Conan: I Really Think Yoneka Town Is Paradise

There are no fancy gold fingers, just plain criminal investigation. The male protagonist also has a unique personality, and it's interesting to see him fall in love and dislike his subordinates. Come on, author

It's very good. It's the best Conan book in my mind in the more than ten years I've been reading it (from the perspective of both reasoning, plot and even emotion). If you have a rebuttal, please bring the title of your book. (Book shortage)

Posted a review. So far, this is my favorite way that Ke Tong, the protagonist, redeems the Moon Shadow case. Finally, I can see a story that is no longer the same brutal beating style to save people or hiding the murderer and being complicit in saving people.

I couldn't help but leave a message when I saw the restaurant chapter. I really like the author's handling of the emotional line, the pull of rejection or acceptance. Every situation is so precise that you can't be picky. Two gentle people, with subtle love and respect, exercising their free will and speaking with sincerity, discretion and sincerity. To enter the other person's life in this way, I can't imagine a more appropriate arrangement than this. (Especially not to mention that in the context of some other male protagonists of fan fiction, the author's portrayal of the male protagonist is superior to the evil man who objectifies women at every turn, preaches, is greasy, vulgar, commonplace, and has sexual fantasies about everything and even claims to be a fun person. This is really the best Conan fanfic I have ever seen. You can see the author's respect for the characters, the original work, the criminals, the victims, and even the judicial investigation in every detail. The author's respect for "people" exists from the beginning, even if it is just a story or a case, there is a reason behind every decision, and there is weight behind every conversation. To be honest, it's amazing to see such thoughtful articles, especially on this platform. Needless to say, Conan's original case is even more amazingly good. It's rare that it has no logical contradictions and is profound enough to be turned into a theatrical version. And I have to mention the author's treatment of Moon Shadow Island. The dialogue really shines. If it were dealt with by letting the murderer go or simply rudely scolding him like other stories, it wouldn't be impossible to be honest, but in comparison, it would be really vulgar. I saw some comments saying why the emotional line is so thin. It can be resolved in ten words whether to agree or reject. The author is simply using personal information. But to be honest, what's wrong with bringing in private goods? Isn't this the most original intention of the text creation platform? Some people want to say something, so they write. And because of our different life experiences, our perception of the world and a certain soul unexpectedly met one day, so we met. And if you don't feel anything after reading these words, I don't blame you or him, it's just that the fate has not yet arrived. But of course, the ideas that the author wants to convey are sometimes a bit inconsistent with the content and plot, but judging from the later development, there is indeed obvious progress. Maybe there is room for adjustment in the technique, but compared to the common starting point of literary poison, for me, this level of flaws is completely negligible! Overall, the writing is great, the subject matter is interesting, and the original case is really exciting! Come on!

I think it's pretty good. As for the inner drama that others have said, sometimes I think it's necessary to show the inner changes of the protagonist so that we can understand the protagonist more deeply. I think they may be talking about their inner complaints. There are indeed a lot of complaints in the first part, which I found a bit dazzling, so I just took a rough look at it, so I think it's okay and I can get through it. The later part is probably the original part, and there are a lot less complaints. I am very optimistic about the author's views and attitude towards originality, the romance part of the online novel, and respect for the original work. It's so interesting to me! Come on author! I hope you can continue to write based on your opinions, and I will fully support you!

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The plot is okay, but I feel like the author is too internally conflicted. This is the new book issue. If it becomes popular in the future, I'm really worried that the author will struggle to death.

Hey, hey, hey, everyone is scolding me for dragging other fans down, and I don't want to do that. In order to alleviate my sins, I decided to build a building here to collect the facts that I bullied other fans. Obviously there are a lot of people scolding me. I asked them where they scolded me, but no one was willing to answer me. It's too bad that you knew it but didn't tell me. I have no choice but to build my own building to collect the facts of other fans. Please point out the specific content of the article that downvotes other fans and explain clearly how to do so. More compensation will be added after confirmation~

Well, the author is right. It is not that the author is too malicious towards the original characters, but that the author has deified and beautified the Japanese police in his writing. Normal socialist Chinese people cannot imagine what kind of country Japan is like an eroded wound.

