Devouring the Starry Sky: Giving Disciples a Hundredfold Return

It's boring. Luo Feng was killing people on the battlefield outside the territory, and you just crossed over and became a stellar slave.

Find a genius with a high return rate and give him as a disciple. Will the protagonist be returned to a more talented person?

The writing is good. I used to think that the Devouring fans would always follow Luo Feng all the way with sparks and lightning, as if they were chasing after something. With such a grand world view, wouldn't it be better to borrow it and write another story slowly?

Devouring fandoms now all start on Earth. Even if they don't start on Earth, they are right next to the timeline and follow the original work within a few chapters. I was so confused that I don't know what the authors thought. A lot of books are actually pretty good, and the writing style is good, but they just have to rely on the plot and can't understand it. How many billions of epochs are ahead of the protagonist? Can he be born in the early days of the original universe or in the same era as the original ancestors? If not, he can also be in the same era of chaos. There is a system for time travel. Without the original plot, it cannot develop? It's just my writing that's not good, otherwise I would have written a book. Listen to others' advice and eat enough. These authors are not on the same page as their readers. If they want to make money, they have to see what the readers want to see. Writing fan fiction is not original writing. Fan fiction is most taboo about changing settings. You can add your own stuff, but the basic settings cannot be changed. If you want to write your own stuff, write original stuff, maybe it will become popular. I'm not talking about the author of this book. I think this book is quite good, but the author is so unsatisfactory that there are too many people, complaining, and devouring his colleagues. I searched all over the earth.

I was immediately poisoned after seeing Chapter 15. I dared to directly search the peak and the earth in the virtual universe without even knowing the timeline.

It's quite innovative. By the time the protagonist grows up, City Lord Luo will have already killed everyone.

There is a bug. As long as the weapon is not returned by the system, you can return critical hits to the apprentice. You give the apprentice a third-level weapon and return a fourth-level weapon. I think this is what you wrote. You sell the fourth level, buy another fourth level, give it to your apprentice, and get N times the critical hit back, and so on. You can make endless nests of dolls and make a fortune. Don't you have all the cultivation resources you need?

