After the Divorce, I Started the Second Week of Shenhao Game

After reading more than 40 chapters, let me talk about the shortcomings. After all, I still want to read it. First of all, the characters are not fleshed out enough. The personality of each character is not established. They are just forcibly forming relationships for the sake of mission rewards. There is no sense of it coming naturally. There is too little foreshadowing. I don't know if it is due to the author's experience or not. What is it? The dialogue always feels like a forced match. After reading more than 40 chapters of the investment, I was forced to lose my brain. The protagonist is a stupid and rich villain. If the author can't figure out this kind of cheating, he can't change the cheating method or stop cheating. It's such a big deal, I almost can't watch anymore~

I have to say, the plot is very interesting🤔but the plot keeps getting stuck in the gym, I am really speechless

Sigh... Every Shenhao novel has a fitness coach, a divorced young woman neighbor, and a beautiful anchor. It seems that the female characters in Shenhao novels must have these few. Is this an association of Shenhao novels? Are you all set to die? I feel that all authors cannot escape from this template 😥

What is the plot of the hotel about? Are you addicted to cuckold fetish?

The plot of this female star is okay, it feels like it's getting better.

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This woman's design is so stupid. She can earn an income of 40 to 50 billion in five years. How big is this person? How deep is the network behind it? Still this kind of arrogant and domineering character who will seek revenge even if the protagonist makes her lose some money, what will be the result? So what if you inherit one hundred E? Tarzan is suppressed, and the protagonist is still dead in the end. Unless there is an unexpected move, this book will basically be ruined. I won't chase you anymore. I'll wait for you to leave the warehouse later, hey.

Lu's best friend's character didn't understand why Lu became best friends with her. There are some poisonous points in Tian Yining's words. For example, she made a commission by letting others eat tofu at her previous place of work. Well, maybe I am the only one who thinks it is poisonous. There are a few typos in the article. Occasionally one or two sentences are not very fluent, and the expenditure of personal special funds is not very clear. The writing is above average, and the plot is above average. Of course, these are just my personal opinions. Everyone has different requirements for the content of the book. It's okay for me. Come on, author.