Starting from the Demon-Suppressing Captain

Have you ever been a demon-suppressing captain? Can you write about it? Take it for granted scribbling

People nowadays don't like San Guan Zheng's novels very much.

I feel like the fighting is well written, but the plot doesn't feel that good.

How shameless! Where is the extraterrestrial demon? It's strange.

Very well written. It smells like a bird

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The writing is very good, a longer dungeon can be used 1, but the rewards should be written clearly. The small rewards for each event of the protagonist are very timely, but the big main line rewards are not highlighted. A big reward with potential and fame is needed to reward the protagonist for killing and killing all the way The protagonist has killed so many monsters, and there is no summary of event rewards. Another suggestion is that inheritance, magic weapons and the like are given too fast and easy to collapse. Give the protagonist some magical secrets after defeating them. If you practice slowly, this will be very satisfying. Otherwise, the protagonist will feel that his sword skills will increase as he kills all the way. It is very satisfying, but the improvement is a bit monotonous 2. There are also tasks that need to be done clearly, what needs to be done, what has been done, and what is left. When the protagonist completes the task, do side quests, and say "toot" when the main task is completed. There is also this dungeon that introduces a little bit of the world view and more of the Walker part. Otherwise, one dungeon will be like a novel, not like infinite streaming. Finally, the heroine should not become like Dan Niang, a pure vase The world view cannot be explained, just treat it as the underlying logic of the world, no need to explain it forcefully (If you have a monthly vote, recommend votes will vote for this book, I am very optimistic about the potential of this book)

The writing style is very graphic, especially when describing mystery and monsters. Many passages read like flipping through an exquisite literary work, rather than a fast-food novel. The control of details and rendering of emotions are very good.

The only thing missing from the writing style is that it should be simple and concise with appropriate white space. The creation of the Patriarch of the Demonic Path is slightly less fragrant than ink, but lacks the sense of destiny that has been established for ten thousand years. Both aspects are slightly inferior to the top. I don't understand why it is not popular yet.

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The author's writing is getting better and better. The plot was a bit slow at the beginning, but after 4 chapters, it is obvious that the plot is moderate. Then the concept of the traveler is also introduced, and the world view is slowly introduced. It is very good, and the sense of crisis is also there. Each chapter is more attractive, and the author can keep people following. The author with high action ability has made super rapid progress and the book is getting better and better.

Although it has a bit of a goo flavor and the characters that appear are also very goo, the author has come up with a lot of new things. The fighting scenes are average and not very exciting, but the plot is okay. I just hope to strengthen the character creation. In "Yi Xin Zhao Lie", it seems a bit ordinary. I hope the author can work hard and keep up the good work. May the author be free from Gu's curse, Gu Gu.

I just added a bookshelf and it's gone without looking at it?

When will the author publish another book?