One Piece: Not a Mythical Beast, but a Phantom God!

The Three Fantasy Gods and One Piece are quite interesting, but the theme of your writing is off-topic. We are here to see how the Three Fantasy Gods exert their power in the world of pirates, not to see you supplement the settings of the original work. You can create an original plot, but your protagonist must participate in it and take up a big share. You now have a relationship with the protagonist in each chapter. Does Guan's plot have 100 words? I read 300 plots related to the protagonist every day. It just came out. Who is still following it? If you think the protagonist is still young and it is difficult to participate in the plot, then skip the time earlier. The focus is on the protagonist, not the brotherhood between those original miscellaneous fish. You are already three clones. It is already difficult to divide the plot between the three protagonists, so don't write other miscellaneous fish. The consequences of group dramas will be dead Of course, if you can update 20 times a day, then pretend that I didn't tell you.

To be honest, in the original work, I think the Wano chapter is really the biggest failure so far. It created a bunch of gods and men, and even the characters of the Straw Hats collapsed. It is also a national issue. Isn't this handled very well in the early Alabasta chapter? What is the relationship between the protagonist and the Straw Hats? Were they directly dragged into a fight by those gods like Momonosuke?

I thought it was Shuangwen when I came in and found out it was a perverted article. I was frightened by the girlishization and fainted.

The whole Auntie chapter made the protagonist lose. He had lost once inexplicably in the civil war before. Can I conclude that the traitor dragon will definitely lose no matter how he attacks? If the author had this kind of virtue, he would not dare to continue pursuing it later.

It can only be said that it is getting worse and worse, the characters are broken, the plot is bad, there are few updates, and it is just watery.

To put it simply, this book by the author is a story about a clone, a girl, and a female, who helps a man who kidnapped the protagonist to achieve his career. I personally think it is a bit poisonous. Newbies should pay attention to whether they can accept it before reading it.

Forget it, just write Uno Kuni. Don't write Kozuki Oden according to the original manga. It gives me the feeling that you are showing me shit, and I have to pay to see the shit you moved, process it, and skip it. It will make me sick when I see it.

Can't you just risk farming honestly? The so-called growth is really ridiculous. It's obviously a light novel, and there are all those irrelevant people. Why do you write so much? The protagonist often doesn't appear in several chapters. It's not cool enough, it feels like it ends abruptly every time.

After Arceus, there are also three phantom gods, and the beasts are getting better and better.

Although I have also enjoyed reading transformation stories for a while, I still have a question, what is the fun part about transformation? Why do you have to transform?