Douluo: I, Tang Wulin, a Kamen Rider

I felt uninterested at the beginning. The protagonist is a time traveler. He is a novelist, but he has never read Douluo. Blue Silver Emperor A Yin seems to be his aunt and teacher.

Since you want to revise your job description, let's change the last sentence. It's better to hold the signal ax instead. He said it was okay.

Originally, I didn't want to see Tang Wulin as the protagonist. After all, I wanted to see Xiao San's child being tortured, but I wanted to see Tang San first.

If you have any literary youth disease, don't commit it at this time! Sure enough, the biggest problem at the starting point is that we are prone to youth disease!

Ah, he directly became Tang San's son I basically don't want to read this content anymore

As of Chapter 190, I really can't stand it anymore. I regret that I didn't listen to the advice of the old man in the comment area and read this book without thinking. Although the chapters of this book before defeating the blood demon are not very good, they are still good. However, when it came to the part of fighting the blood demon, the perception took a turn for the worse. It was bad to a certain extent. The blood demon died, lived, and died again, and in the end, he stole the protagonist's storybook and broke through to the god level. That's it. Such a meaningless tug-of-war dragged on for more than 20 chapters, which is longer than the old lady's foot wrap. This is still the feeling I had after reading it in one sitting. If I were chasing the book, I can't imagine how painful it would be.

A typical example of opening high and going low. Otherwise, we should not write about the three-hundred-round battle with Emperor Tian. If we write about it, we should overwhelm the invincible opponent all the way. If we do this now, we will really become a clown.

They say they won't suppress their combat power, but the protagonist has been deflated for almost three days. Subjectively, you may not want to, but objectively, the effect of suppressing his combat power is achieved.

The combat effectiveness fluctuates between high and low. The Legend of the Seven Heroes of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit Why was a single sword released? Shouldn't there be a daughter sword or something like that?

Seeing that her head hurt, the woman repeatedly mentioned that fighting and daily life were very painful.

Your problem is that you like long stories, and you like to criticize the original work through the mouth of the protagonist. This is not what people here want to see. Most of the descriptions are about interpersonal relationships and dialogues, and combat descriptions are not good. Emotions can be there, but you spent too much space on foreshadowing. After writing dozens of chapters, there is no progress. Basically, you still follow the route of the original work.

1: The author did such a bad job of writing the protagonist that many people would not be able to accept the protagonist dressing up as a woman. There is still a PUA male protagonist, but the adult in the protagonist's previous life can actually accept dressing up as a woman? Forget it if it's not good at writing, the key is that there are too many scenes 2: The few chapters that set up the fight against Emperor Tian are not enough and it inexplicably ignites the flames. In my opinion, the protagonist is only one part now, and fighting against Emperor Tian now feels too inconsistent.

After reading the third chapter, I realized it was poisonous. As an author, I didn't know about Douluo.

In fact, during the episode about the Earth Dragon mecha captain, I thought it would be Tang Wulin who took out the holy sword and chopped him down. After all, he usually tortured vegetables in school, but now there was a six-ring Earth Dragon. The Dragon of Courage took out the Dragon of Courage to wake him up, but it didn't happen.

Author, are you addicted to writing the Blood Demon plot? Pluto, this godless waste, has not yet been solved. The protagonist is so useless

The book "Combat Strength Collapse" is considered ruined.

The writing is so bad. Quickly withdraw. Quickly withdraw.

I have to say, the one who can still read it is a god. This book is a complete piece of shit. I couldn't read the first few chapters, but the one who can read the whole book is simply a god. 🤮

The protagonist can defeat Di Tian, ​​but the protagonist is defeated by the Six-ring Soul Emperor Guang Biao. Guang Biao defeats Di Tian. Guang Biao defeats Ultimate Douluo. Guang Biao is invincible in the world.

The author has relapsed into his old habits, and has started to cheat again, following and undermining the author.

Let's be honest, the author is just not good, his writing style is too bad and he can't write anything.

I would like to advise everyone, based on my 15 years of experience in reading online articles, don't have high expectations for this book. There were no problems when you met the evil soul master, but it became a big problem when you met the blood demon. This is the prelude to writing about the eunuch who collapsed.

