Cultivation into a Demon Immortal Begins with Loach

The protagonist should not call the upper-level races related to his own race's food chain, calling him brothers or the same race. Don't forget that even if they become spirits, in terms of the food chain relationship, they will probably regard the protagonist as blood food because of the racial recipes. To put it simply, your race is only the food source of their race's recipes. Why should the protagonist be called the same race as them?

I am not writing this to give advice to the author, nor to find fault, because I have also been learning to write novels recently, but I have encountered some bottlenecks. This is really a painful process. A friend told me that when you really don't know how to write, , you just write hard. When you feel like you can't write anything even if you write hard, then you read a book, write reading notes, and write whatever comes to your mind. So I am typing now, and my mind is completely free to roam, and I just write out whatever comes to my mind. Maybe it's because I've loved catching fish, shrimp, loaches and toads in the streams and rivers at home since I was a child. To be honest, I really like this book, it's quite interesting. When I see the fish, fish, shrimps inside, I feel friendly. For example, telling a story to a child, "Once upon a time, there was a bird in the forest..." Once there is the beginning of "once upon a time" and the element of "big forest", then the story will be interesting whether it is good-looking or not. But when I really wanted to talk about this book, my mind went blank. There was only one picture, a big loach. Let's just talk about the few chapters I read today. I went to meet that monster commander and help him fight an old turtle. The name of that monster commander was so weird. Even though I read it from 3pm to 12pm, I forgot the name of that monster commander. This made me laugh. I thought that when naming a character in a book, I must choose a name that is popular and easy to remember. If this strange name is really difficult to remember and has a sense of picture, try to give him a nickname based on his appearance so that readers can have a sense of impression. However, these chapters are quite well written. First, he was caught by the immortal with a fishhook, which created the crisis of a very powerful immortal. If I were to write it, I really couldn't make it up. I would probably write it like Han Li. When he saw that something was wrong, he frowned and ran away, and then this section just passed. But the author's approach is very different. First, run away, but can't run away, then pick up other things and smash them. If they can't be smashed, then the upgrade seems to have broken the fishhook or the fishing line, forget it. Anyway, I ran away successfully. When I read about the unexpected encounter between the loach and the immortal, what was the "point" that aroused my expectations? Hmm. This is how this little loach deals with such a powerful opponent. Based on this, I am very interested in watching it. This seems to be the sense of crisis that the big guys often talk about? Then how to break the situation, and then this is the so-called cool point? Yes, that should be the case. Then I went to find the commander whose name I couldn't remember. Although I couldn't remember his name, I had the impression that he was better at fighting and had a large group of soldiers under his command. He seemed to have both evil and righteous personalities. For example, if he knew he was going to die, he would sacrifice all the soldiers in the battle to save his life. My own elite clan members, for example, seem to be quite ruthless in fights and have character, and then there seems to be something else about their character. I don't know if I can't remember it, or I can't write it out. Anyway, they have quite complex characters. By the way, they seem to have clear rewards and punishments, and effective orders to manage their subordinates? For example, during the fight, the few men who prevented the demon soldiers from finding treasures became loyal. When he came to see the commander, based on my normal thinking, he might have been embarrassed by his acceptance, and then after a lot of hard work, he finally met him, completed the task and went back. But the author wrote that he did not embarrass him when he accepted it. Instead, he said that the commander was not at home and was fighting outside. Then he told him to be careful. The commander was not in a good mood and should not mess with it, otherwise he would be in trouble. Well, writing this, I realized again that the author is raising expectations again. This makes readers wonder how our little loach can resolve this crisis next. When the little loach worked hard to find the commander, he ended up being involved in the war. This created another crisis, and the opponent this time was also quite strong. It once again raised expectations? Or construct a wonderful plot? Could it be that by chance, Little Loach helped the commander defeat his opponent? But then, the fun came again. The little loach was leveling up while fighting. It was so fun to watch that he wanted to play without it. This mission to deliver something to the commander unexpectedly turned into a major escalation battle. Yeah. If I were to write it, I would never be able to come up with it. Author 666. After that, I went back and met the silver carp. The creation of this silver carp was quite successful, because I was always careful that it would die. When readers start to worry about the fate of a supporting character, the image of this supporting character in the book becomes popular. How did the author create Bai Cun? Strong? Brave? Ah, without reaching this level, I would never be able to construct such a character myself. Forget it, it's too late. Sleep ......

The author's protagonist takes the bloodline to evolve into a true dragon? Or is it the path from loach to spirit? ?

Grain and grass🤭 Not bad, quite interesting 🙂😁

I like to eat loach, it's delicious

I hope the protagonist's essence is always a loach

It is one of the few novels that is truly written from the perspective of the character and style of demons. The growth system of demon clan skills is very interesting and well written. I look forward to what will be written in the future 😁

In the past, the main character in the fairy gourd and demon gourd golden gourd practice the loach nine-turn mystical skill, and there are creative ideas related to the loach.

Evolve the body to the limit first, and then consider transforming into a dragon. After all, the suppression of low-level bloodlines by super bloodline is obvious. If you don't lay a solid foundation and start to evolve in a hurry, the evolved creatures will be the weakest.

Loach super evolves! Eating dragon loach!

It's interesting, but I don't think it's very good-looking. Is it my problem?

There are too many dragon themes, it would be nice to be more novel

It is recommended that the author refer to the book "Transforming into a Dragon and Immortal Life Begins from a Loach". After all, the protagonists are all of the same species in the beginning.

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After the protagonist succeeds in cultivation, he will also be called the ancestor of Zongdao, the ancestor-level loach, and he can take a homophonic word and call himself "Laoqiu". 🙂

Are there any others of the same type? Please recommend.

Jiang Ning, Big Pliers, Big Head and Bai Lian, as well as the mysterious master Xuan Yuanzi. The first person under the golden elixir to kill the Yuanying monk. After unifying the good and evil to unite the demon clan, leaving this world and going to the spiritual world, I think there will be a good chance of meeting other members of my own race in other worlds. Jiuyou*⊙⊙Check it out

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Are there any novels about weasels? Those who take the crowd-pleasing route, such as those who become immortals and become gods (Western fantasy gods, the kind whose believers have magical skills, healing skills, halo skills, judgment, evil detection and other skills, the kind that do not have to be punished by the gods themselves whenever something goes wrong)

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Have you ever been a loach? Take it for granted, scribble