Basic data: The high-level cosmic kingdom represents the Qianwu cosmic kingdom. There are more than 100 million galaxies in its territory, and it has more than 1,000 medium-cosmic kingdoms under its jurisdiction. Medium space country, representing the Black Dragon Mountain Empire, has more than 8,000 galaxies in its territory, 6,000 galaxies under its direct jurisdiction, and more than 500 primary space countries under its jurisdiction. The elementary universe country governs an average of 4 galaxies. The total number of participants in the Ganwu Universe Country Genius War is 825.5 Billion, divided into 100 world areas, with an average of 8.25 Billion per world area. Evenly distributed in each galaxy, about 8,000 stars participate in the war, and each medium space country has 64 million stars participating in the war. (The default number of star-level players participating in the battle is one-tenth of the total number of star-level players. After all, not all star-level players want to play for abuse. Generally, those who are willing to play are those with some strength, such as some powerful star-level masters like Tuo Leiwu) ... [Field Blessed Combat Power] (Self-set) (1) First Level Domain Stellar Level 1 plus 1 Level Domain≈Ordinary Stellar Level 9 Combat Power Stellar Level 3 Plus 1 Level Domain≈Strong Level 9 Star Level Combat Power from Ten Miles. Such as the combat strength of the members of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire's Ninth Prince's Guard Team, the general combat strength of the star-level team leader, and the representative figure Tuo Leiwu. Stellar level 5th level plus 1st level field≈Select the first level star level 9th ​​level combat power from a hundred. For example, the captain of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire's Ninth Prince's Guard Team, the representative figure, Guisi. Astral level 7th level plus 1st level domain ≈ To pick up one level of stellar level 9th level combat power from thousands of miles away, the combat power of the captain of the Black Dragon Mountain Empire's Ninth Prince Guards Astral level 9th level plus 1st level level field ≈ To pick up one level to stellar level 9th level combat power from thousands of miles away (2) Second level domain Astral level 1st level plus 2nd level realm ≈ Out of 100000000000000000000000000011st level and 2nd level stellar level 9th level combat power Stellar level 3rd level plus 2nd level domain ≈100th level star level 9th level combat power (During the world within the realm, the Thor of the 2nd level in the astral level 2nd level domain was about 80th level) The first level of stellar level 9th level combat power) Astral level level 5 plus 2 levels of domain ≈ a thousand miles challenge to a first level star level 9th level combat power Astral level 7th level plus 2 levels of combat power ≈ a thousand miles to challenge a level 9 star level combat power Astral level 9th level plus 2 levels of domain ≈ a hundred thousand miles challenge First-class stellar-level 9th-level combat power (2) Triple Domain Astral-level 1st-level plus 3-level domain ≈ the most outstanding first-level stellar-level 9th-level combat power, representative figure, Hong in the realm-within-a-world period, with the help of the domain, he can compete with the most outstanding first-level stellar level 9th-level ghost. Astral level 3 plus 3 levels of realm ≈ One level of stellar level 9 combat power from a thousand miles Astral level 5 level plus 3 levels of realm ≈ One level of stellar level 9 combat power from thousands of miles Astral level 7 level plus 3 levels of realm ≈ One level of stellar level 9 combat power from a hundred thousand miles Stellar Level 9 plus 3 levels of realm ≈ One million miles to win the first level Stellar Level 9 combat power (genius battle can enter the top 100,000 star level combat power in the division) (2) Four Levels of Domain Stellar level 1 level plus 4 levels of realm ≈ Thousands of miles to win the first level of stellar level 9 combat power. Astral level 3 plus 4 levels of domain ≈ One level of star level 9 combat power for ten thousand miles Astral level 5 level plus 4 levels of domain ≈ One level of star level 9 combat power for one hundred thousand miles Astral level 7 plus 4 levels of domain ≈ One level of star level 9 combat power for one million miles (Genius battle can enter the top 100,000 in the division) Astral level 9 plus 4 level realm ≈ (Genius battle can enter the top 20,000 of the division) br>(2) Five-level realm Stellar level 1st level plus 5th level realm≈Ten thousand miles to pick up one level of stellar level 9 combat power Stellar level 3rd level plus 5th level realm≈Ten miles to pick up one level star level 9th level combat power Stellar level 5th level plus 5th level realm≈One million miles to pick up one star level 9th level combat power Stellar level 7th level plus 5th level realm≈(Genius battle can enter the top 20,000 in the division) Stellar level 9 plus 5 levels of realm ≈ (genius battle can enter the top 5000 in the division) (2) Six levels of realm Stellar level 1 plus 6 realms ≈ one hundred thousand miles to pick up one level of stellar level 9 combat power Stellar level 3 plus 6 levels of realm ≈ one million miles to pick up one star level 9 level combat power Stellar level 5 plus 6 realms ≈ (genius level can advance to the top 20,000 in the division) Stellar level 7 plus 6 realms≈(Genius battle can enter the top 5000 in the division) Stellar level 9 plus 6 realms≈(Genius battle can enter the top 1001 in the division) ... [Genius battle single high-level universe country genius level] ①80 million before the division: The level of ordinary star-level high-level geniuses in a single galaxy, and the first-level stellar geniuses are selected from thousands of miles away. Can be designated as a third-level elite by organizations such as Baihu Tower, Black Cloud Society, and Beilong City. The representative characters are Gaia and Hook from Beilong City. ② The first 8 million in the division: Field 1 level combat power, generally the level of top geniuses at the star level in a single galaxy, but at the star level it is already considered one ten thousandth level. ③The first 1 million in the division: Domain 2 heavy combat power, generally at the level of top geniuses in elementary universe countries. A genius who can be said to be one in a hundred thousand in the stellar level. Can be designated as a second-level elite by medium-sized cosmic national organizations such as Baihu Tower, Black Cloud Society, and Beilong City. You can obtain the third-level elite status of the Medium Universe Country Branch of Virtual Universe Company. ④The first 100,000 in the division: 3rd level combat power in the field. ⑤The first 20,000 in the division: 4th level combat power in the field, can be designated as a first-level elite by organizations such as Baihu Tower, Black Cloud Society, and Beilong City. The representative figure is Qiu Yu from Baihu Tower. You can obtain the second-level elite status of the Virtual Universe Company's medium universe branch and the third-level elite status of the headquarters. ⑥The top 5000 in the division: 5th level combat power in the field, can be designated as a special elite by Baihu Tower, Black Cloud Club, and Beilong City organizations. Remarks: During the Genius War, Thor was in Domain 5. Normally, he could maintain a combat power below Domain 6. In an explosion, he could rival Domain 7, but his level was still a little lower than 1001 before being promoted to the division. ⑦ Top 1,001 in the division, top 100,100 in the single higher universe country: The 6-layer combat power in the field is above average. You can obtain the first-level elite status of the Virtual Universe Company's Medium Universe Country Branch and the second-level elite status of the headquarters. Representative figure, Nabini (average star-level top genius in a medium-sized universe country) ⑧Top ten in arena melee, top 10,100 in a single high-level universe country: 8-layer combat power in the field. Remarks: Hong, who is in the 6th level of the domain, can maintain the combat power of the 7th level in the normal state. In an explosion, he can match the 8th level in the domain, but he is still a little short of the promotion level. ⑨Top 1000 single high-level universe countries: Domain 9 heavy combat power. Obtain the special elite status of the Medium Universe Country Branch of Virtual Universe Corporation. Obtain first-level elite status at the Virtual Universe Company Headquarters. ... [Trial Tower Genius] Enter the seventh floor of the third trial tower, realize the original law-level combat power, rank in the top 500,000 of the 1008 universe country, and the top 500 of the single higher universe country, and obtain the special elite status of the Virtual Universe Company Headquarters. Entered the first floor of the fourth trial tower, ranked among the top 100,000 in all 1008 universes, and the top 100 in a single universe. Entered the seventh floor of the fourth trial tower, ranked top 2000 in the entire 1008 universe Entered the first floor of the fifth trial tower, ranked top 500 in the entire 1008 universe Entered the seventh floor of the fifth trial tower, ranked top ten in the entire 1008 universe Entered the first floor of the sixth trial tower, ranked first among normal geniuses Accurate, half-era genius Entered the first floor of the seventh trial tower, a ten-thousand-era genius, like Bolan Entered the third floor of the seventh trial tower, a hundred-thousand-era genius Entered the fifth floor of the seventh trial tower, a million-era genius Entered the seventh floor of the seventh trial tower, a ten-million-era genius, like eclipsing fire. Clear the trial tower, a billion-era genius, such as Kedi.

