The Liver Gives Birth to an Immortal Who Will Conquer the World

It's very contradictory. An old doctor who has aged naturally and experienced death from a terminal illness is still growing up like a young boy when things happen. It seems that the author does not know this sentence.

After reading what the author said in the comment area, I also read the book. I feel that you are too arrogant. Many readers have given you suggestions. If you can't do it, I can only suggest that you write real-life medical online articles. Author, what do you think is the most important thing about writing Xianxia online articles? You always want to get to the bottom of things, thinking that you must give yourself a reasonable explanation to readers in some aspects. I think the most important thing when writing fairy tales or fantasy novels is imagination. Yes, it's not the immersive writing description or the addictive rhythm arrangement. What you are watching is different worlds and different adventures. After a tiring day at work, seeing the adventures of the protagonist through the screen can temporarily escape the tedious troubles of real life. This is not a particularly rigorous and professional article. Readers are actually very tolerant. They will make up the plot on their own, especially if you write about cultivating immortals, the most classic realm. This thing basically does not need to be explained, because readers have basically read other books and understand it. Therefore, readers will not care about whether Reiki is scientific or not. If you ask, the setting is like this. If you don't like to exit in the upper left corner. When you encounter someone who is really tough, at worst, you just ask him, have you ever cultivated to become an immortal? Are you talking nonsense here?

It was good at the beginning, but a son-in-law was confused, and the conflicts in the subsequent plot development were basically predictable, and the sense of expectation was suddenly gone.

The book is well written, but you know why not many people can read it. It's very simple, you are too complicated, the steps are too many, and the priorities are not clear. Let's just say that during the Qi training period, you should feel the spiritual energy, collect it, and incorporate it into yourself. I'm so angry when I come to you. Open Dantian. It can be said that practicing Qi is so troublesome, but what about building foundation? What about pill formation? There should be some main cultivation methods but not too many. At the same time, the key points can be introduced in detail. If there are no key points, just write them in one or two strokes. I will read Chapter 17. . It's all about you writing the steps to practice Qi. In addition, there are too many mental activities. Conversation will bring about inner activities. It's good to have some psychological activity in the scenes with your important characters. You can't just chat and let your inner activities come out. It gives me a headache when you write like this. This person is definitely worried about gains and losses, and is suffering from depression. Even if you make up the numbers, you can still make up the daily routine and plot.

The category of Xianxia has a very high upper limit. This type of writing can go straight into the top ten of the sales list. But this is not the reason why Xiao Ke wants to write Xianxia, ​​because there are too many factors of heaven in it. Xiao Ke has self-knowledge and will not have such a fate in this life. I don't even dare to think that the fairy tale book I wrote will break into the sales list. Because what you think is good is not necessarily what readers think is good. My book "Rural Traditional Chinese Medicine Doctor Li Maoyang" has entered the sales list twice. But Xianxia is too difficult. From the data point of view, the lower limit for Xianxia to eat rice is very high. It can be said that 90% of fairy tale books end up with no rice. I may not be able to eat rice with this book. But I still decided to write a fairy tale book. If not for anything else, just for the unrestrained energy of cultivating immortals, just for the characters in Xian Xia to give people a huge hope for life! But the fairy tale books I wrote are relatively "honest", and it can be said that they don't have much "fairy spirit". I have studied many books that have been rated as "fairy spirit" by readers, and found that these books have a common feature, that is, they do not write about difficult and unrestrained (wisdom to see through the reader's psychology). But due to personality reasons, Xiaoke cannot write in such a chic way, because I am a "logic control". I can't just write about the coolness without writing about the hardships. For example, the cultivation of spiritual energy for the introduction to immortality is something that most authors have briefly mentioned, but I wrote about the difficult process. Because in reality, is it so easy for you to extract the essence of heaven and earth? (In our reality, the heaven and earth also have essence, such as the purple energy from the east, which is artistically transformed into "spiritual energy" in the novels about cultivating immortals.) The heaven and earth have essence, can ordinary people feel it? Not to mention mining!                                 From sensing the Dantian to opening the Dantian, most authors have just brushed it off in their writings, but I have written about the difficulties in detail. Because in real life, which ordinary person can easily perceive Dantian? And then open the Dantian? So I want to write. This seems to be less "lofty" and less "immortal". After all, most authors don't write about this, thinking it is too "low-level". It seems that harvesting spiritual energy and opening the Dantian are natural and easy things. It's not easy, try it in real life! But if I write it this way, it will naturally reduce the "fairy spirit" of the book.                                           But I am a logic control person but I can't stop writing. If I don't write, I feel that the book I write has no "foundation" and I can't continue writing. This is a major flaw in my character that a low-level author like me cannot overcome.        ，，，        ，，！       ，，，，，，， (Well, reading books will really make you die. Please do a good job and read it. When reading, please turn to the last page every time to see which reader you are. This can be considered as an effective reading data.) In addition, for those adults who can't understand the style of this book, if you feel uncomfortable reading it, please don't scold it too harshly. At least, it will give Xiao Ke something to eat. Please! Xiao Ke kowtows and thanks!

