
Zhetian: Forced to Stay on Mars at the Beginning
遮天:开局被迫滞留火星
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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26Monthly votes
22.5kRecommends
64.8kFans
522Chapters
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Uncle. You're TV?
If you are Crocodile Ancestor, and you find a person who claims to be the Dacheng Holy Body Divine Nian, who has no cultivation at all, and who wants you to hold it in your hand across planets for fear of breaking it, do you believe that he is the Divine Nian? If you just set up a situation where you are bound to die, you will be exposed. There will be problems with the logic and there will be no fixes. Why can you cooperate in an unequal situation?
I've been telling a joke for over a hundred chapters. The protagonist has four complete bloodlines of the Ten Evils in his body. There are two ink marks of the Northern Emperor Lindu. And isn't he a pure bastard? There are so many NB bloodlines in the protagonist. Apart from being physically stronger, there are no other effects that can be seen.
Luring the wolf into the house
Maybe the author wants to have some new ideas, but it is really too poisonous to cooperate with Crocodile Ancestor and lead Crocodile Ancestor to the earth. How many people will die if Crocodile Ancestor doesn't care about human life and goes to the end of the earth? I can't help the protagonist in my heart. What can I do? Didn't you lure the crocodile here? It's really disgusting😵😵😵
The protagonist may overestimate himself and underestimate his abilities. If he turns into a crocodile, the Crocodile Ancestor will think that the protagonist is the remnant soul of the holy body? Find a roadside beggar and pretend to be a national leader. Will anyone believe you?
Now the small head is starting to control the big head again. When he sees Yan Ruyu, he becomes a licking dog and pounces on her.
This is my first time writing a book. My original plan was to exchange information with Black Emperor for information. This may be due to my lack of writing skills. It seems to be pimping. I won't touch upon this aspect in the future. Please forgive me.
Send Zixia at the beginning?
In the first 40 chapters, the woman I introduced to Ye Fan was Zixia!
I don't know why many fan fiction protagonists like to use Ye Fan as the main character. With this mentality, let alone becoming an emperor, you may not be able to practice Shenqiao or Zhandao 😂
The author, Chun Yun, is perfect, and Zhe Tian has never seen it before. It is written in a mess. The unenlightened Chaos Body and Tianzun are not two tricks, but one for one. The Alicorn Ant also wrote that the humanoid creature is simply convinced. The humanoid is the Thunder Emperor. Forget it, Yun didn't check the most basic things. It's rubbish.
Pimping or not? Don't waste time by pulling it
Some people should not be too funny. Did the protagonist sleep with Zixia or kiss her? They don't know each other at all, so what's wrong with the protagonist trading her identity? Hold on to a buying and selling identity information! If introducing someone you don't know to someone else counts as sending a female to pimp, then I can only say that some people have pimped and been pimped many times.
The instrument is made of Shenhen Purple Gold. If you want to call it a Chaos Bell, you have to add some Chaos Stone to it. You can't force the Shenhen Purple Gold to be written as Chaos. Xuanhuang is also called Chaos rather than Shenwei Purple Gold. Shenhen Zijin has its own characteristics. It feels bad to always write about chaos.
It's really a bit of a "pimp", it feels like "Giving Zixia for nothing", no matter what, I have to exchange for a copy of the Nine Secrets of the Emperor's Scripture or something, and I just asked for some rubbish. Is this licking the Black Emperor and Ye Fan?
Just writing this nonsense, you really think that there is no big formation outside the earth, and you can enter the earth with evil thoughts. Why do the Kunlun Immortal Clan on the Feixian Star have to break through Hangu Pass?
I didn't want to read the introduction until halfway through. What else could a time traveler like this do if he was left on Mars?
Ye Fan's essay is just a dog-licking essay
Every time I see the Heaven-Shading Forge, I feel inexplicable. Other systems can only be successful if they are exactly right in terms of material ratio, heat, etc., But the Zhetian system combines everything together and it is even more powerful than the fool's style👍. The fool's style has to follow the procedures.
This author's writing is average, especially about the perfect world. What he writes is completely wrong and can cover up the sky. It is similar to other fans, but the writing about the perfect world is far different.
It will not be plagiarized according to the original work.
I've seen people copy other people's homework, but I've never seen people copy other people's names into it. After all, we have to pay to read it. Even if you are limited in ability and can't write it, author, you can't copy and paste the entire paragraph. At least change it according to the plot you rewrote before. You can't fool everyone into thinking that you are a fool with so much money. It hurts to watch😣
I have a question, if you start with the True Dragon attribute, then you just have to practice honestly. Do you have to have other opportunities? Ye Fan started with the Immortal Golden Body. Isn't it enough to have one golden finger at the beginning? Is your starting point not high enough? It's a true dragon again, and it's a true dragon's magic. Is there anyone else in the nine heavens and ten earths who can compare with you? Is the Chaos Body worthy?
The biggest stain for your kind of writing is the matchmaking between Ye Fan and Zixia. Why do you care so much? Why do you care about whether they can come together? You are still a time traveler, but you still make excuses for yourself. It is for the dark turmoil. Gai Jiuyou and the others are your relatives or something. You have nothing to do with them. You still care about the life and death of these people, and you still want to marry them. Join Ye Fan and Zixia to create a holy body to fight against the dark turmoil. When the dark turmoil comes, if you are afraid of death, you can find a place to hide. You can have Zixia as the heroine, but there is really no need to match up. This will lose a large number of readers, deposits are nosy, and other people's original works have no intersection, and they are not together, and they still try to match up. You're a little bit more vicious in the back, but I can't bear to read it. Anyway, at this point, I have no desire to continue reading.
Spending money to see 💩 would be uncomfortable for anyone else
Ye Fan can become the master of the Dacheng Holy Body before he reaches the other side. Your collapse is too powerful, and your Dacheng Holy Body can make it pop out. This can be regarded as an emperor's corpse.
I guess they had to change people later, and their standards plummeted.
That's outrageous. Did the earth enter so casually?
The crocodile ancestor didn't know how terrible the earth was. Wasn't he suppressed by Sakyamuni who came out of the earth? Then he casually left Mars. Didn't he stay just to investigate? Finally, Ye Fan has to pass through Hangu Pass when he returns home, right? What's the use of Hangu Pass if you enter it so casually?
For a fan like this, he still wants to collect money, so I'll go
When the author writes a book, look at his comments section to see what his thoughts are 🤓. Will he be so angry that he has a cerebral hemorrhage?
It's really useless. It was written exactly as the original work. Except for a little plot at the beginning, the rest is almost copied from the original work. I keep pushing my limits, and I can hardly see any pleasure.
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?