Immortality: I Can Get Unlimited Entries

The bigger the hang-up, the bigger the tribulation. Just 11 chapters are already 100 chapters of plot for others. Being kidnapped at the beginning, a perverted Taoist, a bloody competition, refining water, assassinating the Taoist, getting out of trouble and reincarnating, and encountering another pervert. The situation is precarious, and there are many hardships. As long as the rewards given by the system are a little biased and the protagonist's behavior is a little weak, it will be gone. Not to mention the interspersed backgrounds, and the feeling of the saint's chess pieces undergoing hardship It seemed smooth in one or two hundred chapters, but the content was too tight in more than twenty chapters.

Except for Dian, the writing style is like the style from 20 years ago. The two combined have a feeling of neither ancient nor new, which is very awkward, like the Zhou Dynasty cultural relics made last week.

The main reason is that it is too messy and there is no main plot. One moment you have to burn things and gain strength, and the next moment you get memories to save people. You are a time traveler, and you still have a golden finger.

I laughed to death and my heart is broken. A fragile heart is fragile👉🏻🤡🤣

The setting is a bit strange, it crashes easily, and the combat power is a bit messy.

This book is written like a lunatic, too stream-of-consciousness.

You old guy is reincarnated again. After this book is released, I plan to write dozens of chapters and start a new book.

Weird combat power setting, if Yuan doesn't come back, he'll be on the street

This is the second book recommended by Daodu in the past two days. Just a feeling. Crazy and crazy, scattered and unable to understand. Every time I see this kind of novel, it reminds me of one of Downey Jr.'S cold-blooded killer movies. Everyone is so excited.

It's not bad. It doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer. Old bookworms will probably like it, but if it's a student group, most of them will probably not be able to understand it. The overall style is a bit traditional. Today's online novels are different from the traditional literature in the past. The first is the sense of immersion, the second is the vernacular, which is easy to understand, and then the logic. After reading more than 20 chapters, I will give it an 8. I look forward to it becoming popular in the future.

Poor writing and too compact

What kind of rubbish is this? I couldn't stand the first one, and you're here to tell a story. Dude, I'm here to read a novel. Who wants to watch you tell a story?

After seeing Chapter 50, it does have the style of an online article from ten years ago. There are shortcomings and bright spots. If you are really a newcomer, it would be awesome.

"Immortal life. Starting from the mother's womb to survive the tribulation"

This is really cannibalism. Both good and evil eat people. What you eat is called a 6

When will there be charcoal to burn Xiao Chunyang?

I feel this book is crazy, and the other books are crazy and I just feel the meaning is unclear. Of course, it may be the reason why I read less, but it is really interesting.

Very suspense

This book surpasses most novels in the starting point. The author's writing is very good and the plot is novel enough. However, it also has two very big poisonous points. One is that Jiang Zhi is forced to pretend to be a slap in the face. It is impossible for the protagonist to survive. The other is that the power system is a bit confusing. He always says that he can fight at several levels better.

Seconds are amazing🙂