My Mental Commands Are a Bit Weak in Gundam SEED

It's just a bit hard to explain in one sentence. I feel like I'm selecting teenagers and not many can persist. The three golden poisons? Captain of East Asia!

I hope the author writes more female protagonists😁seed has several favorite female characters

I can't watch it anymore. Even the background setting has been changed. I tolerated the delay, but what does the space monster mean when it suddenly pops up? If you say this is a world of machine combat or a fusion world from the beginning, then of course there is no problem. But from the beginning, it is clearly a pure seed world, and a living space monster pops up. What does beast mean? Evidence 01 only proves the existence of extraterrestrial creatures. It does not mean that this thing is still alive. What is shown in the animation is a fossil version. This thing must have passed at least one geological era, and it has never been said that this thing lives in space. Finally, there are cosmic monsters in the Earth's circle, but the Martian colonists didn't discover them. Didn't dssd, which specializes in deep space exploration, discover them?

Why are immortals popping out? I should be watching giant robots fight each other, and then there will be some love lines and so on. Build a Gundam space battleship, and then PK it with an alien race. Or cooperate with Dongda to conquer the world, and then conquer the galaxy. Writing this now feels a bit like fantasy. Don't tell me what other techniques to practice later, and whatnot. If the author can write like this, please tell me in advance so that I can abandon the book in advance, alas.

Let me tell you a joke: I write a Gundam fanfic, but there is no Gundam. The subject matter you write about is neither the trend of the times nor the history of war. You have to start writing from a young age. If you are so defiant, why don't you write another 200,000 words about your past life? I don't understand why the author wrote this. Why don't you change the name to "I was a young soldier in the CE era"? To be honest, if you insist on writing it this way, you might as well cut it and write about Full Metal Panic.

It's a fantasy novel where the protagonist runs into trouble wherever he goes and completely changes his skin.

Alas, the writing is good, but the protagonist is always under attack. Although I can't say it's a bit of a glutton, I always feel uncomfortable. I try it here and there, and it always feels a bit ridiculous. It can be said that he is a troublemaker, causing trouble wherever he goes.

Another seed fan watched it

I feel like the author has no idea how much a professor can earn? Working part-time as a cleaner is too exaggerated, even if it's to help people write papers? Even in the Universal Century, mops were used.

Advantages: The plug-ins are just right, the writing is OK Poison points: The mother is not dead, so the plot cannot be sublimated, the mother has a very good background, which makes it smell a bit like Long Aotian, he insists on running to East Asia to develop in the background version of the main story seed, we are here to watch the machine battle, not the cosmic superman.

You can watch the plot, but can you avoid making the common-sense mistake of listening to gunshots and dodging bullets? Even the muzzle velocity of a pistol bullet is faster than the speed of sound, let alone a sniper rifle. No matter how strong your hearing is, you can't change the speed of sound...

I feel that based on the current plot, I have suffered so many old sins. If I don't follow the protagonist's mother and go to East Asia to develop, I feel that I may give up later.

The combat plot is well written, but wherever the protagonist goes, Trouble follows him, and he keeps fighting and killing, and he is already getting tired of it.

A science fiction fan novel is forced to be written as fantasy. The main reason is that it cannot be correct and feels nondescript. The choice of the heroine made me feel uncomfortable and the emotional development was uncoordinated.

I have been reading on QQ for paid reading. As soon as I started hiding the genetic data hard drive, I knew there was going to be something wrong with the protagonist's genes. Later, the protagonist is secretly studying genes. I know that the protagonist has to rely on himself in the end. As soon as the doctor's granddaughter was written, a woman who was inexplicably jealous of the protagonist, I knew that she was going to cause trouble when the protagonist was trying to save himself. ——To be honest, it's boring. The protagonist was obviously told from the beginning that he had plenty of time to get things done, but he was forced to leave it until the end to do the urgent thing. It was the same as the previous three attacks. Up to now, Gundam hasn't come out yet, and the main drama hasn't started yet. When writing a fanfic, you cannot completely break away from the main storyline of the anime, nor can you follow the plot all the time. You must have a certain degree of control. Finally, I will continue to read it later. I hope the author will improve and not be so deliberate in plot design. Come on.

It's really difficult to see Chapter 60 and you still haven't entered the "Novice Village", and there is no decent development. I hope the author can properly control the progress of the plot. After all, this is not a desert island survival novel that has to be written day by day. Important events or plot turning points such as foreshadowing, battles, and developmental periods can be written in detail, and occasional daily details can also play a role in seasoning. But if any detail is written in detail, the pace of the entire book will seem sluggish. To put it more bluntly, most readers who came to read this book came to read about Gundam, machine combat, who the heroine is and her daily life with the hero, and the plot changes of Gundam Seed with the addition of the protagonist, rather than the Gundam Seed version of "Captain America".

I feel like the more you write, the more fantasy you get 😅

To be honest, conflicts are not written like this. You know what cards and actions the other party has, but you still don't make thorough preparations. The protagonist is very smart. He has a background, ability, and resources, and he always wants to be a leisurely neutral person. It's harmful.

The protagonist of this book feels like a dog being held on a leash by the author. After holding it in for a long time and barking a few times, the author tightens the leash, hangs it up, and beats him up, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Until I couldn't help but give up 😥

The protagonist obviously cooperates with his mother's words and can save himself in "Special Powers" I now look at the protagonist like a shit stirrer And it's getting more and more fantasy, and it's getting harder and harder to understand, come on you guys

I have been subscribing to Q-reading to catch up, and finally the eunuch came...

They are all low-level spirits, what about concentration? Where is the soul? What about awakening? What about miracles? Where is the dream? The best output types are Awakening, Effort, Concentration, Iron Wall, Miracle, and Soul (because miracles in some machine battles add blood, so souls are needed as insurance)

The title of this book is too confusing. In fact, it is better to read this book as a mixture of UC, seed, and oo. Many people who come here for seed will have a huge difference from their own predictions after reading the content. Now that I see it, I personally feel that your writing is very good. Although you can sometimes guess the general flow of the completely original plot, yours is still much better than those books written with plots. Author, you can write just the background and not the plot. As long as the important character traits of the original work are retained, and don't resort to any overpowering sensationalism or intellectual subversion, your book is still very good. Come on, write more. Also, the author should change the introduction and add some information other than seed.

Does the author of Bloody Valentine plan to do something? Even if the nuclear bomb cannot be intercepted, at least Lenoa must be saved. The protagonist's Gundam is no longer just a skeleton, right? At least the name and number should be written down.

Will you accept beauties like Lux, Cagalli, Lunamaria, Meiling, Stella, Masuo, Bucky Lulu, Fleur, Mina, and Shiho?

The enemy appears too early, and it feels like the protagonist is Aeolia. There are only two people in Tianren's team now, Lei and Luo. I hope they can write the story well.

After reading Chapter 5, I found that the protagonist's use of skills consumes the upper limit of mental energy? The author is awesome. I have read novels for more than 30 years, and this is the first time I have seen this kind of setting.