The School Beauty Is Pursuing Her After Her Divorce. Stop Attacking Me!

When reading, there is always a grainy texture like brewing instant coffee or Ganmao Ling with cold water. Some of the plots are quite abrupt and lack foreshadowing, which makes people feel a little inconsistent. In addition, some details are somewhat inconsistent. Overall, the writing is pretty good. It would be better if these issues could be paid attention to.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

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I've been a bit strict lately 😢

Chapter 42 is so well written. I originally hated the second female lead, but I instantly felt sad.

(The sound of two kowtows could be heard in the distance)

At the beginning, I feel that the male protagonist is a CS

The creativity is very good, but the writing style is a bit immature, and sometimes it is forced to be sensational. If you want to be sensational, it is best to leave a foreshadowing. The emotional feeling also progresses too fast without any reason, and it is best to be consistent with realistic logic.

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Looking at the latest, it seems that there are at least three female protagonists. Jiang Ruoxi is Bai Yueguang, and Su Ning'er is Cinnabar Moles. Both heroines are quite good. The only feeling is that Su Ning'er is too wild. I feel that Jiang Ruoxi can't compete and will be bullied. I finally understand what the role of "Heehee's lifelong enemy" means🤭🤭

I think the most important bug is that the male protagonist asked the female protagonist to share the mission money, but later he said that he thought the female protagonist wanted to share the money because he was a rich second generation. But if he thought the female protagonist was rich, the female protagonist should not ask the protagonist to do the mission specifically for this money. The reason why the female protagonist made an excuse to go to the protagonist's house was "for the high tutoring fee." The heroine's mother helped explain when she called. No matter what, the protagonist's perspective cannot not know that the heroine's family is short of money, right?

As long as there is no girl behind, it's green, then it's OK

Can the author really master the writing of multiple female protagonists? How can the first female protagonist be so well portrayed in the early stage and then insert the second female protagonist? It looks like it will collapse, bro.

The writing is strong enough and the plot is interesting. I hope it can be maintained. I have added bookshelf and investment. 😁😁

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Like the title, by the way, I would like to ask if the author is an extraterrestrial demon or a reincarnation of the dirty land.

I don't understand, if the male protagonist is ordinary in all aspects, why would a bunch of female protagonists choose to marry the male protagonist? You have to give the male protagonist an appearance or a family background. Otherwise, I always feel that the basic logic does not make sense.

When the woman does the task, she talks to herself and is forced to do it. She relies on the audience to build momentum. She sees that she wants to go to his father again. From the perspective of the male protagonist, it is really disgusting. When writing it, can you switch the male and female positions to see if it is suitable?

It's really good. New ideas are beautiful.

The book Sapi Qidian's Harmony to the Eunuch was also pushed to me on the daily push? ? ? ?

Not bad. Great update! Month🎫Sends 😁

Doesn't the male protagonist have a cs personality at the beginning?

Anyway, it's all cut. Can you send out the cover?