Just Trying to Gain Reputation in the World, I Am Invincible!

🙂 There is nothing wrong with it 🙂 It's just that Gold Finger is not interesting 🙂 It has no outstanding effect in more than ten chapters 🙂 I came to see the protagonist 🙂 Not to see the duckweed floating in the water 🙂

Identification by a ten-year old bookworm. The writing is quite fluent, and there are no bad points. If you are willing to continue reading it and put it on the shelf, as long as you can update it, it should not be a problem for it to be a high-quality book. Three monthly passes are given, come on!

If you have any impressions, I have mentioned it before. After the author responded to the logical contradictions in the book, he felt that he should have a clear understanding of it, so he deleted it himself anyway, so as not to let subsequent readers have a preconceived impression. If you want to follow the traditional cultivation of immortality, then there is no need for the huge overworld of steampunk, because traditional cultivation of immortality is essentially about defeating monsters, upgrading and changing maps, rather than fighting for hegemony in a huge overworld. No matter how vast the mortal world is, the lack of resources for cultivating immortals is meaningless for traditional cultivation of immortality, not to mention the classic cultivation of immortality as a superior substitute for martial arts. To be honest, it can be written in this way for a long time, but few are good at it. Cultivation of immortals and steampunk can be compatible, but the idea that cultivating immortals is above all else must be eradicated. The advantage of cultivators should be limited to lifespan, or the absolute number of cultivators can be limited directly from talent, so that cultivators can only exist in the form of small associations, rather than engaging in monopoly of knowledge and resources. In that way, it can only write about the colonization of the mortal world by the immortal world. You are already a colonizer. Are you likely to let the development of the mortal world threaten you? No. In the end, steampunk and martial arts are all meaningless. The more you write about the cultivation of immortality, the easier it will be to ruin it.

No, right? If you die just after confessing your love, are you not planning to accept Jiang Xiaoyu? Or is it to promote the development of the plot of the novel, but it doesn't have to be like this, right?

Pig's feet are always in danger. With perfect swordsmanship, can you only beat an ordinary person with 10 enemies? Is this setting too low?

This latest chapter is full of questions.

It's such a pity. It's well written. I'll support the author in the end.

Well written, with innovative details

The rhythm of the writing is good, but it's just not refreshing enough. Keep up the good work, I really like this kind of subject matter.

Are there any other novels similar to this kind of steampunk novel with the framework of high martial arts and the Republic of China?

Author, are your recent plots a little skewed? And it feels like there's no progress at all.

The writing is not refreshing enough, it feels a bit like a rundown. The fact that Xiaoyu was taken in but was blown up to death was very tasteless. It could have been omitted, but you described it, and ended up feeding people a piece of shit. That's purely disgusting for readers. This martial arts system is weird. I go to school in the lower world, be a student, and still survive in the sect after ascending to the ninth heaven. I feel that this framework is too small. The description of the Earth Ranking, Heavenly Ranking, Dog Ranking, etc. At the beginning was originally thought to be focused on describing it, like Jicha's "Book of Troubled Times", to show off, but as the protagonist's strength has improved too fast, it has become useless now (but maybe the author just wants to write it in detail so that readers can have a sense of involvement, this is a small problem). In general, it's just not fun enough, and it feels like a running account.

A little less refreshing, but overall pretty good

Please give the author more updates! The monthly vote has been cast at the beginning of the month!

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

There are multiple heroine tags, is it a harem? Author

Brother, when you finished this book, didn't you say that a new book would be published in about a week? How long has it been? When will it be released? I am a novice and want to write a book, how should I start?