Jiutai Daotu

Why don't you write the Xian Qin series? In fact, the setting of your Xian Qin series is very good, but sometimes the storyline is not polished well. Another thing is that there are too many settings such as exercises, which is too annoying. People read novels for the content of the characters, not for you to list a bunch of names of exercises.

It felt like there would be too much stuff with that multiple protagonists. It is still recommended that most of the fog should be subtracted. After reading it for so many years, I have been urged to read a lot of new books, so I supported it by voting for it monthly.

Let's change the title of the book back. Since "The God's Seat of Paths" is not very good, we can change it to "The God's Seat of Paths". After all, there are many paths, but God's Seat is unique. It can be used throughout the whole book. No matter how you write it, it will probably not deviate from the theme. "The Traveler Will Not Die by Cause and Effect" is a messy title. It does not conform to the author's previous style and is difficult to remember. If you look at those famous books, such as Zhu Xian, Perfect World, Seeking Demons, etc., They are not named like this. Or in the future, if the author lets the protagonist join a certain powerful sect, it would be fine to use the name of the sect as the title of the book. An easy-to-remember title such as Taiyi Taiyi would also be good.

I hope God will bless me, and I hope everyone will like my book!

At once. . . Don't worry about Jiutai. This thing has too many restrictions. Many times it becomes cumbersome to make up the number nine. In other words, this thing should not be something that low-level monks should think about. The intention is too high and it is really not suitable for low-level people. Looking back on the road alone, in the early stage, you just use whatever you get. Even after building the foundation, there are not many things, and the restrictions are also within the Five Elements. It's really not suitable to go out if you really give up or postpone the wine. Finally. . . Are you really not considering a Four Seas Traveling Sect or a plane merchant type? I really want to see them fighting life and death and watching the world, and I can also incorporate a little bit of Gou Daoliu's writing style into it. Come on, I hope the next one will be better.

1. Stop writing about Xian Qin. Really, really stop writing about Xian Qin. Stop excerpting the various settings of the Xian Qin universe that you wrote yourself, the various sects, long-sentence exercises, and various magic weapons and creatures. You have been copying them for so many years (and you are copying them too) and everyone is tired of reading them... 2. Seal all the fixed sentences stored in the computer, such as character descriptions and scenery descriptions, and do not use them. Copying the fixed description paragraphs you have written is also copying. If you copy, you will not be able to write novels... 3. I feel like I have never been able to get out of the shadow of the late stage of Dao Xing Xing. I felt good in the first hundred chapters, but the more I wrote, the more and more it collapsed. It began to collapse from a hodgepodge of various skills, and began to collapse as the combat power became higher and higher. From the collapse of a forest and a stream, to the collapse of a mountain, to the collapse of a river, to the collapse of a city, to the collapse of a country, to the collapse of a continent, to the collapse of the starry sky, and the universe. If it is a linear curve, it would be okay, but it is an exponential curve. The more the combat power is written, the more it collapses. In the end, the plot is a complete mess... 4. Finally, judging from the introduction, this book is probably not very pleasing. The various systems, probably the seven systems in the seven universes, are inherently complicated and strange, and then promote the tendency of collapse, so it is difficult to be optimistic about the seven universes. How many names of people, places, treasures, skills, and methods will be listed by then... It can easily become a hodgepodge, and the combat power will collapse quickly.

