Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Completing Qimen Techniques

It's a very traditional Mortal style, not too impressive, and the writing is not particularly good, but it's not bad either. But there is one thing that is really outrageous, and that is this golden finger. To be honest, I generally don't care whether the spirit stone economy collapses or not, but lifespan is still very important in the world of immortality. The protagonist begins 50 years ago. He only has four levels of major skills. It takes 10 years to complete. It takes one year to reach the first level of Qi training. It takes two years to reach the second level. It seems to take two years to reach the second level. The setting is that the more you practice, the harder it becomes. Every time you advance to a small level, your lifespan will increase by two years. , Which means that it will take at least seven or eight years to reach the fourth level of Qi training. It makes no sense for you to spend ten years in advance at the beginning, and then spend a few years of your life to learn some attack techniques. No life and no money), and it will take 7 years to complete the formation. This is what I don't understand the most. The formation is posted at the door of the store to fool people, and it is not a limited-time sale. You don't know whether you can collect all the materials, but the lifespan is given directly. I don't know, I think the protagonist has a lifespan of thousands of years. , The result is that after excluding these 7 years, the protagonist only has 30 years left to live. What is the concept? The protagonist is practicing on the second level of Qi at this time, and the Qi training period set in this book is thirteenth or twelve levels. The protagonist is still a pseudo-spiritual root, and his cultivation speed is slow. How confident is he that he will be able to break through the foundation building before his life span is exhausted? To be honest, the problem arises because the protagonist has not considered this issue at all. He regards his lifespan as a happy bean flower, and when he sees a good thing, he wants to spend his lifespan to make up for it. The question is, is this necessary? It's like there are only fragments in this world. Except for the special main technique, the other techniques are only a little stronger at best. Is it worth exchanging lifespan in the early stage of Qi training when lifespan is still insufficient? What's more, the protagonist is still walking in the right path, not fighting if he can, and hiding and practicing if he can. The meaning of changing so many offensive spells is even more unclear. It would be more logical for you to change two ancient spells that perfectly hide the aura and then hide in the mountains.

Isn't the only protagonist in this world a waste? Why. Are all people targeting the protagonist? All kinds of ugly words are used to curse the protagonist in half of a chapter? Are all people geniuses?

There is something wrong with the setting of this book. Golden Finger can only use his lifespan to complete the skills, and he doesn't have much lifespan. He is also a garbage in cultivation and a loser in understanding. And there is a small level ahead, one or two years. Then the protagonist's lifespan will not be enough. So in order to justify it. Later, the author can only arrange adverse weather luck. Might as well add one more. The protagonist completes the skills and automatically learns to master them.

So far, the content written by the author is quite good. The protagonist and supporting characters are very smart, and they don't play the kind of plot that forcibly reduces the intelligence. This is very good, but one problem is that the plot is too bland, and this golden finger that uses lifespan to supplement the skills and spells is not enough according to the protagonist's current path. At present, these are the ones I can think of. Road, one is that the protagonist gets a great opportunity and gets a lot of lifespan, one is that the golden finger evolves, and there are other ways to reduce the cost, and the other is to reduce the lifespan requirement through self-improvement of skills and spells. This golden finger must be that the more perfect the skills, the less lifespan is consumed, and the protagonist can use this method to test the success of the completion. I would like to give some more suggestions to the author. Just like the name of your novel, start with completing the Qimen magic. You can actually use these Qimen magic, just like you made the bean soldiers grow bigger and smaller for exploration. This is a very good point. It can be used in other mortal streams. Monsters or powerful spiritual consciousness or other things, the fact that your novel uses strange magic and magic, which is familiar to everyone, can give your protagonist more distinctive traits and make the plot less bland, so that your novel can be interesting.

I feel like the third golden chapter was not written well. The subject matter is good, and friends with better writing skills can try writing similar ideas. The content is not recommended for everyone to write and study. It is completely prepared to be filled with water. The first level of qi training has gone through a lot of hardships, which is directly the lower limit for those who travel through the heavens. The first few pictures do not reflect the characteristics of the protagonist, so they are not good food.

