, from a Breakfast Shop to a Boss

See Chapter 7! You said that people who had opened chain stores before being reborn spent a lot of money to install surveillance cameras! It turns out something is really wrong and it's so complicated? !

As title. Can you write about business wars? Can there be less drama if you write it? It's not something that a cow like me can understand 😢 Or should we add some entertainment live broadcast? Never mind. Let's take a look first before talking.

Li Yang won't watch it anymore, just remember a handsome character that runs through it

A poor family travels far and wide, but a prosperous family stays in its place of origin!

Don't read the book yet, read the recommendations that will affect the follow-up, and pledge to post, there will be more updates after it is put on the shelves! !

After it was released, the storyline became more and more dull and the development was too slow. In this trend, I think it should be a barbaric development. Not to mention that 10 chapters will break 100 million, but 100 chapters will have to break 100 million anyway. You have been writing for so long and are still developing. Falling in love

The plot is a bit bland, and the few twists and turns are a bit cliche, but it is better than other stories. I hope to continue working hard💪😚

In fact, your novel writing is okay, but have you ever thought about why your grades are not good? What do readers of current online novels, especially male videos, want to read? It's fast-paced and emotionally intense What about yours? The pace is slow, the mood swings are average (although the writing is quite delicate, but online readers do not particularly care about this), and there are many life-oriented plots (it is not impossible to write, but the emotional drive of this type of plot needs to be stronger to make more people endure and continue watching) It is recommended that either the emotional plot be deleted, or the pace of this type of plot should be faster (just want to write this type of plot? Then fast forward and exit, have more transitions, or study plots with high emotional intensity)

It's really frustrating to read. A person running an urban novel has so many messes. I'm really convinced. Can't I write more normally? Even if you can solve it quickly, it just needs water and ink.

Old thing quick cut🙂

I'm not being disparaging, but starting a business in Hongcheng is really hard to do. Personally, I feel that there is a lot of resistance from all parties and there is no atmosphere. The locals should understand what I mean.