I can't stand it anymore in the middle. There are too many complaints about the police and the original case. The protagonist seems to be talking about it all the time. If you really feel that the original case has a lot of loopholes, you don't have to write it. 60% Of one chapter is complaining. I'm really tired of reading it.

I saw a bunch of people in front of me saying things like "suppressing other fans"... In fact, it feels good, because the author is obviously a fan of the original comics and is an orthodox fan. He thinks that it is normal for some fans to be seriously OOC and dissatisfied... Although Conan is suspected of being a romantic comedy, it is essentially a mystery comic. If you read too many novels that are full of characters and then stare at the original characters, you will get tired of it... It is precisely because the author himself does not agree with this writing style that he tried to use a different plot arrangement in this novel. This is not a boomerang, nor is it a means to attract attention. The idea of ​​"trampling one and holding one" is based on the premise that the object of "trampling" is almost the same as the object of praise and no one is better than anyone else. However, for fans of the original work, the trend of kicking Conan and punching the winery and recruiting people into the harem is not acceptable, because they read the fandom not just for the "fun" but also for the taste of the "original". If "restoration" is used as the standard, this way of writing is not good enough. If "cool" is used as the standard, then the above-mentioned fandoms do have their own advantages, but the author does not use this standard to judge, and he probably does not use this standard when reading the article. Then this conclusion can only be said to be caused by "different judging standards", and it cannot be called "dislike one and praise one". If someone thinks this is a criticism, it means that he thinks that kind of writing is very good and likes that type... But if this is the case, are this type of readers really the audience of this novel? Possibly, but it would be quite different from the author's own views. Maybe that's not the case. Is it just that such content alone in the text makes people uncomfortable? This is someone's fault. It can be regarded as "private goods", but shouldn't the complaints about [common routines] be the point of laughter? () Ke Tong's common problem will be complained about. Compared with most fans who write like this, it is more OOC and deviates from the spirit of the original work. It has something to do with the core, but not many of them are well written. Even if the characters are well established, the focus is generally not on the reasoning itself. For original fans, especially reasoning fans, it's okay to complain... And I looked through the comment area, and that's it. There are a lot of complaints in the first part. If the beginning is not part of the main drama, it would not conflict with the overall style to say a few more words in a relaxed style of writing... There are not many chapters, so I just mentioned a few more words at the beginning of the chapter. This kind of complaints can only be placed at the end of the opening. It's appropriate () The dozens of chapters of Qidian's novel can only be considered early stage, and it's not from a certain river next door. In fact, there aren't many, and it's not to the point of "significant complaints," let alone "the plot can't unfold without complaints." Free chapters don't cost money, so they're not considered valuable. Some people may not like the setting of "Tucao Yong". Personally, I like to watch a lot of psychological activities, which gives people a vivid and alive atmosphere. This may be because I am also a person with rich psychological activities. All in all, the author's writing is quite good. I like a rigorous but thoughtful person who has his own ideas. Come on.

There will definitely be a female protagonist. Since it is labeled as a single female protagonist and it is still a Conan fan, falling in love is an important part that cannot be missed. Because it is a Conan fanfic, and I also want to include original cases, so the length must not be short. So before the female protagonist appears, I will definitely establish the role of the male protagonist, and then I can fall in love. To sum up, the heroine will not appear very early (but judging from the proportion of the whole text, it will definitely not be too late), so there will be no emotional drama related to the protagonist in the short term. Besides, we are all fans of Conan, and I respect the original painting style so much. If I don't play Green Plum from the Sky, how can I live up to that damn old thief? That's all, no spoilers. Besides, the heroine will appear later, so you can also play a little game of guessing the heroine.

I really like the author's writing style of making jokes and jokes and being friendly to the people. Maybe it's because I'm older. I really can't stand those pretentious, self-righteous and arrogant people. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

The character pictures I found online are quite nice.

The bad thing about Conan is not that the crime rate in Yoneka Town is high. It's because their reasons for killing people are too outrageous and random. For example, which one is more elegant, Tai Chi or fishing~ Therefore, the biggest cheat for the protagonists of Conan fandom is nothing else, but that there will be no murders that are not in the original work Otherwise, many protagonists who have harems will cause the little angels in the original work to directly become black. He had a quarrel with the shop assistant on the roadside, and he had a quarrel with his family. It is possible that his parents after reincarnation want to kill him. This kind of oppression of the man-made version of death is the scary thing. _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

There are too many inner complaints. If I didn't have inner complaints, this book would be among the top three Conan fandoms I've read. The inner complaints made me want to give up the book.

