Naruto: I, Corpse Bone Pulse, Byakugan Ji

It can be said that it is very good. It is not an old-fashioned start. I want to return to the plot line, and there are no nonsensical goals and dreams. The protagonist is also a normal person. After traveling through Naruto, he should have a mind and survive by any means. This alone is very difficult. I will not comment too much on the rationality of the plot. In everyone's mind All Naruto stories are different If I have to say it, I hope the author can handle it well. The protagonist returns to Hinata. Hinata may not necessarily accept the protagonist's identity as an outsider. According to the Hyuga clan's view, blood leakage is a capital crime, not to mention the protagonist, the descendant of a sinner, so this is something that needs to be handled well. Finally, according to the current timeline, it is the time when the Fourth Mizukage just released the genjutsu. It should be around Konoha 54, but it is not sure. After all, the original work did not explain it. However, at this time point, the protagonist and Naruto are the same age. It is also because of this that if the protagonist arrives in Konoha at this time point, he will be subject to a lot of suspicion. Most of the key plots will start after this point, so this is also a difficult place to deal with. PS: My personal expectation is not to overwhelm Danzo. Danzo has done so much dirty work, but there are so many unnatural operations. Most Naruto stories are "Leave this child to me and give you a war machine." Why is there such an expectation? Because as the protagonist, Danzo cannot avoid it

This is the first time I have seen a fanfic that mainly develops the Corpse Veins route. What attracts me most about this book is the various settings, such as the setting of chakra seeds, the linkage and cooperation of Kaguya's four major bloodline abilities, the nature of the changes in the five attributes of chakra and the principle of restraint, etc. It is on the basis of these settings that the protagonist's rapid growth in strength is reasonable and reasonable. And even if the protagonist is so talented, has such resources and teachers, it is extremely difficult to develop a new technique that can suppress his own corpse vein blood stain disease. Comparing this article to other Naruto fans is like science versus liberal arts. The strength of the protagonist in most other Naruto fanfics either comes from the system and other products that transcend the Naruto worldview, or is given by the author for free (crossed out). The beginning of the article is so strong or does not show the specific process of becoming stronger, or it comes from the imaginative scientific research of liberal arts students (anyway, I don't know why there are so many scientific researchers in Naruto but not as good as the protagonist in scientific research, so just the protagonist's research is enough). It mainly talks about plot, politics, character relationships, plus some battle scenes. Of course, this article is not only excellent in setting, but also very good in plot and combat scene descriptions (there are still some bugs in the plot, but they are just minor bugs). Finally, I hope there will be more updates every day.

It still looks good, at least for now

The Byakugan clan girl outside Konoha is unreasonable in the first place, and it is even more unreasonable if she is not a reproductive machine 🙂

There are certain logical problems. For example, killing people in Konoha is indeed a bit reckless. Another point is, why not choose to go to Iwagakure Village? Ohnoki is obviously more willing to accept a blood-stained ninja like the protagonist. There is no such person as Dango over there. Iwagakure is inexperienced and can even be regarded as a shadow if he works hard. In my opinion, Iwagakure Village is more suitable for the protagonist. Of course, the overall content is still very good. I personally like it very much. It is regarded as the food of Hokage. Come on, the author.

Have you ever been a ninja? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Anyone can discover the protagonist! ... None of the various accidents go smoothly! Abuse in disguise

Author, please don't write too much about the plot of children's play house. Just leave enough space. The background of the ninja world is cruel and ruthless, and the protagonist does not have much time to grow up.

This is the ninth female-fronted article I've seen on men's videos this month. I feel like there have been more of them recently.

Since the protagonist wants to be the goddess of the sun alongside Kaguya, the goddess of the moon, let's call her Amaterasu from now on. The best portrait can be based on Onmyoji's Amaterasu. But I think the Japanese are quite funny. Amaterasu is considered the god king of the Japanese pantheon, but the name is given to the basic attack of pink eye. Instead, a bunch of place names and gods with no origins are given to powerful skills. Maybe this is Japan's unique way of defeating the top?

The ANBU of Konoha wiped out the entire Uchiha clan head-on. It was written that dozens of ANBU chuunin and jounin cooperated with each other to wipe out the Uchiha. No one died, and only one injured person was rescued by a medical ninja. The strongest description of the Anbu of Konoha in any Naruto fanfic I have ever seen.

It's not that I haven't watched it for 2 days, it's just the chuunin exam, and I saw the title finale. .

