Join the Chat Group, Friends in the Group Can Do More Trouble Than Me!

Let's have some fun with the introduction. Although some people don't care about the introduction, there are definitely others who do. In a world with an ancient background, where communications are not developed and laws are not perfect, you have publicly exposed evil, and you still want to collect patent fees and take some publicity 🤔. The first image seems to be loose, and I think some people will be dissuaded, and they may not even watch it.

Zombies are not simple yet. Stop mixing in the country and go abroad directly, closer to Southeast Asia, Japan, Malay, etc., And further to the United States and Europe. The supernatural power in those places is definitely not as good as at home, and they don't have anything to ward off demons and protect themselves. Don't waste your life too much to make yourself too comfortable, and you can also bring in a religion! It's a good life, so what are you doing in the country? The route is in the deep mountains and old forests. Pay attention to the famous domestic dangerous places, blessed places, Longhu Mountain, Maoshan and so on. If you are willing to take a longer detour and pay attention to some strategies, they will not be able to stop you. Who knows whether you will go north to Outer Mongolia and leave Russia, go south to Yunnan, cross eastward to Japan, or westward to India? At that time, they would stop you in traffic! Why do we have to fight in the country? Zombies are immortal, and you won't be able to go to heaven after a long time! Just keep a low profile and don't make waves!

Back then, I heard people say that evil sword manuals would be released publicly. If you practice, everyone can practice. If you don't practice, you won't be able to defeat them.

No, everyone in the group, including the protagonist, feels like they are missing a point. It feels like they are just watching children play house. Apart from the different identities in time travel, they even have the same personality.

There are good people on both sides. If you have to create a situation where the setting is good enough and one of them is not killed, you have to fight to the death. It's simply magical.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer. The group members all looked like clear and stupid college students. Their whole way of thinking and behavior were very childish.

It looks like this now Protagonist Student (class beauty, no work experience mentioned), Zombie Poor household (I died very well, no need to pick excrement, mosquitoes did not bite me) Lin Pingzhi Ordinary office worker (not sure, no detailed description) Warrior Child (no memory of the world view, quickly got used to the extremely bad living conditions, I haven't eaten fruit for a long time but I did eat it, probably traveled a long time) Dragon Girl Master Prostitute (? Doubtful. She described that her job was fine for the first few years but then her income got worse and worse. She had experience with men's colleges. She may also be a short video blogger, anchor or escort. These three professions are all popular professions before too many people share the cake.)

There is no distinction between priority and secondary. You can't have a long continuous plot description about the group of friends in this kind of article. They need to be written in sections, and there must be a "jumping feeling." The zombie plot is long and smelly, taking up half of the page, and it is also very frustrating to write. The appearance of time-travelers other than the protagonist is a poisonous point. If you don't cut the knot quickly and push the plot, you will be beaten here. I don't know what's going on in your little head?

Don't you understand that this group leader must be chosen?

The love apartment is not ordinary, and it is also an urban phenomenon after all.

The one about Lin Pingzhi buying groceries, I don't know if the author deliberately wrote it stupidly or something, and the Adventures of Luoluo, although it is a cartoon for children, it is still reasonable, especially the little girl almost won, and the blue poisonous beast survived after doing so many bad things. I suggest you get some snacks, otherwise you will be criticized by readers, and the quality will not be up to par after it is put on the shelves, even in the beginning.

It's so frustrating. Even minecraft islands can get supplies from the chat group and it's still developing so slowly. A group of half-hearted people are practicing hard with a martial arts book, and everyone is losing their minds.

Brothers, I suddenly remembered the old shaker from the Qing Dynasty, who asked the one lying in the coffin to dance when he came out 🙂

Personally, I think this time traveler is a failure. It's hard to resist.

If the author wants to write a group portrait, don't make the protagonist too special. It's best if everyone shares the blessings and the protagonist is just a little bit superior. Don't be like that system where I join the chat group and then it's okay in the early stage and the group members are completely unequal in the later stage.

It's too fake, it's a bit like playing house😔, you can help whatever you say

Before it was put on the shelves, he ran away and released another wave of poison. No? Did you also get the more than 200 subscriptions by brushing them off?

I'm dizzy. The Earth traveler who has no brains to support the Douluo World 🤫 is obviously an enemy. If the opponent becomes stronger, he will definitely win over the beauties of the Douluo World, and the traveler does have this intention. In addition, the earth travelers will definitely have their own little thoughts after becoming stronger. Following the latest chapter, the author is just like deliberately adding poison points. It does not matter that the protagonist has low intelligence, but he does not research and develop cheats. There are all kinds of poison points. Give up, give up.

I feel like the author is like a middle-aged novice, the plot of Greasy Diaosi is outdated, and the ideas are messy

Most of the people in the protagonist group are chaotic and evil, and they feel like the Bone King's tomb. I can't say that all of them are evil, but there are definitely a few people from the motherland among them.

The more I read, the more awkward I feel. With so many time-travelers, the group is already enough, right? Why train a Douluo wild traveler? Can't cultivate the chat group? Or is it that Douluo's time traveler has been possessed by the Dao Heart Seed Demon? Forcibly control it or make it a clone? None? Is it all based on the other person's conscience? ? ? When I read it, I really felt that it was outrageous. The relationship between the eight poles and the relationship was still semi-hostile 😰. Originally, I was a nanny in the early stage and I thought it was a bit outrageous. But the mc part was well written and I could keep reading. But what is written later?