There are a lot of useless ramblings, just keep the word count down, right?

. . . . I really feel that the author is malicious towards the original characters. I know how outrageous the original characters are, and I also know that these have become the characteristics of the original work. But just scolding and punishing without any improvement, the original work is not good, you can do it as a fan author, and you are not Gosho Aoyama. You can't change it. This is objectively a kind of malice and a way to highlight the protagonist's performance.

First of all, I am just out of curiosity. I feel from the novel that the author has a bad feeling for Xiaolan?

I really like the plot, but as others have said, the author is too internally conflicted and easily gets emotional.

Psychological description, too many complaints

I feel like it's a bit watery. The author's complaints are a bit too much.

I have read about ten chapters so far. How should I put it? The character of the protagonist is good and I agree with the author's concept, but the writing technique is just not to my liking. The specific manifestation is that the frequent switching of perspectives makes the plot discontinuous and compact, giving it a feeling of outline writing; secondly, the frequent output of personal emotions in the text affects the perception.

The front is pretty good, but what are the last few dozen pictures? There is no story at all and all you complain about is just that little thing. No matter how many times you complain, it's not enough. I know what you are going to complain about without even looking at it. Isn't it enough to tell the protagonist's story well? Some of the original writings are also quite good. If I don't cut it in the end, I'm going to abandon the book 😡😡😡

I have been complaining about it all the time, and now I am still heartbroken and thinking about it for a long time. After reading it for a long time, I really get tired of aesthetics. The more you go to the back, the more it becomes more and more. Moreover, the protagonist is basically a bystander now, so I am heartbroken and thinking about it all the time. I really want to give up the book, but I have ordered all the books and I am reluctant to part with it.

It's a bit interesting. It's rare to see a fan author who can write interesting stories about investigating crimes. Personally, I prefer semi-original stories with their own main lines The protagonist is also quite to my liking. Have your own ideas and bottom line, and face yourself as a living person living here, instead of relying on the original world line that you have memorized inexplicably. When you use the strategy machine that treats the original characters as NPCs, if you know some of the original information, you can use it.

I've only read a dozen chapters and I'm still reading. But this inner drama is weird and I'm still getting used to it 😂😂 I've read very few books and it's the first time I've seen it.

Ah... I need to re-evaluate whether it's worth continuing to watch.

When will we be able to enter the main story? Recently, a large section has been deleted, but it has no effect. She has not been promoted, and there has been no progress. Is Noriko Tsukiyama really a human being? I can't see the interesting puzzles of the case, nor can I see any normal people, no love, no marriage, nothing but complaints, nothing but repetitions, and the protagonist has been scolded and criticized recently. It is obviously the criminal police department that has a bigger problem, a corrupt department, and a mentally retarded forensic doctor. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? He just wants to live and find a place to retire. Why does he have to fight with the winery on the front line? The one who is facing the winery is FBI cia. The protagonist has a team of any level, so what's the point of solving the case? What's needed to deal with the winery is heavy firepower, and what's needed is to find the lair. There are spies inside. Will those who traveled through time know who Rum is? Even if you really catch him, you still can't get the information? The main character's department can't even compete with the Lupine team. It's really meaningless. It's better to speed up the promotion, get the rights and equipment, really kill the winery, and achieve the white horse position with the performance. Now the running account is very boring. Life is already tiring, so read a book and relax. , The result is that the case is not a case, daily life is not daily life, love is not love, workplace is not workplace, everyone is drunk and I am awake alone. The protagonist is the only one with intelligence in the whole world, and the others are the settings of the will of the universe. In the end, it is useful. If you can't figure out how to play in a team, then what else is there to do?

Among all the Conan fans I have read, he is the only one who can write about the case wonderfully, whether it is original or original. The daily writing is also quite interesting, and it's really refreshing to read (I don't know why some people say it's abrupt and tiring). Two monthly votes have been cast. Come on, the author.