Maybe the author's understanding of Shuangdian is a little one-dimensional? I can find at least two exciting points in the outline sent by the author: First, the strength is crushed. The author said that the protagonist's combat power increases too quickly, and the plot is a bit wasted. But there is also a way to write invincible, which is to crush. As long as the author changes the way the battle is written, don't use the water gun. Every time the water gun feels like it can't kill anyone. In the previous plot, it was quite interesting to use the trance air strike to crack the sky. Let's change the outline a little bit, delete the plot of Team 7 working together to break the seal, and change it to the main character leaving a back-up, and after being sealed, rely on the back-up to break the seal, and break through the overwhelming invincible situation. The second is the realization of the blood inheritance snare. This thing is originally a carrot dangled in front of our readers, and it is inherently fun to eat it. (ps: I read it on QQ, but many authors don't seem to read the comments there)

The biggest problem is that it is too short, and the outline is broken after the chuunin exams. I think the writing is relatively good, and it is considered to be above average among the Naruto fics I have read. The battles are quite vivid, and the plot development is reasonable. Another problem is that it feels like it was born too late, and the improvement in strength is a bit urgent.

Are you the author of Naruto: The Strongest Water Release? The section on developing high-pressure water jets is exactly like this book. The style of writing about the endurance of scientific research is also very similar.

I feel very relieved to see the protagonist enter school without forgetting his original intention and only wanting to become stronger. By the way, I don't seem to know the protagonist's Chakra attributes (relying on swallowing nine tailed beasts to gradually acquire all five elements?), And what about the Yin Escape talent in mental illusions (only planning to follow the barbarian route? Taijutsu: Eight Gate DunjiaYou can learn and train hard fists from Metkai Hyuga Soft FistCurrently it can only be cracked from Neci Thunder Dunnin TaijutsuFirst study a crude version on your own Medical Ninjutsu: Use the Byakugan clairvoyance to recordHakusenjutsu Chakra flow Self-taught, and then learn medical treatment from Tsunade ( You can also get Strange Power, Yin Seal, and Moist Bone Forest Contract) Shennong is also good at medical treatment, and has forbidden skills Physical Regeneration and Activation. The protagonist can fight By the way, he can also eat Zero Tails Wood Release: Captured by Danzo (? No) and accepted for human experimentation and transplantation of Hashirama cells (white bones can replace Sharingan Ping) Hengmu transformation? ), Demonstrated wood escape, and was protected by Sarutobi Hiruzen (? A bit too idealistic) Sage Mode: Use "Perfect Container" to seduce Orochimaru to set Curse Seal, learn it first Jugo's version of sage transformation, if you have a chance to learn the Shiggou Forest Tailed Beast Chakra: On the night of the Uchiha genocide, Konoha's manpower was tight, inducing Naruto to go berserk, taking chestnuts from the fire, and taking the opportunity to devour Nine-tailed Chakra During the Chūnin Examination, Hokage's Master and Disciple were fighting to attract attention, swallowing Gaara'sOne-tailed Chakra, and taking advantage of the chaos to steal the book of seals and learn to fly the Thunder God

Nowadays, the easiest way to achieve the Six Paths level combat power is the reincarnated eye after the Byakugan evolution. The reincarnated eye requires a large amount of Byakugan. This is the fastest way. It depends on the protagonist's choice.

What I feel is that at the end, the protagonist's combat power is too high, and the author doesn't know how to write it, resulting in a very rushed ending, which can be said to be unfinished.