I have read the latest chapter 30 of the second volume. Let me talk about the problem of the novel. The first is that the protagonist, as a slave, is controlled by a biochip. Logically speaking, except for idealistic and subjective content such as enlightenment, everything can be monitored. However, everyone should think there is a problem if the protagonist is only given a few cultivation resources for a few levels a year. The second is to show that he has the talent in the field, and also shows that he has the talent to practice quickly. Doesn't this clearly mean that he can break through the domain master? The owner was not afraid of revenge at all. The third thing is to hang on a lot. In just over a year, he has continuously understood the first-level realm to the fifth-level realm. This is actually not the most exaggerated. The most exaggerated thing is that the explosion rate is the basic explosion rate multiplied by a hundred times the critical hit. In other words, it can reach tens of thousands of times the critical rate. In other words, as long as the author does something, he will be invincible. After ignoring the poisonous points above, I can still read it.

This is not the way to start off the earth, and accepting apprentices is the most troublesome, and the harem is pretty much the same.

About the main character being a slave. There is at most an immortal platform behind the slave market, which is unlikely even for the Venerable. Because the most slaves swallowed are the universe level. The ninth level of the universe has become a domain master, so the price has dropped. It can be seen that it is impossible for the domain master to be a slave at first. Let's put it this way, no matter how large the number of cosmic-level slaves is, the profit from the sale will only make some immortals who are short of money excited at most, and it is completely impossible to impress the venerable. How many kings and immortals can be produced at the level of the venerable? What is the profit from the sale of these cosmic-level slaves at that level? Can I still use these cosmic coins to exchange for heavy treasure points, treasure points or something?

If you can get rid of the slave status in the first few chapters, you can read it. This is obviously a cool type of novel, but the protagonist has been a slave for such a long time 😅

Pretending to be an Immortal and accepting a Realm Master as a disciple is really a bad move. In itself, your understanding of the law will not have much effect on the Realm Master. You can't just give away treasures. You can't let the Realm Master progress by delaying what others can do to make the Immortal progress. You have to be at least a feudal lord, or even a king, and you have to be a real one. You can't achieve it by just relying on combat power.

