Douluo: Lord of the Star Palace Across Yuhao

Author, don't put Wang Yan and Han Ruoruo together. To be honest, although Wang Yan's level of knowledge is higher than that of master Yu Xiaogang, he is more worthy of the title of master. But to be honest, Wang Yan's talent is really not worthy of Han Ruoruo. In the original work, her character is even more unworthy of Han Ruoruo

The protagonist must not ask for a dog leash 🤫

1 As a time traveler, the protagonist is more like a description of an indigenous person who knows the plot. He is innocent, shy, embarrassed, scratches his head, extremely lacks love, always considers others, gives without reason, and is easy to describe interactions with others. It is easy to believe others in one or two sentences. For example, the Snow Emperor takes the protagonist to the phoenix skeleton. 2 The Three Houses of Golden Finger are written in a vague and vague way, and they appear quite frequently. And the performance is also very strange, and the benefits obtained are not clearly stated (the same is true when obtaining the soul ring). I often feel like watching it for a long time. 3 The position is not clear enough. Although it is very vulgar to say so, this is how Douluo fans are. It is best to clearly state your side or thoughts at the beginning. It is okay for you to get close to Shrek for the sake of benefits, but you do not make it clear and are stupid because Wang Dong likes you. You face The other women have a guilty conscience, and there is no additional relationship between the two. This kind of performance combined with the protagonist's personality makes people feel very much like Huo Yuhao in the original text. He hated the Dai family in the early stage, but was brainwashed and reconciled later → turned against others in the early stage, and was slowly drawn into Tang San's camp. 4 The character I mentioned at the beginning is a bit dedicated, or a bit of a nanny. If you don't join the Tang Sect, does Beibei Tangya have anything to do with you? He didn't even know the elixir and didn't give it to him, so he forced it on him. What's more, Xu Sanshi and Jiang Nannan have to get involved if they have anything to do. Jiang's reputation is not very good. Since you don't plan to recycle them second-hand, it's fine. But you still insisted on bringing the two together, and even wrote several chapters about how the two fell in love and reconciled. I think the fans are here to see this for CP? Is this different from the plot of Qiankun Asking the Valley of Love? Even if you write like this, it doesn't matter if you write it in one stroke. It's like writing it as a group portrait. I guess the rest of the cp regrets will have to be made up for later, but this is not compensation. Dou Er is full of disgusting plots. It's uncomfortable for you to worry so much and only show it to me, because the original plot of these two people is too difficult to comment on and the prototype is still two men. 5 The character creation problem is probably a newbie, which is not surprising. However, the previous interactions with Tianmeng Ice Emperor are really written with a strong otaku feel (mainly because they have not known each other for a long time, and the protagonist does not see any strong charm, and behaves too familiar and like a childhood sweetheart). I quit awkwardly several times and did not dare to click in. You can see it from the perspective of the reader yourself. The author has written nearly one million words, which is quite impressive. I also admire the author very much. This is the first time I have typed so many words, and I hope you can write better and better in the future. The poisonous part of this book is okay, but the first few points really stopped me from persisting. 😭

Why not go to Shrek? Apart from anything else, Shrek's resources are not to be boasted, nor is the number one in the mainland to be boasted. Without the Wuhun Palace to awaken martial souls for civilians, and most civilians cannot become soul masters, Shrek has the most geniuses, ranking first in the entire Douluo Continent. Except for a few talents from the Sun Moon Empire, the Noumenon Sect and other countries, almost all of them have entered Shrek, especially the inner court. There is a gathering of talents, and the ones with the lowest talents are all in the top 10 or even the top 5 of the academy. There are countless training resources and various information on the training environment. They can even raise soul beasts in the academy, which lasts for ten thousand years. Don't be misled by a certain week. She is purely uneducated. In addition, her good face is noticed by her awesome husband. When her cultivation is low, she can't be messed with. As for her, when she was high in cultivation, there was no need to offend a high-ranking Soul Douluo and Shrek Soul Guidance Department for such a thing. From Wang Yan and his later extreme single soldiers, it can be seen that Shrek's spiritual level is not low, even ridiculously high. When it comes to facing group attacks, disguises, infiltration, etc., They are all taught by the Ultimate Individual Soldier Plan, which shows that Shrek Academy is really not weak in this aspect. It can be said that, except for the soul guide, if any project of the Ultimate Individual Soldier Plan is put to the outside world, it is basically a matter of fighting for the top. It is not as good as specializing in a top sect in one aspect, but also the number one person among them. And what about a woman named Zhou? She is not even as good as the master named Yu from ten thousand years ago. She is just limited by the environment and can only run, but she still knows how to distribute the weight. After running, she also has someone take a medicinal bath? One week, I didn't think about anything. I just forced people to run with the same weight. I didn't consider the differences in martial arts or physical fitness at all. In the end, I just asked a soul master to do a group treatment. What the hell? A certain beauty no longer uses this kind of cultivation method after entering Lanba Academy. Isn't the mimetic environment delicious? And what about a certain week? I guess I just didn't have the real talent to learn. I just studied blindly after reading some records. I didn't learn thoroughly, so I just tried to save trouble. Things that Master Jade didn't use when she had a good environment were picked up and used by her ten thousand years later. The key is that she still used them blindly.

I feel like it would be better to have a single female protagonist, Snow Emperor.

I've invested, don't be a eunuch, bro.

What are you planning? Of course I know the author said it was easier to write like this. Also to make some money. So I recommend using him as a guide if you are watching an anime fan for the first time or if you have watched a lot of fans break up.

Go to Shrek, Riri, and various fans of the original body 😰

Little Huo Niang

Come on, stop being a eunuch

Yuhao

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