Warhammer: the Empire of Man Descends from the Stars

The clouds hammer the clouds and the stars are so rubbish.

Let me tell you my personal views on this book. In terms of writing style, it is harmless except for a few typos. But from the setting point of view, it will kill you. Warhammer hasn't appeared much yet. Let's briefly talk about the setting issues that emerged from the stars: 1. Ring World. Ring World is built around the planet. For Stars players, it's arsenic mixed with gut grass and crane crown red. Just look at the comment area to see how exciting it is. 2. Webway and Stargate. The performance of the Ancient Sage Webway is closer to the small channels of the Harbint Unified Planet State, but it can open doors everywhere in the galaxy. For example, some Eldar are chopping corn on the earth and saying that chaos is the enemy. The star gate is similar to Doraemon's arbitrary gate, but it can only be connected between gates, and who can pass through can be controlled. 3. Army. Stars players have always recognized that the Stars Army is for children, but this is based on the Stars Fleet's 100% air supremacy. When encountering the Shield Fortress ball, you still have to send Army soldiers without relying on the Colossus. But how incredible is the Army of the Stars? The veterans of the giant zombie band went up and blew up the satellite directly, and this was only the second-level unit, and there was a first-level unit above it. The very strong Azhan worms push the anti-gravity level four armor buildings of the stars like pushing blocks. No matter how you look at it, the Astartes cannot defeat these soldiers, not to mention the even more incredible mod army. And I personally think the biggest problem with the author's setting is that this is a late-stage empire that has defeated natural disasters. Generally, the default is to complete the technology and enter the cycle. In the later period, even if the empire was in trouble and couldn't get the dragon scale armor, it still had the guarantee of neutron armor. This thing is different from the water droplets of the Trisolaran. The water droplets are just pasted with a layer of atoms, but this is battleship armor. Converted to Warhammer, it's a well-preserved Golden Age regime. This still does not take into account the creation of the universe, which rapes the law of conservation of mass and energy and tramples on the laws of mathematics. This thing refers to the ancient saints or star gods. And the Xinghai Tianpu above this. If the author did not choose Fallen Empire to start, the decision would not be as big as it is now.

Preface: When writing a fanfic, you need to weigh the two fan bases, making it seem like you are not favoring either the stars or 40k. However, the story as written was such that the stars were set very weakly in the first eight or nine chapters, and it was obvious that they wanted to give the stars 40k. The first story event, the battle between the Astartes controlled by the protagonist and the Human Empire, does not describe the themes of sacrifice and sacrifice that are mainly described in 40k. It is just a one-sided massacre without any meaning. You can't see how this event will move you. It feels like giving 40k to the stars. This leads to the fact that it is neither biased in favor of Stellaris nor Warhammer 40k, which is incredible. As for the specific settings, to put it simply, the setting chapters in the first eight chapters contain a large number of settings that have not been approved by the readers. 1. Establish a female genetic body. But don't add that they have a relationship with the protagonist, like it, etc., Because this is the Primarch, and behind each one there is actually a certain number of independent fan bases. You can copy the original work exactly, or you can completely change your personality. You must not have an affair with the protagonist, otherwise you will naturally lose empathy for the original gene, which will make people feel fake. Just like if you write about an ordinary person who picked up 10,000 yuan on the ground, no one will find it unpleasant. If you write about an ordinary person who picked up 1 million on the ground, and then spends it how he wants and how he enjoys it, then the readers will have to ask you why. 2. The protagonist must assume the identity of human emperor. This is the Emperor of Mankind. Every word and action he makes must conform to the corresponding identity. Or he must at least obtain the reader's permission once, so that he can make the following decisions, such as not cooperating with the Human Empire. There is a justifiable reason for his actions. Returning to the identity of the protagonist, what kind of person is he? There is no way for people to acquire incredible abilities, power, property, etc., And then treat the world as a game. Online novels must write the protagonist as such a person. However, because there is another human emperor as a comparison, the protagonist is completely unlike a human being who is responsible for the future of a race. He is helpless, infinitely cruel, and full of love for mankind. 3. Xiao Hui. The question is still the same. Here Xiao Hui actually represents the protagonist's woman, a well-educated, courteous, gentle, but extremely powerful person with extraordinary strength. You can think about it with your head, and there will definitely be another relationship. Then the question is very simple, why? Summary: You need to let as many readers as possible allow your protagonist to do something.