The strength of the protagonist comes from the Holy Blade of Kamen Rider. As we all know, Douluo is a fantasy floor tile. Kamen Rider is too strong. It is boring to be invincible all the way, so we must suppress the combat power, but we must suppress it reasonably. Use the world to suppress the Kamen Rider's combat power. Because the power of Kamen Rider comes from outside the world, this world does not accept it, so suppress its power and release the suppression method. Once the fantasy drive book is set, the soul ring, each set unlocks 10% of its strength, and finally unlocks it when it reaches 70% or 80%. This requires using the colors of Kamen Rider to saturate the world and promote the world. When you encounter local villains, fight them when they should, and destroy them when they should. If there is a villain you want to describe in particular, then just let him gain power from outside the world. Kamen Rider? We and the enemy have the same origin. Where there are knights, there will be weirdos. It is said that Aix came to this world and wanted to use the resources of this world for research. He brought many weirdo resources and turned the people here into weirdos. This will not only improve the strength of the enemy, but as I write this, just improve the collective that suppresses the non-existent combat power. What are you doing here? Although Kamen Rider W in Douluo World is now a eunuch, he doesn't have much fighting power. At least he can fight happily. It doesn't look as frustrating as you. The demon scientist in Legend of Dragon King doesn't even have strong fighting power. It's written in such ink, and you can't tell the feeling of satisfaction at all. In fact, he has no energy. For fans, there is no motivation to pursue it.

Let's start with the Blood Demon

I understand chivalry, and I hope to see that the protagonist's chivalry is exclusive to the protagonist, because every knight's chivalry is different, but in summary, it can be said in one sentence: Kamen Rider Kuuga protects everyone's smiles, Yajida protects the possibilities of human beings, 555 protects the dreams of others, W, protects the city where he is, and the old driver protects the citizens, Ai Kesaide is the ultimate rescuer and protects patients. Kamen Rider Soki protects love and peace. Even Wang Xiaoming, who walks in the gray area, has something to protect, which is the world of his girlfriend. In order to protect his girlfriend's world, he will not hesitate to become enemies of all the knights. During the Kamen Rider period, the king protected history. If history runs normally, no one will remember him? Including himself, but once someone interferes with the correct direction of history, the Knight King will appear and correct this mistake. Therefore, every Kamen Rider has chivalry. What is chivalry? It is the belief that you persist in. No matter it is good or bad, as long as you protect you, you are a Kamen Rider. Regardless of whether your guardian is someone else or yourself, chivalry is the only difference between a weirdo and a knight. Knights with chivalry are called masks. Knights without chivalry can only be called weirdos, or alien knights. The reason why alien knights look so ugly is because they use this power to satisfy their own selfish desires and their evil hearts. This kind of appearance comes from the heart. This is a strange knight. Because he has no knight's heart and spirit, that's why his appearance is so ugly. I suggest you find your predecessor, the Mask, Knight, and Rider who lives in the DC world. His name is Ke Wen. Learn from him and develop your own Kamen Rider form. You always use other people's discriminatory forms. When you go to the show in the future, you will meet two identical ones. Wouldn't you feel embarrassed? Therefore, it is best to create a knight form that is exclusive to you. Only this knight form that is exclusive to you can exert 100% of your original power, or even reach 1000%, to exert your strength. Specifically speaking, chivalry means that when you hear the cry for help, you cannot ignore it. When they meet people in trouble, they will lend a helping hand. The Kamen Riders are not gods, they are also human beings, and they will also fail, but for the hope in the children's hearts and the dreams in their hearts, no matter how many times they fail, they will stand up, even if many people in the world are against the Kamen Riders. To have a person, you need a Kamen Rider to call the name of the Kamen Rider, and they will appear, because they are warriors who protect the weak. Children, move forward, believe in the justice in your heart, and we will always protect you, because we are the heroes of the children, Kamen Rider, What is the heart of a knight? Isn't it just idealism? What is idealism? Some people do it for the hope of others, some people do it to protect smiles, some people do it for love and peace, some people do it for the health of patients, some people fulfill their obligations, some people do it for food, some people do it for the community, no matter what they do, knights are a group of lovely guys who have a reason to fight. Just like Xiao Ming said in the last chapter of Master Fa, knights never fight for justice. There is always a reason to fight. The reason why knights are knights is because of their heart. Otherwise, what is the difference between it and supernatural novels? In addition, don't ignore the essence of chivalry. Don't make the protagonist miserable like most knight novels. The essence of knight's heart is not that the protagonist wants to protect others no matter how miserable he is, but that he never forgets the heart of protecting others no matter when and where. This is what Kamen Rider is really like. Son, the hero of children, I am the most essential form of Kamen Rider. To put it simply, chivalry means hiding tears with a mask, crushing the darkness with rage, protecting the weak with both fists, and using this body to create a future for the world. This is the hero of children. I have been hesitating about this tree for a long time, do you want to see it? Because there are so many heroines. As a Kamen Rider, one heroine is enough. All the girls in the character list are behind the heroine. It reminds me of the protagonist fighting and bringing the harem group with him. It's a bit weird when I think about it. It's not like Kamen Rider.

The previous writing was very good, but why did it fall apart from the Dark Blood Demon? I no longer have the daily expectations I had before. Delete the collection. Anyway, if you continue, you will be a eunuch. It has gradually collapsed.

How do you plan to develop Ancient Dragon?

Will the protagonist write other Digimon books?

How long is this book expected to be available?

The author can write a book like Unlocking the Kamen Rider from Douluo