The Xianqin system is the only one among the Xianxia novels I have read, and the 99 secret methods of Xianqin are even more amazing. But the protagonist cannot fall into these secrets, otherwise he will become homogeneous. Just like when I played The Witcher 3, after completing it once, I knew where to find good equipment and where to avoid detours. Then the second brush may be interesting, but the third brush will be very boring, and it will become a pure collection game. Now that the fog is heavy, it's like playing through a game several times. Just writing a book will soon turn into a collecting game. The protagonist's story is not important, it seems that collecting the secrets of Xian Qin is the main line. And Dao Xing Alone is infinitely touching, such as Luo Li's several death curses to bid farewell to friends, Luo Xin, and Fang Yingxue. Although many years have passed, I still think of a young man named Luo Li who recited the Rebirth Mantra for his lover. In addition to the excitement of the plot, the many confrontations between Luo Li and Fan Wujie are also among the most exciting episodes of fighting in Xianxia novels. Jin Dan Dabi and the two tried their best to go from virtual fighting to reality. In the end, Xubu stole the Taoist Dharma. It was a stroke of genius. Then when 19 comes to attack Hunyuan Sect, we are just ordinary people, only looking for ourselves. This is one of the best fighting scenes I have ever seen. After arriving in Taiyi, it was obvious that Wu Da's talents were exhausted. Like Li Changshengsheng Tuotuo, he is a replica of Fan Wujie, but he does not have the hateful, cute and funny feeling of Fan Wujie. It was okay in the early days, but ever since the One Yuan Nine Daoxuan Universe was created, the sense of collecting has been extremely strong. It's not like practicing, just pure collecting. There is no feeling of becoming stronger. Unlike the Five Hunyuan Techniques, Luo Li Zhongsheng Lin only had a few clones of Xiaobai and Xiaohong left after practicing, and only one big move was left in Liulihai and Tongtian Peak. There is a very strong protagonist who is progressing and getting stronger. And Ye Jiangchuan gives people the impression that he is strong because of the skills he has collected, not because the protagonist is strong. The protagonist can win because he has more extraordinary swordsmanship and spells than others, not because he practices better than others. The reason for killing everyone in the later stage is because the Zhuxian Sword Formation is a powerful technique, not because the protagonist has practiced it well.

This... I didn't even understand the introduction 🥵

I have basically read all of your books. Have you ever considered doing subtraction? In this era of fast food culture, the more complicated the setting, the better, but just right.

The author can write classical fairy tales, but don't be too imaginative 😭

As the title says, I am very disappointed and have no desire to continue reading. The protagonist does not have a lofty goal and just goes with the flow. There is no problem with this. There are many systems and a lot of writing is spent on the protagonist, the supporting characters, and the passers-by. The road is infinite, why don't you write down the instructions for renaming all the roads? The battles are all concepts in seconds, and the cultivation is of no use. The summary is that there is no main plot, various explanations, and no battles. It is difficult to watch and very boring.

A good book about spelling, the path of Cthulhu, the techniques for cultivating the realm of immortality, and the Kingdom of God in Western Fantasy

I'm confused by this introduction, it's so confusing

There are too many settings and too much information. The author should do some subtraction.

Is this Wuling Cult plot too intellectually depressing? People leave it to you to clean up your mess and then say that everyone has forgotten? So what do you, the Public Security Bureau, do for food? Isn't this a big deal?

The name was changed. . . . Do you want to stop thinking about it?

In fact, 72 caves, one book and one cave, are enough for you to write until you die. Xian Ao corresponds to the world of Pangu, and Dao Duxing corresponds to the world of Taichu. I can't remember the other ones I've written about. Since modification is not possible, the mystery of digging deep into the cave is also a system that can expand a lot of content.

I haven't read it since Chapter 40. It's too boring. There are all kinds of messy systems. Complaining about data is not an introduction to game equipment. Nowadays, the introduction of game equipment also needs to be enhanced with PS.

A lot of repeated trash talk, just like the sequel to Journey to the West

The book "Walking Alone" is so good, but all future books are not good. Personal feeling

Didn't it say it must be in July?

I've already voted for the monthly vote, so let's add some jing.

Two numbers will chase you at the same time and you will get a monthly ticket. Can you add some sperm?

I haven't read a word of this book and found it to be finished. The author needs to settle down, live out his second life, and don't rush to write a new book.

In fact, you can write it from the side of Xu Ni, and write an anti-routine story ps: Is Xu Ni an experimental product of the fairy clan?

I hope the author's book will achieve greater success.

I thought that Ancient Red Top had the fewest words, but it turned out to be refreshed this time.

The author has written more than a dozen books, most of which are bad, but at my peak, I think he has written the best book!

You can write about it with Wang Yangming or Old Man Sword as the protagonist, or you can write about the story of the five sword sects after they fly to the high latitude universe.

I just saw that you started the book yesterday. I came back from work today and saw that it is finished. .