Is the author Yun? Whose star materialism bans artificial intelligence?

Stars is full of technology and can be damaged by war hammers. It's really awkward for those who have played Stellaris. If you haven't played Stellaris, you can still read it, but this name attracts people who want Stellaris. The starting combat power is too weak. Why don't you? For example, Stars has just entered Warhammer at the beginning of the game😅 A fallen empire is described like a native of Stars who has just ascended to heaven😅😅😅 Except for the giant battleship, the rest of this fallen empire is really no different from the natives.

This shows that if you set the protagonist's power to the Star Empire that has just started, there will be no problem. Unfortunately, it is not the case. It is even more humorous to play gang-hopping with the Empire later and get jumped on the ship. The most important thing is that since it is set to the Fallen Empire, your real opponents should be the Chaos Spare Ribs, the Tyranids and the Complete Star Gods, rather than catching an empire to fight to the death.

🙄Is this the strength of the Emperor of Stars? How can this be compared with Huangpizi? Huangpizi has its own special effects and is instantly better. You have written so many buffs but you still don't see anything special about the Emperor of the Stars. No wonder he is called a fake emperor.

It's really funny, you are already in the late game. The water drop two-way foil cannot be placed on the countertop at all.

I saw Chapter 8. Has the author ever played Stellaris? Are you going around the world and building around the earth? It's still the matryoshka ring in the giant structure. You can later explain that the ring world in the game is built around the planet! Can't you tell the difference between stars and planets, or are they just clouds?

I haven't played Stellaris for a long time, but I feel like you're flying in Stellaris. Playing in Warhammer World, within the space of physical laws, you're beating everything in the real world. A beating in the true sense of the word. The textual definition of "extremely strong" is twisting the laws of physics with your bare hands. What are the laws of physics? The simplest are the four basic powers. I doubt whether the Ancient Sages and Star Gods in Warhammer can do this. To put it more seriously, everyone has proven the Tao with strength. Are you still playing house in Warhammer?

Regarding the stars, the author is just a cloud. I don't know much about Warhammer, so I don't know if it's true.

The picture in the picture is the official setting picture, the Burning Sky Divine Soldiers. The planet next to the small picture of the Divine Soldiers in the left column is Mars. The major axis is set to be about 700,000 kilometers, which is half the diameter of the sun

The author is a Nebula player, and it feels like a game I have never played before. Ring World actually revolves around planets, awesome! (Shouldn't it be around a star?) The Fallen Empire is still operating cruisers and frigates, that's awesome! (I remember that the Fallen Cannon Fodder Battleship is a "battlecruiser", a unified battleship of battleships and below) It is awesome to start factory production and actually require the protagonist to come and do it himself. . . The Sky Castle of the Fallen Empire took half a month to produce a battleship. Note that it is a battleship, not a battlecruiser. Father, I remember there is no such thing as a dreadnought Battlecruiser Titan super flagship The back is a private one Battle Fortress War Moon Mobile Battle Star These

The tens of thousands of kilometers of "Ring the World" around the sun 😜 The most powerful in the funny world

First of all, the protagonist is stupid, writing cautiously, and at the same time slaps himself in the face like crazy. Obviously you can wash the floor, but the protagonist prefers to join gangs. While saying that his power is not as good as a fraction of the power of the Warhammer Empire, he also frantically lets his subordinates go out to show off their faces. You want to say that the protagonist's men were crushed every time, but in the end, the first time they faced Tzeentch, they were almost wiped out. And the protagonist always loves to take risks, and the protagonist's subordinates also like to show off their faces. Being fooled again and again and exposed again and again. Then the protagonist and his subordinates completely forgot about the caution they once said. Each time, a group of men will die, or the protagonist will be trapped, tricked, and tormented before giving up. Lao Ma can record evidence, but the protagonist can't? Lao Ma can provide evidence, but the protagonist can't? (If you insist on talking about the camp issue, then Lao Ma is almost labeled as the first sinner of the All-Genome Primarch in the book. This can be cleared up with evidence. Why can't the protagonist?) You want the protagonist to accompany you on a secret infiltration that is like giving away your life, and be trapped in the next ten years? When you were trapped, did you think of using Gray Wind to activate Wushuang? It was like I was at a disadvantage before I remembered that I could use deus ex machina. It's a big departure The setting is very flawed! The fighting power of the stars is so overwhelming that it makes people anxious. The IQ is often dropped, and the suffocation operation is often difficult to understand. I suspect that the author is forcing the protagonist to constantly find obstacles.

