The Sister I Recognized Is Actually a Saint

There is a huge difference between male and female videos, so I have no desire to watch them.

Each one is a bit outrageous. The only difference between female and male channels is the emphasis. Male channels focus on career, while female channels focus on emotions (similar to the one where the domineering president fell in love with me, but I can't see a little bit of it). Each one will repeat those few sentences just like a robot. If you want to say something, just go to the introduction and make blind recommendations. You can choose whether you like it or not. Whether it is useful depends on the starting point. Just like they recommended me marriage changes and those particularly mindless cool articles, I didn't even read them and just said "go back to xx".

If you're a female channel, just go back to the female channel and write. Why are you here on the male channel?

Has the author been targeted by someone? When I entered the comment area, I saw a bunch of suspected robots.

Many people use the transformation and price changes as an excuse. However, all the current transformation stories, these female authors write, will write the male body as just a dream of the female protagonist, let alone the male soul, and they will definitely wake up later and tell readers that the heroine has always been a female, and even some costumes are not disguised. As long as the work becomes more popular among male channels, the opening chapter will be changed directly and the scene of the male transforming into a female body will be deleted. Let's take a typical one - New White Snake Asks the Immortal. That's what the author did. Now he is directly using that book to support his retirement. He said that only transformation stories written by male authors can be called true male-channeled female-centered stories.

Shouldn't this stuff be written about in Carrot Bao? Qidian. Com generally hates weak feelings, and the acceptance of TieTie is generally not high. Transformation can be accepted by some people, but the premise is that the plot development is not directed at TieTie. If the proportion of TieTie is too high, it is recommended to go to Carrot Bun.

There are a lot of abstract things in the comment area, which is really difficult to deal with. If you like to read but don't read, no one will leave you. Isn't it interesting to come to the comment area to disgust other readers to show your presence?

Because this is the first time the author has written this book and has little experience, there must be many unreasonable places. If there are any plot errors in this book, you are welcome to point them out directly. As for the question of why the heroine article is a heroine article, the author also made it on a whim. If you don't want to read it, you can just cross it out. After all, the author directly stated it at the beginning. There is no need to express your anger in the comment area. Of course you insist on saying that I don't care about you. As long as you don't attack me personally, you can do whatever you want. Anyway, I will get perfect attendance. As for updates, the author wants to publish them as they come out, save four or five chapters, and then update them at will. If there are saved manuscripts, update more, and if there are no saved manuscripts, update less. Anyway, at least 4,000 words a day. Okay, that's it, the meeting is over! !

A rare piece of writing, well written.

It looks good, cheers for the author. Just ignore the cyber life in the comment area and delete it if necessary.

I was invited to try it out, read more than a dozen chapters, and give a brief review Advantages: 1. The characterization of the characters at first sight is okay, and the in-depth characterization will not be discussed in the middle and later stages 2. The narration and information presentation, including the description of the world view, are okay 3. The chat group-style structure is okay Disadvantages: 1. Is my sister a sociophobic? Does the author have any misunderstandings about sociophobia? That's his mother's natural stupidity. People who are afraid of middle school students are not just socially afraid. 2. There is no need to make a virtual world that looks like a weird and weird story. Xuanji passing through the virtual world is like being crushed by combat power, and there is no content of wits at all. Then my evaluation is that it is better to just use settings such as sea of ​​blood/demon world to get past it. There is no need for modern device input. Do you want to add the label of urban immortality or infinite flow/weird invasion to your work? 3. The plot of the chat group looks like a flash in the pan. If it is just for the wanted criminals of the magic way, it is completely unnecessary. Like the second point, you can use a communication mirror instead. Summary: Except for the virtual world setting and the fact that the sister is not a social fear but a natural idiot, there is no big problem with the daily description. If you want to read daily articles about lesbian transformation, you can read it. Don't expect too much about the plot of unlimited streaming and strange invasion. Just think of it as a demon world or something. I can't write a very long work. I think the finished book should be around 280 to 500 chapters, so I don't know.

Let me talk about my thoughts first. When I watched the first half, I felt like, wow, I really like this world view. Although I don't particularly like the characters of the two heroines, they are not bad, and they match well. It feels very sweet to watch. Coupled with the atmosphere of the modern Yaochi, such a modern spiritual holy land, it is very comfortable to watch, plus the virtual world. I thought that Yaochi plus other holy lands and other places were daily, and the virtual world was a copy (I quite like the copy of Thriller Paradise). Based on the talent and popularity of the protagonist, I thought it would be a relaxing and interesting work. Don't brag, Yaochi gave me the feeling of a witch's worldview. But the world view of the second half of the world... How should I put it, it doesn't match the introduction. Although I don't hate puzzle solving, the contrast is a bit too big... The protagonist's mentality has improved too quickly. Why does it feel like the book is complete when the puzzle is solved? In short, I give it a monthly pass. I hope the author will not be influenced by some people and polish it.

Alas, it's a pity. The settings in the beginning were really good, but they fell apart after restoring the previous memories. Especially in the first dungeon, the protagonist passed it casually, without any challenge at all. I knew that this book was destined to be short of writing, because this invincible world view left the protagonist with no motivation to go on. The dungeons were filled with a casual mentality, which made the subsequent dungeons possibly meaningless and boring.

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There are details in the first three chapters. 1. The article is not concise enough. Some information points have been mentioned before, but the author often mentions them repeatedly within a chapter. Created a lot of useless paragraphs. 2. The settings are inserted bluntly, such as the virtual world. There is a rush to explain to you suddenly and forcefully. The set hook in the middle is not used smoothly.

I can't understand it. The author thought it out one by one. I flipped through the book at random. The creativity is okay but the writing style can't hold up.

There are too many holes to dig, but overall it's still interesting.

What is the current plot talking about?

Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong? Is there a Shennong?

It is also expected. It begins to collapse from the virtual world, and then survives after coming out of the virtual world. The character design is pretty good, and I'm really looking forward to the author writing a love story for the male protagonist.

It was amazing at first, but why did I lose interest in the latest chapters? Are my expectations too high?

It feels a bit outrageous. The third plane is also a cultivator, so there is no need to make the gap so big. The protagonist can walk around in any virtual world without regard to any rules, so why are there so many casualties in the first plane? A bit inconsistent

Let's just say that the protagonist has not seen his parents for more than ten years. Is this reasonable?