With this setting, even the Yuanying family would not be able to cultivate 4 spiritual roots! 4 Spiritual Roots are complete and absolute trash! There is no value in cultivating anything! In the entire world of cultivating immortals, almost everyone has spiritual roots of 3 or above! The Tianling Root is 100 times faster than the 4 Spiritual Roots! ! ! With the addition of elixirs, exercises, blessed lands, and spiritual stones, the Heavenly Spiritual Root is 200 times faster than the 4 Spiritual Roots? 300 Times? How outrageous! And the Tianling Root appeared so soon? Can this small sect be saved? ? Is Tianlinggen so worthless? Also, the protagonist got the elixir given by the "Sweeping Monk", and he just happened to break through to the first level of Qi Refining on the day of the Dust Cleansing Ceremony! If the protagonist doesn't have the elixir, wouldn't he be useless? Then why was the protagonist so confident and calm when he had conversations with Tieniu and others before? It takes 3,600 weeks to convert it into usable spiritual power! ! Can the meridians bear it? Even if there is a bottleneck setting, the difference in cultivation speed is too outrageous! People with good spiritual roots also have elixirs and the like! With this setting, even if it is the Yuanying family, the 4th spirit root must go away. The 4th spirit root is not worthy of cultivation! I have read Chapter 5 so far, and the author's writing style is fine. To be honest, the writing style is better than that of Tang Jia San Shao. But Tang Jia San Shao has already become famous and has made enough money, so he can write whatever he wants. But if a new author wants to get ahead, he must polish, polish, refine, and write with heart However, from the current description, cultivation is too difficult! Too slow! Too slow! The gap between foundation building and Qi refining is extremely huge! ! In the eyes of the foundation-building monks, the first level of Qi Refining is like an ant! During the test, the elder of the sword level was actually very interested in the protagonist of the first level of Qi Refining? He doesn't know that the protagonist is cheating! If you practice the residual method, it will become useless! What about the strength of the foundation-building monks? Take a look at the book "Exploding Little Latte". Although foundation building is also an ant, high-level monks must be strong against low-level monks! Hey, you can still read it after a quick look. The writing is fine. The author must have an outline and have thought about how to write it. But many settings don't make sense. 4 Spiritual roots cost 3600 weeks at a time! ! Too outrageous! The protagonist said: "If you want to win, don't be afraid of losing." But the protagonist actually lost! ! The protagonist has lost! ! Even if the protagonist has a cheat, it is impossible to reach the first level of Qi Refining before the Dust Cleansing Ceremony! ! It was because the author gave the protagonist a bottle of elixir that he arrived at the first floor on the day of the Dust Cleansing Ceremony! There is absolutely no need to write so cleverly here!

The protagonist has such useless qualifications, understanding, and background (resources). How far can he go even if a plug-in supplements his skills? This plug-in must add at least one function, that is, the skill that is supplemented by lifespan will directly allow the protagonist to realize the full level or automatically match the protagonist's qualifications and understanding, so as to make up for the protagonist's useless qualifications, understanding, and origin (resources)! To put it bluntly, if a top-notch skill can make a loser rise, then this skill is unlikely to be incomplete and leaked. How powerful can a sect with such a loser's qualifications be able to practice and improve the skill without any obstacles?

Plug-ins are of no use except for completing the exercises, and they cannot improve the qualifications and cultivation speed. Completing the exercises is really useless. Also, it is so easy for the demonic sect to seize the body, and the righteous path is nothing. By the way, the righteous path is not righteous either.

There is no feeling of pleasure, and the hang-up is too small. Open another forum to share the completed exercises for others to practice and gain life span and take off immediately 🤓🤓

The settings are too bad to go far.

You have to spend your lifespan to complete the skills and practice. If you are not qualified enough, if you complete the skills and practice, you are still a waste, so this kind of subject matter is garbage.

I'm speechless to waste so much pen and ink on just one qigong method. Is your qigong method precious in the world of immortality? So in the end, isn't the golden elixir Yuanying's skill rare to see for thousands of years?

It's finally time to build the foundation. Oh my god, it's so slow! But overall it looks pretty good, and it can be regarded as a good source of food

Please give me some suggestions, the hang-up is too small. It is too difficult to develop the four spiritual roots.

The progress is too slow. It's basically the same as a short story about a family. It doesn't have any ups and downs at all. It's almost hypnotic. It's even duller than farming articles.

He already has four spiritual roots, so why not make the five elements complete to give the protagonist a chance to make a comeback?

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Very general, I just want to ask the author a question If there is a waste in the world of immortality, and theoretically he knows all the techniques and elixirs (that is, the strongest form of the protagonist's cheat), then can he defeat all the geniuses and reach the top?

{"TopicId":"1134215008248266752","TopicName":"Collection of Masterpieces"}The writing is okay, keep it up

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Regarding this issue, I think the writing is good, but many authors fail to finish the book as soon as they finish it. . . . .

Oh, what a pity, I was watching it with gusto

During the first sect mission, no one was around to collect the elixir. That means you can collect as much as you want without having to hand it over.

"Planting a Immortal Way", a farming article, interested Taoist friends can take a look 🙂