The content written by the author gives me the same feeling as if I have never played Stellaris. The protagonist is still corrupted. Except for the fact that it is a bit megastructure, it is similar to Corruption. It's not that I look down on Hammer's technology. After all, there are subspace jump gangs. Space warriors do need it, but you are a bastard in Stellaris. The Primarchs are not as good as the psionic soldiers. I don't think an army composed of so-called Primarchs can beat the psionic soldiers. In a battle, you don't need to arc across half the galaxy in seconds. The opponent can also rely on the dragon scale armor to kill the opponent. You also need to have jumpers for the opponent. Opportunity, I'm afraid of the stupid Hammer Universe, and they also deliberately suppress the protagonist's combat power. The 1400-year cycle is not running at all. It is better not to make this 1400-year setting, and Ji Fei has not changed it now. It is really inferior to Ling Fei. Your protagonist Ling Fei relies on that. There are dozens of traits, not to mention the toughness of the four vendors to save their lives. Just to cater to the hammer, I have to get a Primarch, which is not a hard attack. Of course, if the author thinks that the Primarch of the Hammer is indeed better than the Army of the Stars, I didn't say it. In the author's opinion, it has strengthened the protagonist.

Chapter 1 Traveling through the Warhammer Undernest, but with the power of the console Chapter 2 Pioneer? Zero! Chapter 3: Heart is better than matter, extraordinary and holy Chapter 4: Why do they call me Alpha+? Chapter 5 Meteor Shower? No! It's the Extermination Order Chapter 6 Heritage of Civilization, Miniature Galaxy Chapter 7 Farming and Exploding Soldiers, Arc Red Armor Battles in the Sea Chapter 8 I want to overturn this world! Chapter 9 The Five Gods of the Void Realm? "~" Key awakens Chapter 10 invincible Chapter 11 Restart of gw? Let's start the ironman gear again! Chapter 12: United as one, technology supreme Chapter 13: The Guardians of the Galaxy sit up in shock, competing in the galaxy for another year Chapter 14: Both civil and military, the creation of the universe and the punishment of heaven is coming Chapter 15: Total War, am I King Xuan of Qi? Chapter 16: The fugue is too imaginary, and the terminal crisis is beginning to appear Chapter 17: Why did the insect swarm start fighting on its own? Chapter 18: High-dimensional invasion, five gods go to the toilet Chapter 19: It's too late, organism Chapter 20: Done Chapter 21: Love and Peace

To be honest, I was a little confused when I saw the author also playing Jump Gang. Who in Stars would use resources to create an army? Everyone is a precious resource. Land warfare is worse than using robots. Isn't this more efficient than space warriors? It's not like there is no AI, let alone Warhammer, a shitty universe, where there are no pure human beings at all. You can use neutrons to kill them all. In addition, the galaxy is large enough, which makes it even more obvious that your creation of space warriors is a waste of important resources such as population.

The plot is a bit unacceptable🤦 Let's write about the arrogance of the human empire. But the human empire of the stars is even more arrogant. It can't help humans, it can't help the emperor. Why did you travel to the past? In the past, it was just to destroy the original plot and follow what your author wrote? Watching fandom is not about what you made up.

The protagonist is a bit pretentious. Since he doesn't want peace, he returns the whole envoy and uses some dirty tricks. And there are so many chapters, so the progress is a bit slow.

In fact, not to mention the settings of Warhammer and Stars, he even messed up his own settings. I mentioned earlier that the level of genetic warriors is a little higher than that of the Forbidden Army. Later, there were 200,000 genetic warriors who almost overturned when they defeated the Wolf King. I want to know, does the Wolf King himself know that he can defeat 200,000 Imperial Army? 😰

If you are afraid of losing your combat power, you can start from scratch and climb up the technology of the stars step by step If you want to be invincible, then just push cool articles and portray more soldiers You want and want to be born, but the result is a mess You can only show it to Yun, and you are not a fan. You can't watch it without the settings of the battlefield and stars in your mind. Anyone who understands both of them and doesn't run away after reading ten or twenty chapters is considered Shennong.

