
Naruto: I Am Refining the Magic Weapon in Sunagakure
火影之我在砂隐炼法宝
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- Completed
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- 557k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Look, it's the genius puppet master of Sand Hidden Village, idiot.
I have to say that the name of the protagonist, whether it is a joke or unintentional, is a bit hasty.
A distinctive name
The plot design is wrong. The protagonist is a genius puppet master. He has developed special puppets at a certain age. He graduates early and does not go to the village to do research. How can he be arranged to be thrown into the ANBU? On the first mission, he runs out of the village to perform a high-risk mission. Do you have no brains at all?
I found that many people complained about the protagonist's name
I found that a lot of people complained about the protagonist's name. How about changing the protagonist's name from "Sabino" to "Hoshino"? There is a wild character in it!
The writing is terrible, as innocent as a fool, has a golden finger to copy and copy, and can't beat a passerby. A character who can't even copy is called a genius. I'm not joking internationally.
Scientists go to compete in the octagonal cage. It makes me laugh so hard. I deserve it because I can't bear the wind.
After reading so many Naruto novels, most of the protagonists are struggling to develop, especially those who need accumulation and later stages, but there are really not many late stage ones like the Puppet Master who take the initiative to graduate. . . .
Or how to design the plot? How can a scientific genius not live well? After graduating from the third grade, you will be assigned A-level and S-level tasks as soon as you graduate? I really don't understand what the author was thinking?
I haven't read it yet, but the most important thing about puppets is not their use, but their research and development capabilities. It's easy to get into trouble when writing about puppets. In addition, although Shenji Bairen can refine weapons, he still has to rely on himself to explore more, just like Ruhua. There is modern technology in it. Don't take it for granted when writing. The focus is on details and research and development. Just like Kankuro and Scorpion, one can only use and the other can research and develop. If the ninja world is not low-minded, Gundam, drone swarms, etc., It can also be played.
In a one-person setting, the innate Qi Qi is born (people without innate Qi are dead) and then practice and use the acquired Qi. The Qi gained is the Qi felt and used in the body. The protagonist you wrote does not have the innate Qi in the body, but directly uses the Qi/energy outside the body. You might as well write about the localization of Shenji Bailian and directly use chakra.
As soon as I saw the name on the resume, I didn't want to read it. The author didn't know the current person, so I wouldn't read it if the protagonist's name was ridiculous.
The protagonist is a puppet master, a profession that requires a lot of scientific research time. Is it really good to graduate early and go out to do tasks? What's more, shouldn't a talented seed player like the protagonist be well protected? When the development is big, if something unexpected happens and the name of the genius is widely spread, it will be interesting to meet a certain snake or the like. Although it can be said, ah~ my support staff is protected by teammates, so be careful and be careful about your seniority. But friends who have played competitive games all know that support is a high-risk group... It takes seconds to show up. When the time comes, my teammates will give me another word of assistance. Explain to the leader after the game: If you can't save him, recruit another one. The seeds cannot germinate, so we can't let the protagonist find the reason by himself...🥺
Looking at the title, I thought you were going to practice the Human Emperor Banner.
Temari is really ugly, you might as well just go to Granny Chiyo to get it
He's back to Blue Star to lick the government again, and he's also a talented person
Are there no bad people in the ninja world?
Why is Grandma Chiyo so inexplicably so good to him? The whole village's resources are tilted towards him, and she can still have access to tailed beasts, holy shit? ? You can beat a Jonin in a life-and-death battle at the age of 8. You are even more exaggerated than Naruto! !
Big update
Mouth! ! !
I only read the front part, and I feel that the author is a newbie, and many parts of his writing are very illogical. For example, the protagonist's output puppet will only be a one-time explosive spider puppet. Is it too much money? (The detonating talisman in the original book is also expensive. Don't tell me your spider puppet is cheap.) Wouldn't the protagonist use a puppet that can be used repeatedly in front of him like a normal puppet master? It's not like you can only kill a beast by exploding spiders and still get injured. Also, giving the protagonist ten puppets a few hours before Chiyo's mission is ridiculous. Do you think any puppet master in the original novel has so many puppets? (Except for Kage-level Chiyo and Scorpion) It takes a long time to adapt to all the puppet's mechanisms and use them in battle. It's ridiculous that the protagonist can use it immediately.
Hey, I have an idea
I am refining the Ninja Emperor Banner in the Ninja World. Jpg
What kind of magic weapon should I refine? It is very good to practice the world training in the whole ninja world. There are exactly 5 countries and 5 places to mark. Anyway, the shitty ninjas don't care. They spend ten years collecting Philosopher's Stone paintings ○ (refining formation)
The idea is not bold enough
How about learning from Emperor Zun who covers the sky to refine the entire world into a world cauldron?
The author will update it carefully, don't worry. Although your ability to pick names is a mess, the plot also has some things that make people complain. But so far it is still a good book worth reading. As long as your plot doesn't break down, I will subscribe. Come on!
I hope to collect more. After all, there are many beauties in Naruto, and many of them have bad endings.