Peninsula: Starting from Leaving JYP

There are so many Yao writers, especially Wu Haiyuan, come on

Come on, come on, come on, I want to see songs that have no problem composing and fresh arrangements, don't use JYP's mixers, they're just a piece of shit. If there is no problem with the people, the song, and the operation, then make a debut and make money! ! !

No, buddy, first update? Is it still possible to sign a contract in the first update?

Oh Hae-won

It's definitely AI. The timeline jumps inexplicably. Even the names of the members are wrong. The context is confusing. It's really a waste of my subscription. I'm so disappointed.

NMIXX

Yao fans must support it, it's so rare, order it all, order it all!

Are you completely using AI now? The writing is too messy.

I'll come if there's something right

You wrote that Haiyuan Street is the female protagonist. You have unloaded 100 chapters, but the male protagonist has not developed feelings for the female protagonist, and neither has the female protagonist. Why do you still want to write about someone secretly exploring Haiyuan Street and the hero saving the beauty? Or do you want to write thousands of chapters? It made me depressed. The whole process was about what my teammates thought.

Why are these opponents always thinking about something? The meaning is unclear.

I've subscribed to the latest chapter, but there's still no progress in my relationship, and it looks like there's going to be a boy band coming up later? That's okay, bye, because the girl group came to read the book, and no one would be interested in that bad boy group. I kept it on the bookshelf and was kind of looking forward to the follow-up, but this is the result? Bye bye bye

According to this progress, debut is far away

The description of the male protagonist before this chapter suddenly fell off. I know that the author wanted to express the conflict, but the writing was very poor. This chapter feels very bloody. It is completely different from the previous article. There is no buffer, it just comes down directly. The main conflict is very awkward. Of course, Korean entertainment is a small niche, and the author can write whatever he wants, which can be considered as a way to generate electricity for love. I am just talking about the points that I personally feel uncomfortable with. It used to suit my taste very well. Sending a vote, I'm looking forward to the author's next book, Chapter 85 made me a little nervous. But in any case, the author is very good, I stayed up late to see it now. 👍🏻

Don't worry, write well. Plus, short! ! ! ! ! !

Is AI writing it? There is something wrong with these chapters. There are a few chapters where the content of the previous chapter and the next chapter are not connected together. Especially at the beginning of chapter 190, Li Taihao suddenly came and kissed Wu Haewon. Chapter 192 said that Li Taihao was 37 years old. The latest chapter directly said that Li Taihao was divorced. What is this?

My favorite Korean entertainment book recently, I feel that the ratio between career and emotion is very good. There is nothing to say about the career line. It's okay to have a boy band. After all, boy bands make money and this is what normal development should be. It's also good to change the taste. The emotional line always feels a bit awkward. The recent update of this section feels like there is no progress. Either the relationship is warming up or there is conflict. There must be some changes. Although there have been a lot of incidents recently and we have met each other's parents, it feels like the emotional line has not moved very far. The male protagonist still uses the seaman as a shield. Wu Haiyuan will deny it when he is teased. Sometimes it feels like the male protagonist is using his status as a seaman to unspoken rules. Maybe I wanted to let the two people connect through each of these things, gradually become closer, and their relationship would heat up, but I didn't realize it when I read it. I feel that if there is a single female protagonist, Wu Haiyuan's character is a loser. The portrayal is very good. Everyone thinks they are together, but they are not. And I have experienced what it is like to be the male protagonist's girlfriend. Or if there are multiple female protagonists, it would be good for both sides to get what they need. If it were Wu Haiyuan, the single heroine, do you think the emotional line might need to be adjusted? Or maybe it's more obvious when describing it

The sense of separation in these recent chapters is too strong 😅 The latest chapter directly admits the relationship, which makes people numb. The company and the girl group are both in the development stage. If they don't get back together later, they will collapse.

Yaomei is really suffering. Such a combination and strength are in the first echelon among all the girl groups that have debuted since 2017, but they are run by JYP into a mess, like a small group. It's like a mess. I finally read this book about Yaomei, and the result is even more difficult to describe. It's so painful😭 (To avoid being criticized, I asked Doubao what he thinks about Yaomei)

Why do you feel so rushed? Time is jumping so fast. Why are you getting divorced?

Alas, sometimes it's not that I don't like reading serials, it's that sometimes I just want to keep them and then for some reason they stop updating them.

The performance in the front is relatively normal, and it can be said that it is also good in the writing of Yao. However, the progress of this chapter is too fast and incoherent. It can be said that this book is useless.

Please update more