Cultivation of Gods and Spirits: Starting from the Deduction of the Alchemy Array and Weapon Method

It looks a bit awkward, since when did Tiebushan become so awesome? I feel that cultivating immortals is very awkward, and an iron shirt is so awesome. The battle plot is also very awkward, is it all close combat? I feel that the talisman is only useful for warding off evil spirits. The other talismans were thrown at the sixth level and did not kill the sixth level of Qi training. They were just used to cover the eyes and ears. The world view setting is also funny, saying that ordinary mortals will never die? How is it possible. Even immortal cultivators are afraid of weirdness. As long as there is weirdness in the world, how can mortals solve it? Let alone protecting ordinary people, the sect is not even willing to protect casual cultivators, let alone ordinary people. If the crisis was really that big, the sect would have been like a military control system. There was a complete cultivation system at the grassroots level, and there was no such thing as a casual cultivator. The sect would not provide shelter and trade to the casual cultivators, and would not allow them to enter any territory close to the sect's banner. The casual cultivators would not be able to survive at all. They would have no elixirs, no talismans, no talismans, and no follow-up techniques. There was no way they could survive. Even if there are casual cultivators setting up a settlement on their own, it will be useless. The weak will prey on the strong. The casual cultivators set up settlements to absorb resources, exercises, etc., But they are not for you to trade fairly. If you see the sect using military control, won't you imitate the same? Even if it means that one's own forces are less likely to suffer disasters, they will inevitably choose to drive the casual cultivators to work hard and enjoy the fruits of their lives instead of truly having the great ideal of protecting one side. Therefore, "freedom" is not that important to casual cultivators, but life is more important. Only with life can there be follow-up cultivation. Joining a sect is more popular than casual cultivators. This is not an ordinary world of cultivators, but a world full of weirdness. The danger in the wild is too great.

Author, you let yourself go, so you directly used AI to write for you? From the beginning of chapter 85 to the latest chapter, you have made typos and overlapping words, and the plot has been intermittently recurring. Spells that were upgraded before are upgraded to the same ones later, or they are still used after the upgrade. There are too many other details to go through. If you want to read it yourself and see if it makes sense, start from chapter 85.

Your subject matter is great and your writing is pretty good. Come on, half the reason I read your novel is because it is very rare for the protagonist to use a knife. Find an opportunity to deduce or buy immortal-level sword skills for the protagonist. I also suggested that you build multiple flying knives for the protagonist to surround and form a knife formation.

There is no chapter name, so there will be no readers. Even if it seems to have nothing to do with the content, it is better than nothing.

You won't make money by taking the easy way out. The subject matter is good, but don't be systematic. Writing a book is not an assembly line. You can only make money by using your brain to fantasize. Before you write a book, you don't understand how great writers make money. They are selling fantasy.

Author, I think you need to change your introduction, make it shorter and write out the key points to attract people. Because your introduction is too long and has too many words that can be seen at first glance, which reduces a lot of interest. Some people who read your novel will be full just by reading your introduction and will not want to click in to read it.