In my personal opinion, except for the fact that the timeline is too late, everything else is in line with my taste. It is one of the few books that made me subscribe and read it. Come on! ! ! Nowadays, most Devouring fandoms are looking for the earth or following the plot. They all follow the plot in the same way, without any desire to continue reading. The Devouring World is so big, there are so many opportunities, and time is not valuable, but there is so much room for play. I don't understand that so many people who follow the plot have given up, and they continue to follow the plot one after another. The author writes well, come on, write according to your own ideas, and also refer to the readers' ideas. Also, don't write about Zhutianliu, write one by one, without exception.

Could the author write less about the protagonist's surprises? It's not about how many dreams he has with his eyes wide open. It's God's perspective at least, and he knows the role of his golden finger, something that is on the stellar and cosmic level, but he always loses his composure in front of his apprentice. So to escape from the second level, the will of this system is also very important. Are you sure that with the qualifications of the protagonist, you have the will to match the realm? The three of them, Luo Feng and Honglei, all have wills and minds that are beyond their own realm... Shouldn't no one be watching?

You can get stuck in BG and accept yourself as your apprentice.

Updates are too slow. How can you sleep if you update two chapters every day? You don't need a monthly ticket? Can't pay off the mortgage and car loan?

Going to foreign battlefields to cause trouble has nothing to do with you cheating.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. It is recommended that after the protagonist becomes immortal, the gold finger should be upgraded once. It can be used once in as many eras as possible, or the times can be accumulated. Otherwise, using it once a month is too short for immortality. When the protagonist's apprentice also becomes immortal, a month is really just a matter of seconds.

The geniuses of the four secret realms are at the cosmic level, and they stay at the domain lord level for so long to cultivate resources for free. If the male protagonist has money, he can directly rush to the ninth level of Domain Lord and quickly break through to the World Lord level, so that he can develop better and safely in the medium universe country.

I'll give you all the votes. It was originally started by another book called Becoming a God. Unfortunately, it has been a bit sluggish recently. There are more words than content. It's not enough to just popularize science. Come on 🙂

When writing a fanfic, the protagonist must practice and upgrade quickly.

After understanding the laws of space and time, the protagonist's direction of progress is the source of the laws and the analytical gene route. The source of the law is related to the later Origin Avenue, and also to the Chaotic Source Path. For example, Luo Feng's source of birth and death is related to the ultimate realm of birth and death, the Hunyuan Dao of birth and death. Comprehensive understanding of the gene level of 100,000 times of life shows that the talents of the avenue of material origin, the origin of life, and the avenue of destruction are still good. If the protagonist does not have the talents of these three origin avenues, it feels that the protagonist can master the gene level of 90,000 times more than that.

Among the books in the same period, you were the slowest in writing 😡😡😡

It's so enjoyable to write, I deserve your monthly ticket 😁

It feels very interesting, recommended

One thing I have never understood is that so many fans write about divine power and then create new lives. In the original work, there is a clone of Youhai, and Youhai's talent is to transform the sea and create. If there is no clone of Youhai, even if you can analyze various genes, how can you create it? It is impossible to create it out of thin air. In the original work, after analyzing higher genes, the clone must be decomposed and dissolved in the sea of ​​blood, and then re-created. Sitting Mountain Guest only guided the already existing race, the Yan Shen Clan, rather than creating it. Besides, Sitting Mountain Guest also knew the path of divine power. Even if he did not follow the path of divine power, wouldn't it be easy for him to create a new race? Therefore, even the Mountain Guest cannot create life. Only the Lord of Nine Nethers can create the entire primitive universe, but he seems to be able to only create energy life, not flesh and blood. When Luo Feng first learned about the innate secret method of the Youhai clone, he thought that creation was a bit useless. He could only create some flowers and plants, but not flesh and blood. Later, he took the path of divine power and made reasonable use of the Blood Sea. So I personally feel that without the sea of ​​blood, it would be impossible to create life.

It looks good, I love reading it, and the author writes quickly. . . .

Understand?

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