The Groom of the Great Song Dynasty: Jingkang Was Humiliated at the Beginning

I suggest you think more about it before writing. The war is chaotic and one or two people are taken on a far journey. The protagonist is very good at fighting? Why did Zongze's son go out to the city to find medicine without a doctor and a prostitute, just to play on the road? These poisonous points really affect the reading experience.

He pretended to be the daughter of the clan and gradually took over power. He recruited Yue Fei as a general and gradually expanded his army. He killed the gentry to raise the army. He first took over the south of the Yangtze River and then moved to the Central Plains. He appointed himself the general marshal of the captives and the marching general of Jiangnan Road. In the name of welcoming the second emperor of Hui and Qin, he took power and gathered troops and grain for the Northern Expedition. He killed Zhao Gou, Qin Hui and other civil servants of the Song Dynasty secretly.

It's over, the title of the book is too uninteresting, here are a few alternatives Starting with Jingkang Shame: I can see the horse's bloodline The Horse Breeder of the Song Dynasty

What is the use of the horse-raising system? The protagonist's talent is the most important. It is suggested that the system can give feedback to the protagonist to improve the protagonist's body. The body also contains the brain: intelligence.

With such a useless protagonist, why are you traveling through Jingkang?

From the beginning, I felt that the protagonist, a slave, sympathizes with the Zhao and Song Dynasties. How could he not sympathize with the people who had their families destroyed and their wives and children separated because of their harm to the country and the people. In ancient times, we were just like untouchables. We were divided into different classes depending on whether we were close or not. After you have raised a horse, you are not still a horse breeder. How can you cross classes? It is better to be as strong as an ox. Because if you are strong enough to beat people to death, others will be afraid of you.

It's not exciting at all, it's long-winded and ink-stained. There's nothing outstanding about the protagonist or Goldfinger. The plot is bland and tasteless. How can I put it? The writing is good, but it's really not suitable for online writing. If you let the protagonist develop alone, you can still read it. But if you are a slave to others and worry about this and that, it's so frustrating that it's really unreadable. Trust me, the author, just open a new book. This book is hopeless.

You can read it without thinking. The protagonists written in many places are very stupid. There are only three people traveling in chaos? I was almost eaten by the homeless people, lip beads. I can't even imagine how there could be such a stupid person. Will he die if he sends a team of soldiers to accompany him?

The more you write, the smaller it gets. It has become a Korean drama. One look can fill 3 episodes!

After reading more than 40 chapters, I couldn't stand the famous prostitute. I was really speechless. I don't know what the author was thinking. Did he want to make it more difficult? When Zongze's son died, he saved a prostitute. Well, he was not a prostitute but a singer. He was speechless. He also said that Song Huizong was not good at it. He was half a catty.

The plot is too witty, and a female character is given later, while the male protagonist is just a piece of trash.

After reading Chapter 30, I really can't stand it anymore. . . The writing is good, and the plot is poisonous.

Because I am still a student, I will save a lot of manuscripts before writing a book, so there will be preset chapters on weekdays, and many comments I can only see on the weekends for a day or two. As for the poisonous points, at the beginning of the new semester, I seem to have become busier, and I feel that I still have time to change it, because once I change it, some of the things in the middle will change a lot, I am very sorry. I'm going to school this afternoon.

The book is very good, but I don't know why poison is added and some nonsense about the princess pretending to be the prince is done.

It's understandable considering the author is still a student. After all, this age group still lacks experience in understanding life and human nature. The setting of the book is quite interesting, but unfortunately some of the plots are too ridiculous. Even if you read the story, you are also looking at other people's lives and human nature. If the story lacks logic and basic insights into human nature, it will be difficult to become invested in it. I hope the author will continue to grow and become a great master.

There are hammers here and there. The plot before the bandit army was just okay, but after that the plot became more and more scattered.

With such a princess, I am really speechless