Only Three Years of Life Left at the Start? Stud!

How should I put it? There is a serious mismatch between your realm and what happened to you. It's a bit of a drama. Even though the protagonist has cheats, you can't just keep solving some second- and third-level problems. If there are cheats, we should quickly improve our strength. When we reach the state, it will be more enjoyable than anything else. Just like you, a mortal who has not yet cultivated immortality, wandering around in the foundation building and golden elixir battlefields. Then the foundation building and golden elixir are still soy sauce, you are the main force. Fighting over many levels does look awesome, but it's frustrating. Upgrading and reaching higher realms are more interesting. There is such a powerful plug-in but I don't use it properly. It took almost 100 cards before I reached the first realm. You are a cheat brother, you are not a mortal cultivating immortals😦. You kill monsters and level up, and you specialize in catching the lowest level monsters. Isn't this life span casual? Isn't the realm just getting better? Not to mention that the things the protagonist encounters are all second- and third-level things. Li Huai may still be able to contain the enemy at Jinguang Temple, but in the back, Yang Zhong will just go blank. The local black tide has come out. The problem is that you haven't entered the stream yet.

Li Zhun is a Thousand Niu Guard, but he can't see the weird one walking around?

Let's just say that the name of your protagonist is really hard to read. It's too dramatic. Can you change it? The name Xu Xin looks like someone who plays table tennis.

Dusk Divide is so popular, I hope you can surpass it

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The writing is very good, and it's the type I like to read. However, I personally feel that the name should have the word "guilty" in it, so as to accurately absorb the volume. If I hadn't swiped down the books one by one from the library, I wouldn't have seen it.

At present, the main line is about enemies who are alive (being given a curse mark) and whose existence is unknown, and then a side plot is added on top of this to let the entire world view unfold 1. The main line advances slowly 2. The world view is too fragmented 3. It seems It's a bit like the suspense + reversal in the first chapter of The Ring of Fate, but the success of The Ring is because it has a large reader base (who will be more patient to wait to fill in the holes) and the first mystery has clearly explained the world view. Even so, many people still think that 2 is not as good as 1. 4. Finally, draw a lottery when you encounter a crisis, and then sharpen your weapons to defeat the enemy. It is okay to write like this at the beginning of the story, but it cannot be done again. Normally, you should maximize and master the existing resources first. 5. Then if you want to write about weirdness + martial arts, you have to write it a little weirder, otherwise you should write a more passionate (detailed description of the battle process), which is a bit dull at the moment. But I think the current overall story direction is pretty good. I will continue to see how the author updates it later.

Does your protagonist know how to play table tennis?

That's not true at all. How did people survive in an era without fuel? Will the settings be added later?

It feels like when I first watched the red moon

Well written, don't be a eunuch!

Let me comment, the chapters about the village and Jinguang Temple were very interesting, but the chapters about Hanshan City were boring. The recent chapter makes me feel even more strange. The inexplicable Chen Tong and the handling of the case should not rely on Qianniuwei's resources to kill weirdos, draw lives, and improve their cultivation? With the Krypton Life Taoist Temple, I thought it would be the Jidao style, which relies on war to support war. Now it kind of makes me want to run away.

What was written earlier was about the protagonist's parents and other strange things. To be precise, the captain of the patrol knew that the protagonist's parents were dead and was about to draw a knife. But in the end, they somehow got along with each other in harmony. I was confused.

It's so beautiful. I watched it in one sitting. If you keep up the standard, you will definitely become a god.

Let me introduce Qianniuwei more. I have seen it before, in Detective Detective Dee.

Stud is a kind of wisdom, Stud! Stud! Stud!

Not bad, there is no poison, you can chase it after it is put on the shelves