1.Senju clan (direct line of Hagoromo and Asura) Bloodline characteristics: The ultimate Yang escape power + Chakra‌ Massive reserves Physical activation and Self-healing ability Limit of Blood Succession: Wood Release (The nature of earth and water changes and merges, only Hashirama awakens in the whole clan, special attack on tailed beasts) Representative Technique: True Thousands of Hands·Buddha on the Top, the advent of the Flower and Tree Realm, the birth of the Tree Realm, Immortal Technique·Myojin Gate Evolution path: sage physique→Wood Release Awakening+Sage Mode→Ten-Tails Jinchūriki (formation into a divine tree) Final level ability: The birth of the God Tree World Survival status: The tribe gave up their surnames and merged into Konoha, the bloodline was diluted with marriage, and Hashirama cells were used for human experiments by Orochimaru/Danzo 2. The Uzumaki clan (Hagoromo and Asura branch) Bloodline characteristics: Supervitality, huge chakra capacity, longevity constitution, tailed beast chakra resistance blood inheritance limit: None, the core inheritance is Sealing Technique System (Vajra Sealing) and Detection Ninjutsu (Kagura Heart Eye) Representative Technique: Sealing Techniques: Nine Seals of Fantasy Dragons, Sealing of Corpses, Four Elephants Seal, Four Elephants Seal, Bagua Seal Evolution Path: Whirlpool Physique→Perfect Jinchuuriki+Sage Mode→Six Paths Sage Mode (Given by Yin-Yang Release) Final Level Ability: Six Paths·Earth Explosion Star Survival status: Because of their special abilities, they were surrounded and exterminated by various countries. Only Koso and Naruto survived 3. The Uchiha clan (direct line of Hagoromo and Indra) Bloodline characteristics: The power of escape (catalysis of extreme emotions) Illusion talent (rewriting the rules of reality) Blood inheritance limit: (Single/Double/Three Magatama) Sharingan→ (Eternal) Kaleidoscope→Reincarnation Eye (requires Asura Chakra to be opened, Six Paths Senjutsu Chakra to accelerate) →Reincarnation Sharingan (swallowing the fruit of the sacred tree) Representative Technique: Kaleidoscope: Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, Susanōhu, Kamui, Betsutenjin, Kaguto Mingmi Samsara Eye: Six Paths and Outer Paths (multiple abilities), Tenshou Power, Rinnomb·Border Prison, Tenzhi Zhenxing, Gaohuangsanlingzun Final Level Ability: Infinite Tsukuyomi, Ama no Gochu, Huangquan Hirazaka Survival status: Only Sasuke survives, continuing the bloodline 4. Hyuga clan, Lunar Otsutsuki clan (direct line of Hamura) Bloodline characteristics:  Byakugan's basic ability: Multiple vision within 360°1 km, see clearly the flow of chakra in the human body's meridians and acupuncture points (perspective, telescope, insight), equipped with Soft Boxing System (acupoint blocking) Blood succession limit:                 Byakugan  →Tensei Eye(Hinata Pure Byakugan + Otsutsuki Hamura Chakra Fusion) →Jingyan(Otsutsuki Hybrid Variation) Representative Technique: Soft Fist: Bagua Sixty-four Palms, Kaitian, Kongbi Palm Reincarnation Eye: Ginrin Reincarnation Explosion, Gold Reincarnation Explosion, Space Control, Spirit Ball Final Level Ability:    Yashigogami Air Strike, Rabbit Hair Needle Survival Status:  Hyuga maintains the system of clan division, and only Otsutsuki Toneri is left among the descendants of the moon 5. The Taketori clan (Kaguya's side branch) Bloodline characteristics: "Corpse" physique: Physical strength that relies on taijutsu, and a fighting style that is fearless of pain and death The blood inheritance of "bone": free control of bone growth (blood inheritance disease backfires, blood cell failure is prone to early death, and the prototype of gray bones is killed together) Blood inheritance limit: Corpse bone veins Representative technique: Dance of early fern, dance of maidenhair, dance of Karamatsu, dance of tsubaki, dance of willow, ten-finger piercing bullet Evolution path:  Suppress blood disease (Hashirama cells/vitality) → Combined with Yin and Yang escape → Kaguya version of corpse bone veins Final level ability: Killing the Bones Together Survival Status: The rebellion was wiped out by Kirigakure Village, and Kimimaro was completely destroyed after his death

The author is too cruel and the knife is too cruel. The Team 7 team that had been helping him was cruelly stabbed by the protagonist. Although it is logical, the logic is also set by the author, which means that he will be ruthless from the beginning. I can't bear to repay kindness with hatred. Too little fun.

Advantages: 1. The protagonist's life experience (white eyes + corpse veins). The starting point should not have written about this yet. 2. Have your own understanding of the power system (changes in nature, changes in form, etc.), Which has surpassed many fan fiction. 3. In shaping the protagonist, what attracts me most is the relationship between the protagonist and his mother, and the empathy for Sasuke when the Uchiha clan was exterminated. Disadvantages: 1. The plot is written too slowly, and the plot time passes slower than real time. I have only seen good online articles written in this way in the book "The Otaku Witch". 2. The pits were dug too fast. The genocide pit in Kirigakure Village, the Hinata pit in Konoha Village, and the Byakugan pit in Raikage Village all popped up one after another. However, the protagonist is currently incapable of solving them, and he couldn't show off his joy. It gave me a very aggrieved feeling, even though Hui Li is very powerful (jounin?). 3. The main story question, at the beginning it felt like the Kirigakure version of Uchiha (Taketori)'s Revenge, then it felt like Naruto Ryuu Aoten (Beyond Otsutsuki), and now it feels like "This is our bond with Konoha"? 4. In fan works, readers have preferences for the characters in the original Naruto novels, and some of them enjoy them (you blame me). The author needs to consider the interaction between the protagonist and the original character. This was the first time I saw the protagonist bullying (?) Hinata in a Naruto fanfic. The above is my impression after reading

Have you started doing tasks at this time? I feel invincible.

? ?? The direct ending of the Chunin Exam? Brother, can't you add some Dragon Veins and write it in the normal timeline, or add a bit of Boruto's story about traveling through time and writing one or two hundred more chapters?

What's the new book? What's the new book? What's the new book? What's the new book? What's the new book?

This book has too many flaws. You can read it even if you throw away your brain. Just give you poison from time to time. Also convinced. . .

Why haven't you opened a new book yet 😆

I highly recommend that the author is very good, and the details are really well grasped. The best part is the character creation, which is simply amazing.

It's a pity that the plot behind it is too fast and I finished it in one go.

It's over. The author will work hard in the next book to control the speed of combat power development.

The biggest common problem is that only the protagonist is upgraded. If the overall strength can be strengthened, the villain must also become stronger.