The collection data of this book is average, but the proportion of readers who follow it is very good. It currently accounts for nearly a quarter of the number of collectors. It is the highest proportion of readers among my several books. The horizontal comparison is also a very good proportion. This gives me great confidence as a young author! It shows that some people still read the fairy tales in this style of the young author! Thank you very much to all the book friends for your support!

I have counted the current Xianxia schools, and it seems that there are roughly the following types: 1. Front-end martial arts style. This kind of protagonist usually starts the story wandering around in the secular world, starting with martial arts training, and gradually reaches the innate level (some novels set this to be the first level of Qi refining). Then the protagonist searches for the Immortal Sect, but fails to enter the sect due to age and other reasons. 2. Zongmen style. The protagonist usually starts out as a sect servant or an outer sect. He fights internally with other disciples for training resources. He also takes various sect tasks to earn contribution points in exchange for sect resources. Finally, he rises step by step and becomes an inner sect disciple, a true disciple, and gradually becomes a core force. During this period, he has to fight against other forces for the interests of the sect. Three, family flow. The protagonist is usually a branch of the family or a direct descendant. He must first compete for resources with the children within the family, gradually develop into the backbone of the family, and then fight for the family and other forces.                                                                                                                                                          . This type of martial arts actually lacks a lot of experience in the secular world compared to the front-end martial arts stream. Basically, they survive in various markets near the sect, and then they may enter the sect. They may even shoot a gun and change places like Han Paopao, and finally ascend to heaven and become an immortal.              (To be honest, I couldn't stand the plot of Han Paopao before. Except for the master-disciple murder scene at the beginning, it was really wonderfully written. For other plots, the writing felt really dry. I don't know if I can read it now. I guess it will definitely not be easy for anyone to write another book like this now. So Han Paopao is a unique and phenomenal novel.  I am by no means a black man, but there are some things that are not on the same channel as myself. For example, the phenomenon-level novels such as Jian Lai, Swordsman in the Snow, and Best Friends, I have read it for N times without finishing reading it. This only shows that my own brain circuit is not in line with others, and it does not explain any problems. ) 5. Cross-double realm flow. I have read a few pages of Wenzhao Gong in this category. I am not sure what the routine is. It seems that the two realms are sharing resources and exchanging what they have, and then they become awesome because of this. Sixth, increase your flow when killing demons. I haven't read a few pages, but my impression seems to be that it's just killing monsters, and getting resources and treasures because the system adds something is awesome.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          . I've seen the Holy Ruins, it's really beautiful.        ，，，，        ，，

He has grown old naturally, he has a lifetime of experience, and his work is still like a young boy. 😥 It seems that your main line is still in the Qiao family, or it has been completely cut off, and now it is neither fish nor fowl.

"The Immortal of the World", this title is irresistible to the protagonist in your article, who is mortal, aloof, remote, Taoist nature, not happy with things, not sad with oneself. If you can't do it, you don't have the talent. Otherwise, you think traditional Taoism, why do disciples have to spend several years or even more than ten years doing chores like splitting fires and boiling water every day, getting angry when seeing a woman, meeting any gods and ghosts that can make you feel lustful, so why should you practice? Go back to your hometown, marry a wife, have children, and live a stable life while you are still young. All the methods in this world are created by geniuses step by step, from scratch. Some of them may just be the beginning, and they are the descendants who continue to succeed. They completed it bit by bit with their talents, and the immortal classics were born from this. However, those who can practice are all outstanding people for a while, and their character is especially superior to their talent. They meditate like a vajra and endure, and read scriptures with ease and purity. Can the protagonist in your article do it? The protagonist in your novel is not even comparable to the scholars of ordinary dynasties. He is ignorant of what is happening outside the window and only reads books by sages. Why do you think that 70% to 80% of book friends now read the system cheats? They are rubbish and don't have the talent, talent, temperament, and can't use golden fingers to change the values ​​​​and change their lives? In this way, everyone can accept it. We are just ordinary people. We use golden fingers to run on the narrow roads and do not go to the Yangguan Road with weird talents.

I don't understand why so many articles about cultivating immortals include elements of Buddhism. It's completely incompatible with cultivating immortals. If you want to write about Buddhism, you have to write about the six paths of reincarnation, self, and non-self. This is completely asking for trouble.

In fact, people's mentality is deeply affected by their bodies. If they are healthy and have no pain, they will appear sunny; if they are weak and suffer from minor illnesses and pains from time to time, they will mostly appear sluggish; older age does not mean more experience, nor does it mean a better mentality. As far as I can tell, the protagonist has a normal mentality. He is not like Xiaobai's novel, and he is like a teenager in his 80s.

The setting is okay, but the writing of the first 20 chapters is too slow. Also, which time traveler has written such a lack of determination? The protagonist died at a very old age, and also experienced the horror of life and death. A maid became horny at the sight of it. Are you a loser? You are obscene in the novel. The beginning of the novel is nagging. There is no attractive story and no novel setting. Before you choose this name, there must be a reflection, hint, or vision in the three golden chapters. You have to attract people to come in and read, and attract people to read. In the end, you see a loser wandering around. It would be better if you cut off the large section before the cultivation.

