Is Your Armor Legal?

1. Added the setting of "Special Miaozhi", which is different from the "power of ten people" of conventional Miaozhi. People such as Yalie will have extra strength. The relevant description is reflected in that fight - the protagonist realizes that Yalie's power exceeds more than ten people, close to fifteen people. 2. Added some descriptions of the battle, showing that after the protagonist used various skills, they still failed to work due to the opponent's strength. 3. Yalie is designed according to the outline and plays a relatively important role. There is really no way to change his death this time, so I can only apologize~ ——Thank you readers for your continued corrections 😚😚

After reading U's opinions on the book, I personally think there should be more female protagonists

A lot of people have been talking about the issue of the female supporting role in your previous book. I hope your new book won't touch on these aspects too much 🙂

I have read the author's Tokyo Judo. From the perspective of a 24-year-old Internet reader with more than 10 years of experience, I have finished reading it, and I think it is quite good. I am looking forward to reading the author's next wonderful work. Come on, author.

The reinforcement is too scattered. I used to think that armor was like a roguelike game, which could be built with a lot of enhancements. The result was a gaudy form. It cost several times the resources to raise only forms with different tendencies after adding points, and the build was even invisible. The protagonist now relies on the high drop rate to raise a few more sets of forms, and then there is no difference in strength, and even the strength is one level lower (the resource consumption multiplier between each level, if you only raise one set, it is enough to upgrade by one level).

It's nice to read, but I found that this kind of novel has a common problem. When playing games, you only play with numerical values. It's hard to find a place to develop. In the later stage, when the numerical values ​​explode, even a god can be killed directly with a knife. There is no development time at all. I just traveled through time, and then encountered some duel. , These novels have this common problem of not being able to just develop, even if they don't give them time to develop, and the concept of leading a teacher and accepting a disciple feels inexplicable, and when writing novels, write novels, and don't touch on realistic things. Every time you read a novel, you must touch on realistic things. I feel quite uncomfortable.

Next time you encounter this Ya Lie, if you can't hack him to death in one set, there's no need to read this book. He's already learning to get out of here, instead of learning his previous violent writing style, and learning his current stinky and long writing style.

The writing is good, the spirit is high, the routine is old, too traditional, and the taste is exquisite. In summary, it's like a steamed bun with a burnt surface and a tangy aroma, but the content is dry and tasteless. If you are surrounded by junk novels, you can read it. In other words, spiritual desert, you can also look at it. After all, it fills the stomach. It can be regarded as the first work of the great internet writer. The mainstay of the online literary world, except for its lack of innovation. Top writers create their own ideas and writing styles. The first level is a master, the second level is an expert. I don't see any shortcomings, it should be the second gear. The third level is those who have no money to cultivate and belong to professional gunmen or professional writers.

I'm tired of watching without a female protagonist, and now I'm starting to watch more female protagonists. I heard that the author plans to have more female protagonists, and I hope the author can keep it 😁😁😁

At present, I don't see the use of the secret method. There is not much advantage in damage, and it also consumes energy. The protagonist cannot recover this energy on his own, so he has to use it. It turns out that the protagonist just likes to choose the secret method. It is better to choose skills. There is basically no consumption except for the cooldown. The damage is not much weaker than the secret method. Various mechanisms are also added. The protagonist does not choose such a powerful thing, but actually chooses the secret method.

Do you really plan to hide and transform whenever something happens like Ultraman? It feels quite low, and the feeling of pleasure that I should have had is completely gone because of this kind of operation of walking in brocade clothes at night. . . If you plan to hide it in the future, just say it With such weak force, it is impossible to compete with technology, but with such a big say in the world, this kind of bug makes people unable to think about it, and all the excitement has been confiscated by Jinyi Yexing. . .

I feel that the subject matter of this book is quite good, but there are a few shortcomings that I want to point out. 1. The concentration of exciting points is not enough Generally speaking, novels that can attract the public have one general characteristic: there must be some exciting points in about ten chapters. But the protagonist's armor setting goes against this. The degree of liberation required for different functions is getting wider and wider, resulting in the fun points being further and further behind. Although I know that 30% or 50% can be satisfying, it is difficult for me to insist on it. Because it takes several chapters for the protagonist to liberate one percent, and each liberation goal has to be rushed. I feel very tired when I put it in. The protagonist's system has changed from a meat pigeon to a level-breaking system, and there are few channels for obtaining resources, which is also an unpleasant point. My personal suggestion is to enable one function every 5%, so as to ensure that the cool points are evenly distributed. 2. There are too many upgrade paths in the early stage In fact, before the dragon knight form is unlocked, you can have three or less forms. Many book friends have also given feedback that it is too complicated, and they should try to avoid upgrading too many forms. It's not cool that unlocking the form cannot bring about actual improvement in combat power. I see that now it seems that the protagonist has many skills but only uses a few. 3. Insufficient updates, it feels like it's gone soon.

