Douluo Dalu: I Am the World's Immortal Master, Taking Ning Rongrong as My Disciple

I don't know who gave these hydrology authors the confidence to start publishing the 30th chapter? , Outrageous

The author's skills are too poor, the narrative is illogical, and the ideas are novel but he can't write the feeling at all. Could it be that after writing 10 chapters, the author went to find a writer who wrote Xiaohuang prose? To be honest, I've been naked before, but this is the first time I've been naked for such a brainless person...

Ning Rongrong's power behind them, and Tang Hao behind Tang San, didn't care about them at all. , A person like the protagonist suddenly appeared. They didn't even investigate or take a look. 🤔 I won't read it. The author is too weak to write a grand narrative.

The water panel is too watery! The reward will be 100 years to get the water mark on the panel, and the reward will be 200 years to be watered again. I don't know how many times it has been watered before and after. Who dares to book? 😒

Originally, you wrote about the number of years of the soul ring for free, and even added the soul skill effect at the end, so I won't say anything. Later, when it was put on the shelves, you also wrote about the soul ring increasing from how many years to how many years. Didn't you say this in this chapter? Wouldn't it be nice to just write it in this chapter after it's released? Every time your soul ring age increases or is strengthened in other ways, can't you put it in the words of the writer at the end? It's all paid content and you're paying back. How many readers can you get to read your book without buying traffic?

Author, do you have any opinions on Ning Rongrong? Others have at least two martial arts books, and Zhu Zhuqing, who is equally talented, was rewarded with a ten thousand year soul bone. Why is it that Ning Rongrong not only does not have the soul bone rewarded by the system but also absorbs a thousand year torso bone? Isn't it so outrageous?

In Chapter 66, the author has no brains and no logic for the sake of word count. Ice and Fire Eyes Immortal Grass Tang San and others either did not find out, or found out and were silenced. The protagonist did not silence. In the next two days, the Haotian Sect behind Tang San, the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect behind Gangzi, the Dai Mubai Xingluo royal family, the Tiandou royal family, Wuhun Palace, and the Ye family all knew about it! !!😅 I don't read anymore! Abandon the book!

I swiped to book it to chapter 80. I originally wanted to spend all the money, but when I saw chapter 50, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was just a piece of cake. Goodbye👋

It's not bad. There's nothing serious about it yet. It's just that the system rewards for Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing are not equal. It's best to have the same reward quantity and quality.

Fortunately, it is a work that can be read from QQ, and the foundation is high.