To Achieve Longevity, Start with Liver Proficiency

Well written and well written. However, practicing marksmanship, sword training, and fist fights between the protagonist and the enemy, the whole thing seems to be writing about cultivating immortals as low martial arts. I feel that cultivating immortals should focus on describing things like spells, talismans, magical weapons, formations, etc. This way it looks like cultivating immortals, otherwise it will become low martial arts or fantasy.

Another work by a refugee cultivating immortality

No, the protagonist practices the third level of qi, and he also practices health-preserving skills. His total life span is 78 years. If he doesn't practice health-preserving skills and cultivates immortality, he will die at the age of 70. No mortal can live past 50 years 😅

Prices are so high. The shots at the fifth level of Qi training are all medium-grade spiritual stones, and the subsequent golden elixirs are all top-grade spiritual stones?

I have a few questions. Does your level 3 talisman correspond to the golden elixir or the later stage of Qi training? ? ? How do you draw a level 3 talisman for someone who has just reached the 4th level of Qi training...

Come on, it's finally not the beginning of a crisis, everyone is trying to plot against the protagonist.

The window is left open every day and the talisman paper gets wet. This is not a random poisoning and robbery.

There are various small problems, but the big problem is that the protagonist is cheating and is not much better than ordinary casual cultivators. How can the protagonist build the foundation and form the elixir? It's very difficult to write. It will either require patching or various luck.

This little girl is so good at practicing qi and alchemy. Is the sect so blind that it doesn't cultivate such talents? The author's logic is too problematic

Read more books on cultivating immortals, and don't read books with golden fingers. You want to write a talisman for cultivating immortality and various arts. But what was written was a picture from Xiu Xian Bai Yi Qin, Chess, Calligraphy and Painting. This branch also has an ability called Talisman Drawing. The essential painting skill in Qinqi, calligraphy and painting is the technique of splashing ink. What I am playing with is painting, and painting is virtual reality. The essence is virtuality and imitation. You can draw elixirs. There are only a few of the most famous Foundation Building Pills in one pot. If you use the painter's skill of painting alchemy to get the same thing, you can get about 30 to 50 pills. Medicinal materials are also needed. It is not placed for a long time and the success rate is low. Fulu refers to the art of making talismans. For example, the attack of the Foundation-Building Monk. A blow from a monk in the late stage of Qi refining. Listen to it. You can't create this technique if you don't know it. The essence is the transfer of energy. You don't know the fireball technique, so you can't make a fireball charm. That's the truth. Let me ask you the simplest truth. Pig's feet can be used to create magic spells. Charm, curse, bone shield, etc.? The various arts of cultivating immortality are only available in our country. It is the transformation of ability from bottom to top. Maoshan Taoist priests know it. Have you seen Teacher Lin Zhengying's movies? Those who learn to keep ghosts and those who learn to exorcise ghosts make different talismans. The talisman can be made in advance and stored for a long time. It doesn't take that much time and mana. It's not that Goldfinger is not possible. Can. But it is best not to distort the original essence. The author is not Korean. Look more. Don't use a rice cooker to make elixirs. This is called proficiency. Is Golden Finger really suitable for the track of Xiuxian Baiyi? Why Grandpa Golden Finger became a masterpiece. Why doesn't proficiency work? Because the old man does not change his essence. You have to learn spells, make elixirs, etc. Everyone has to learn and everyone has to fail? Proficiency is reinforcement out of nowhere. This is a standard cool article. No logic. But should we abide by the original laws and regulations?

It can only be said that it is very average and has no highlights.

You can discuss the plot, and you can also tell what you want to read in the future, such as writing more about the overt and covert struggles of Kyushu forces, focusing on the atmosphere of life in the streets and alleys, or the protagonist counting the profits, etc. Fellow Taoists are also welcome to speak freely!

There are problems with various common sense settings, and I guess I didn't make a good draft.

I have all the resources to cultivate immortality. This golden finger seems to be of no use. After all the resources have been cultivated, the protagonist is still a casual cultivator. He needs knowledge but no resources. The protagonist has no advantage at all. He can only build the foundation by relying on the resources arranged by the author. The golden finger is useless.

Be unconventional and tell good stories, and you will always have an audience of your own. You are not RMB, just be yourself.

Mag machine, hurry up, only two chapters a day, just watch a hammer

The author can still tell a steady stream of stories, but unfortunately ① the output is not enough, the passion is intermittent, learn to get rid of the ups and downs and fragments of the great master; ② the online article has been 20-30 years old, and readers have eaten too much, so the book must highlight the core of the logo that is different from the public, and must be eye-catching. Keep up the good work, the author has good storytelling potential 👍.

I always feel like I'm going to collapse. Every time I read the author's talk, I get a little scared. I feel a little stupid before I even start talking about it.

It's very good to read. Among the several books about cultivating immortals by seedlings that I followed at the same time, this one is the best one so far. It's not watery and the writing is good.

I haven't updated for several days. Will you continue writing?