No, your star-studded human empire is actually afraid of the Necron? After all, it's the late stage of Qunxing, isn't it comparing itself to a fallen empire? In comparison, aren't the Necron just a roadside person? Is there any need to be afraid of it? The Colossus opened directly above its head and blasted the tomb world with one shot, not to mention what dimension their pyramid was hiding in. . . The Fallen Empire has dimensional technology, let alone the Brilliant Star Map, which is rubbish and can slowly blow up stars over hundreds of years. This efficiency would make me laughable. If Warhammer is a cesspit, everyone is swimming in it. Those stars are in the kickboxing gym. They don't have any ability. They can't even serve food on the table.

Has the protagonist's mind been thrown into subspace? The Bull Demon's Warhammer is here to start a war with the whole world. He fights every one he sees. In the setting, he used the MOD to ascend and successfully completed the technology cycle and had a lot of relics. As a result, everything in the plot was defeated and the Empire of the Stars was completely embarrassed. And what about the natural disaster ascension route in the stars? Was it eaten by the author? Even if there are only a few galaxies left in the military disaster, they can destroy the galaxy in a short time. Fighting subspace is even more specialized in martial arts. The cultural disaster is even more unnatural. If you change the physical laws of the real world at will, all the four Star God vendors will have to stay in the real world. Why are the Brahma Divine Soldiers so defiant that even if you become a fallen empire, why don't you hide a few of them at home? The plot also says that the explosive force is no match for the Warhammer. If you're not a buddy, you can't destroy others. Why don't you hurry up and seize the land to build a shipyard? BYD has already grabbed a galaxy after several years? When I was born, I could grab territory faster than you! If you really can't build a few more giant shipyards, who can outlast you? Even the original version of Fallen Empire can destroy the galaxy when it just awakens. You, who have defeated the final natural disaster, can still be fooled by four vendors. It's really getting more and more annoying. If it doesn't work, don't set the background to be so awesome. The entire subspace is tied together and can be destroyed by a military disaster. No one here can beat you.

Hello everyone, my name is Big Head Rick. Recently, I saw that everyone has doubts about some settings in the book. Big Head will give you centralized answers here. 1. On the issue of combat power, many people feel that the genetically ascended Star Empire beats the Warhammer Empire of Mankind in both technology and genetic warriors. Therefore, there is no need to jump into gangs, suppress combat power, etc. It is better to just push it evenly. Answer: Datou agrees with everyone's views on combat power, but this is too boring. Therefore, the initial strength is set to be stronger than Warhammer, but not too high. Otherwise, we would not choose genetic ascension. It would be better to have disaster flight or start the ether phase engine to drain the background of the universe. But everyone can rest assured that Qunxing Technology is improving step by step. There are so many giant structures and so many technologies that it would be meaningless if they were not integrated. Then we will have a good fight with the Warhammer Empire of Man and even the Necrons. 2. Will you kneel down and lick the Warhammer Empire of Man? Answer: No, if you don't know how to climb the pole, you have to cooperate with them. 3. Why not use XXmod of Stars and use XX settings. Answer: The more you may not have thought of it, you can make suggestions and they may be adopted in the future. There are some other questions, you can comment. I will read the comments carefully

You said that humans in Warhammer 40k are not worthy of being human due to genetic problems, so shouldn't the Chaos Bug Orcs be the first target? If you insist on fighting with the empire, aren't you completely wearing a warhammer skin?

He looks like the second Bone King. He seems to be the righteousness of mankind but actually only cares about his own one-third of an acre. No matter how inhumane the emperor is, he still wants to save all mankind. He can take it as long as he can. The protagonist can kill and explode from the perspective of the invader throughout the whole process. Warhammer is originally a shithole. What I want to see is the redemption and liberation of humanity brought by Star Technology. As soon as the protagonist comes over, the super shit stick is tied with impact explosives and blows up the shithole.

Not too much

The Machine Age DLC was released in May last year, and Setana already had it. You started posting in March. Unless you last played Stellaris before May last year and didn't read the community at all, you wouldn't know about Setana.

This writing is too imbecile. It would be easier if you set it so that it would be transported right after the game starts.