Happy Gray Little Starlight
喜灰之点点星光
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 6k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Works
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Chapters
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I really want to see this work get better. I think the author can make a chapter of 2000 words. I suggest that the character characteristics of each sheep and wolf should be captured in more details such as action, language, demeanor, psychology, etc., And a little description of the environment can be added to enhance the atmosphere and promote the development of the story. Since it is in the "human world", I think some distinctive characters can be created, and some new characters can be added with their specific way of speaking, or use action descriptions to create specific images. I hope there will be more. Finally, come on, author! 🥳