Rebirth: I Rely on Extreme Sports to Survive

This is a situation where I have used up all my energy in one go. I cannot think of a more exciting plot, which leads to no point of effort in the follow-up. It is easy for novice authors to encounter this problem, and even veterans will find it difficult to avoid it. I can only say that the statement I saw before is indeed reasonable. As an author, restraint is very important. You must learn to restrain your desire for expression, otherwise the plot will easily go wrong.

Really, the more I watch, the more I feel. Moreover, I quite like this writing method that intersperses daily life. The pace can be fast or slow, and the author is really a newcomer's first book.

The character of the author's cousin is well created, and the emotional drama is hard to describe. I believe that if I want more people to subscribe to the emotional drama, there should be fewer emotional dramas. Another point is that the main character is about 16 years old now, and the heroine you arranged is 24 years old, which made me a little nervous. The rest of the writing is good, but you should write less about things like stumbling in the later stages. We read books mainly for your sports, so don't forget the main line.

It's just too short and not enough to read. Can the author challenge his limits? There will be hundreds of chapters added every day.

Looking at the introduction, if you want to have an abortion, it is another fantasy before you die.

Stop writing about your sister, okay? There are so many sports like mountain biking, marathon skiing, isn't it great! ! !

It would be nice if you put pictures or animations where the corresponding actions are. Many people can't imagine what the pictures are, and it's too troublesome to find them by yourself.

Not much has been written on this subject. The last time I saw extreme sports, it was elbow. Please pay attention, please keep writing, boss

I have been reading this book for a few days, and it suits my taste. It is very interesting, but the update time is too irregular. It may be in the afternoon, evening or early morning. It is recommended to update at a fixed time every day. If you only finish one chapter, you can also do it at noon and one chapter at night. There must be a fixed update time to have more readers. I will catch up when the time comes. Without a fixed update time, I don't know when it will be updated. It may become unreadable after a long time.

Those other messy side plots. In fact, it can be less.

I haven't read it yet, but extreme sports reminds me of Elbow's book, Red Scarf Charge, Burning

Is the author doing this for fun? I have also read articles on extreme sports, and I feel that this one is the most professional. Including techniques, details, sense of immersion, etc., All online. But the love scenes are a bit stiff. If you are looking for extreme sports, you can watch it and it will be fun. If you are looking for feelings, I don't recommend it.

There can be more sports parts and less emotional scenes.

The last time I read this kind of article, it seemed like I was a big player? The author writes well, keep up the good work

Do you have any recommendations for extreme sports articles? Watched Big Player

Sure enough, he is still a eunuch. I feel that not many extreme sports can be completed. This one is shorter. I felt that writing about surfing was a bit awkward before, but I didn't expect to cut it directly.

Dear friends, the seedlings need to be cared for. We are testing the water in pk. Please update to the latest page. Don't raise your baby to death!

I just looked at a few of them and saw the shadow of I am a big player. I will look at the rest tomorrow when I wake up.

Red Bull: Are you risking your life without me? Don't you care about my bonus?

Work harder to maintain the current level, and will subscribe to support!

The author can take a look at Red Bull's parachuteless skydiving

The plot of the past few days has been a bit watered down. A few days ago, I stopped writing about extreme sports. I hope I can finish it.

There is a main line of survival, no interaction of life, no interaction of emotions, and the dream line has not been developed. I have been completing various challenges on the line of survival. It is too rushed.

The author needs to think carefully during the rainy season, otherwise the peak period of outdoor sports will start again after the National Day, and the author will definitely go into the mountains 🙂

Watching videos on Douyin, he said that there is a book about extreme sports recently.

Brother, brother, brother, your update has been interrupted.

Brother😭Why are you becoming more and more like a eunuch? Every other day, we stop updating. We are so worried that our hearts break. Wow!

As the pig's trotters become stronger and stronger due to Tongzi's rewards, the pig's trotters have gradually become inhuman. Is the ultimate taste really the ultimate taste? , There is some linkage with Cousin City in the front, and later it feels like the mission is for the sake of the mission, and the mission is a challenge for the sake of challenge. Personally, I feel that at least there is a description of the city after each mission? When the front is not strong, there are still some preparatory moves. After skiing, I feel like I can't even perform anymore 😫