Tokyo Love Story: Starting with a Tycoon's Daughter

The story is okay, but I feel that some details are missing and it seems loose. After I finish writing, maybe I can use deepseek to expand it and add some scene descriptions and psychological descriptions.

The subject matter and plot are okay, but the writing style is a bit stiff. If you don't care about writing style, you can read it as food.

I don't know if it's a good thing or a bad thing. I feel that the plot is very compact. There isn't much description in terms of word count, or there aren't a lot of details that could have been used to support the word count. I don't know if it's a good thing or a bad thing. I feel like I still need to add some detailed descriptions.

In the end, I cut it. After all, the writing style is still relatively immature and not many people read it. I think it will take five or six copies to get better.

The story is a good one and enough to keep me reading. It just doesn't read smoothly enough and doesn't fit in with my reading habits. You have to go through it in your head to figure out what it is about.