Recently, I have been taking time to write articles to see why other articles work. After doing a lot of swiping, I had an epiphany tonight (April 9 at 7:50 pm). I suddenly understood why system writing, label writing, entry style, and simple story style are so popular! The popularity of these writing styles has a common underlying logic - the pace of social life is too fast! Everyone is too busy and the time to calm down is too short! So the popular writing style is concise, clear, short and fast! And what am I pursuing? It is the density and solidity of the writing style, coupled with the atmosphere of human fireworks. This kind of writing style is not unmarketable, it is, and it is this style of writing that has achieved the greatest results! Because it's chewy! But today's fast-paced life has left a very narrow space for this kind of writing!                                                Except for the popular articles, everyone will patiently click in and read them. Even if they can't read it, they have to read it several times. Ordinary authors, who will spend this time to read your article! Wouldn't it be great if I watched something fast-paced about being chased by a rabbit? This is the most fundamental reason.        ……        ，，！ But I still want to write something chewy. At the same time, dear readers, in fact, the storyline of my article is not slow at all! The storyline of my writing is actually - it seems slow but is actually fast! ! ! !        2，50！ ! ! Brother, it's really fast. You can see that I write slowly and pursue details, but I take big steps. Before you know it, my protagonist has become awesome very quickly! Then why should I write like this? Because of logic, this kind of seemingly slow but actually fast method can easily take care of the logic line, and it can also write with interest (of course, I admit, the interest may not be handled well), so I like to write like this. So, readers, please be patient. I am really fast. I seem to be enjoying myself slowly, but the whole process does not take more than three minutes! Really! Another thing, many people are scolding me now, saying that I fake ads. Well, I am shameless and did it myself.                                      There is no way, I recommend a round of tours on various recommended libraries, and the collection is pitifully small. If I don't buy some, Mr. Reader, I can't even drink gruel. In order to grit my teeth and write this book, I had to brave the wind and snow to be shameless. I swallowed tears in my heart and put a shameless smile on my face. We are also human beings, but there is no way. If I am not shameless, I will not be able to drink gruel.

The Qiao family is going to the front line, why not use the protagonist's son-in-law?

Of course, it's okay to have less ancient prose, as long as the author is highly accomplished. The problem is that the ancient prose you write is the same as the ancient prose of the New Three Kingdoms, so you just change me into me. It's better not to change it.

After reading the first dozen or so photos, the rhythm is very good, like a great master, but when it comes to chapter 20, the rhythm is still too flat, and a bit overwhelming 🙂. Your advantages and disadvantages are obvious. Needless to say, your advantages are very good. You can even fill in Liu Yong's lyrics in a decent way. You must know that some great masters change ancient Chinese poems in a way that makes people scratch their feet. The text is very fluent, and the logic is very realistic. The disadvantage is that there are no emotional ups and downs. You have to learn to create crises, put the protagonist in danger, put the protagonist in danger, and then pretend to slap you in the face (if there is logic in pretending, it is better). Don't think that this method is useless. This is the kind of logic you pay attention to. What editors lack, I feel your age from your words, at least you are not young in your heart. After all, Internet articles are read by young people. You are too angry and feel a little dissatisfied, unhappy, and arrogant. If I talk nonsense, you can just treat me as casual 🙂

There is a feeling of being forced to write new words. The author has a good attitude, but his ability is limited and his writing is very stiff. I suggest you don't learn from those great writers with good writing skills, but learn more from authors with good narrative rhythm.

The colloquialism is too serious and there are many modern vocabulary, which makes it easy to cause drama.

Happy holidays, good health and all the best! May all your wishes come true! ! !

Especially the detailed description of the broken mirror, unlike other novels that just break or accumulate energy, which is boring.

I think it's well written. It has the feeling of cultivating immortality. It's not a accumulation of energy or a broken sentence.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

What level and what book. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that it was mediocre and I can only say that it was readable. If you write like this in the early stage, there will definitely be no results. It is not a writing method that conforms to the times. If you want to write like this and you don't have loyal readers, wouldn't you just have to make up for the word count?

I saw the latest place where the foundation is about to be built, and I feel that it doesn't need to be so difficult to build the foundation. It's okay to be clear about your intentions, but it's a bit unnecessary to leak the body.

What's so special about that AI, and why does it follow the protagonist through time?

I don't agree with this protagonist's decision to massacre Jinzhou from now on.

I only have 10 chapters left to order. Are you worthy of me?

I recommend a new book: Jade Spirit Sword Immortal. A traditional fairy tale, not a family story. Millions of manuscripts are deposited, investment, attention and suggestions are welcome.

Whether it is the name of the Qiao family, the geographical location, or other situations mentioned in the article, it all shows that the author is trying his best to whitewash the Qiao family, a great traitor in real history! Only a personal opinion, but it's hard not to think about it

I have hypothyroidism, prostatic hyperplasia, and neurasthenia! The current symptoms include yellow tongue coating, bitter mouth, bile reflux, gastric ulcer, palpitations and chest tightness when hearing the slightest noise! Do I have damp heat?