This book is a stand-alone dream. The whole world revolves around the protagonist. It is recommended to wait until the book is finished and read it in one sitting. As for the other ones, they are really gone. They have advantages and disadvantages, and they are not obvious. If you read them, they will be tasteless and it will be a pity to abandon them.

Inexplicable battles. If you have skills, don't use them. Just keep them as decorations.

The first point is that the progress is slow. You can change the map like crazy, but you can't keep progressing, and there is no sense of excitement at all The writing is okay, but the more you read, the more boring it becomes. I went crazy with skills and ordered a bunch of useless things. I can't feel that the protagonist has become stronger every time. Adding points for the first time is almost the same as not adding anything The main character has no subjective initiative at all. He is as stable as when I play the game every day to collect food, and then log off after collecting it I must have read 500,000 words, and I can't remember any climax of the plot. I originally played The game should be the climax of the plot, but the author's writing is very bland, and there is no ups and downs in the heart at all The author really needs to learn how to write so that people can read it happily. I recommend a few books for you to read "The Man at the Top of the Food Chain" "Silent Killing" " "One knife splits the road between life and death" The expressiveness of words when fighting, and when you should show off, show off, and stop being ordinary. I originally had to go to bed at one or two o'clock in the evening when I read novels, but after reading your book these days, I fell asleep at eleven or twelve o'clock. It's colder than Bo🥶

The cliché plot is enough to be read in Shuhuang

I just found out that the previous book is finished. I hope the heroine in this article will not make the same mistake as the previous one. Don't let the teacher let the male protagonist be taken advantage of by the heroine and then do that and that.

To be honest, what I wrote earlier is pretty good. But when I came out of that place later, I had to challenge the martial arts gym. The idea is obviously wrong. You are equivalent to switching from a free individual type directly to an academic type. If you are academic from beginning to end, there are people who love to watch academic. If it is a freelance type, people will still read it from beginning to end. But you... When I saw it, I said I wanted to challenge the martial arts school, and then I immediately stopped watching. Before that, I had been chasing...

I finished reading it within an hour after adding it yesterday. Let me share my personal feelings: First of all, the selection of the material is quite good. Individual force versus technology is a subject that has been written by many people in recent years. The more famous ones include "Starting from a Nuclear Explosion" by Chengfeng Yujian, "I Can Return to the Mysterious Era" by Gray Tombstone, and "Starting from Invincible Boxing" by San Shengyu; these are more representative works in my personal opinion. Then talking about this new book, I can clearly see the shadows of several authors at first glance, Go Away, Night and Snow, and Big Pineapple. These three are all relatively pioneering authors in the Yakuza style, and the results of their works are also acceptable. Having said a lot, it feels like it's all nonsense. Anyway, there are a lot of reference works in the past. It is not uncommon these days for you to copy me and me to copy you. As long as the author can add his own style on the basis of his predecessors, the result should not be too bad. After all, books and readers screen each other.

A kid like Xiaoyu has a bad temperament, no strength and no background. He keeps pestering the male protagonist all day long. Why does the male protagonist like such a child who doesn't speak the same topic or language? Can you really stand it?

It feels like the setting. If anyone has seen it, can you tell me?

Shennong Good grass is currently non-toxic and has no obvious signs of collapse. Plug-ins are the armors and individual skills that can be unlocked by brushing the dungeon in the dream. Currently 84,000 words, and there is potential to keep it, waiting for the follow-up.

Let me go. It turns out that you wrote "The God of Soldiers"

I just wanted to catch up on reading but it's finished 😅 It's a million words and I can't get enough of it.

I thought the chapter rating ratio was at least 1:2. Was it because my poison resistance was too high? Or is it too simple as a combat novel? The fighting style of this book is close to that of colonial costume, which is quite interesting, but the costumes are less than the scenes, and the emotional lines are bland Overall, it is good

The plot has a smooth rhythm, food and grass!

The last time I watched Mecha was Legend of Minion

Next, I started chasing the King of Transcendence🙂🙂🙂

Why do you feel that your combat power has increased too quickly and is about to end?

I'm so anxious, I'll book everything for you with this number