Versatile Mage: I Can Travel Through the World of Classic of Mountains and Seas

I am not afraid that you will open it, but I am afraid that you will not open it. There is a saying. If you don't open the world of full-time mage, it is better to read the original work directly. After you break through, you will basically add 3 times 3 spiritual seeds, nine times the power. Some people may think it is a bit too much, but in the middle level, you stay in the magic city, and there are people to protect you. It's just a magic power bonus, just follow the multiplication of the original work. On the contrary, your addition will make people who read the original work a little distorted and have a strong sense of conflict. They may stop reading it. If the protagonist's combat power is reasonably suppressed, some people will be unhappy and abandon the book, not to mention your unreasonable multiplication into addition. Stack up, this is my personal opinion, a small opinion, I am not criticizing you, I personally feel that it is not reasonable. After addition is changed to multiplication, I feel that it is not fun enough.

If you care too much about ordinary people, you will lose a lot of audience if you write like this.

The power of the Classic of Mountains and Seas system is there, and the strength of the summoned beasts is also so high, but the bonuses given to the protagonist are really amazing. I read the first 20 chapters. An obvious problem is that the original bonus algorithm is "Basic power * "Spiritual seed bonus + special effects + magic equipment bonus + special talent bonus" = double the final power. The spiritual seed multiplier is between 1-3 times. . . . Now in the book, the basic power of the protagonist is 1 times * "talent bonus (2.7-3.2) + Spiritual seed bonus (0.5-1) (It seems okay at first glance, but the big problem is that the spiritual seed bonus has been reduced to a few tenths of a time)." Then what is the use of the protagonist's power talent? It is not much different from other people's spiritual seed power. You also have one more Shanhaijing bloodline than others.

It's not interesting at all. It feels so weak. It's such an awesome thing, but in the hands of the protagonist, it feels as weak as a dog. In the end, the plot is still the same as the original plot, just with a different name and a few additions.

Just like the previous book friend said, is there a dog chasing the author? This is even more outrageous than fast forwarding to follow the drama. I don't even know what you are writing. It is written without any emotion. It feels like you just cut out the original plot. It is worse than those who follow the original work.

After reading two chapters, it felt like watching TV and pressing fast forward all the time! Does the author have a dog chasing you? It makes you so urgent to write! This way of writing makes me feel bland and boring!

All flies around the protagonist must be female

There is no description of the appearance of the Frozen End at the beginning, and there is no relationship between people. I feel that it was written too hastily. The summoned beast is not a passerby, nor a tool. There is still a need for communication in appearance and character.

Come on, Farewell Eunuch, there are too few fanfics where the heroine has a heart and has it completed.

All I can say about Tang Yuena's plot is lame

It's like brushing a map, there's no feeling at all

Speaking of which, author, why don't you come up with a character list?

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Take Axin Ruiya and Jiang Shaoxu

Author, I advise you to update as soon as possible. It only took me a few days and I have finished reading your novel. Update it quickly, update it quickly! A monthly pass is given to you😏

After watching almost 30% of the film, I felt that the plot was like looking at pictures and making connections. The plot or writing was not smooth, and I had to fill in the missing parts on my own, and the transition was very fast. The game was a bit too high. When I arrived at the National Government, I was almost at the super level. When I was in several advanced levels, I was competing for resources at the orientation party with the children who were at the beginning level, so the price dropped a bit.

How many heroines does the author have in total?

I bet the heroine is Jiang Shaoxu?