Choose One Out of Three Every Day, and My Body Will Become a Saint and I Will Be the Best in the World.

I found that the author describes too much about the troubles encountered by the supporting characters. Often several chapters are all about supporting characters, and the protagonist never shows up. The protagonist comes and goes, and the supporting characters are tortured by the villain.

Can the protagonist not be in a passive position? You only fight back after being slapped by others. You hit the young one and then the old one, over and over again. Don't create the kind of useless protagonist. Nowadays, offensive protagonists are more popular. Take the initiative, kill decisively, and eradicate the roots. An excellent cool novel must have a strong and courageous protagonist.

Anyway, I just write it with my hands closed, strength +1, muscle +1, reaction +1, and then keep copying and pasting, but I don't know the total number, and I don't know what state it is.

There are obviously so many channels, but if you have to catch a cigarette butt victim, just find a high-voltage substation, which can be super powerful every second.

The data is unknown, which is +1. The protagonist has amazing wisdom and discovers that second-hand smoke is effective. He smokes his friend's second-hand smoke like crazy, spits smoke rings into his mouth, buys some cockroach poison and rat poison, and goes to a chemical plant or sewage discharge site. Which one is not better than this?

Doing that every day makes you unhappy 🙂

I keep adding up all day long, adding one to the constitution, one to the vision, one to the skin defense, etc. After adding so many times, no one knows the specific attribute values ​​​​of the protagonist. After adding so many times, does the constitution reach 100? Or is it over 100? Could the author give a specific value?

Why should the protagonist follow the rules when others don't? Especially if you come into contact with that thing and negotiate terms, why don't you just grab it? I feel that in the protagonist's situation, there is no need to be afraid of a force that is still concerned about the person in charge.

The hook is too big, the description is not very exciting, and it feels a bit boring to watch.

Official superpowers are all eggless things. If these kind of things can control the officialdom, then the unofficial forces should be many and powerful.

Everyone brings evildoers, the protagonist is a good baby

It's so annoying. I can't stand seeing most of the indigenous protagonists now, because many things about the indigenous young age are difficult to explain. For example, it's hard to explain where the indigenous protagonist comes from if you give a plug-in. Then there are the mentality, way of doing things, world view, etc., Which are difficult to deal with.

He's just mentally retarded, but his intelligence is normal and he took off early.

I really tried shit, can you write it faster?

How do I feel like I've seen this before?

If you write so slowly, how can you reward me?

Author, have you calculated the protagonist's data? You didn't give a value for every bit of power. It was just water. You had no idea how perverted the character you had written for yourself and you were still a minor character in the novice village. It was so disappointing.

The villain is a bit brainless, and the backstory is basically invincible. Basically, the villain doesn't know the protagonist at all, so he acts blindly, and then the protagonist Haihu's explosive punch makes him see reality and recognize himself.

I've written so much, why do I have so few comments? I shouldn't.

To be honest, this idea is quite good, but the details and dialogue between the characters are too loose. To put it bluntly, the dialogue between the characters is a little bit mentally retarded. I can understand that the author wants to write a more funny style, but maybe the writing style is not very good.

This book has a lot of shortcomings. This kind of conceptual level is very open, but the author is a bit stupid and can't figure it out. He doesn't know what is negative and what is positive. There is also data to show the increase in physical fitness. There must be a basic plan. I only know how to add, add, add, and have no concept of how much. It doesn't show other people's cultivation methods. Could it be that they are born with certain levels?