Zhetian: I Have a Diary

Emperor Guang Immortal King re-cultivated his cultivation, but as a result his character, belief, and mentality were like those of a mortal who knew nothing. None of them were decent.

Awesome, as a re-cultivator of the Emperor Light Immortal King, he can't solve the little girl's problem, and he still has to ask others, poisonous

It feels like a popular science article. The existence of the protagonist has no meaning at all. It is purely for fun. After all, the diary is rubbed by Ye Fan's hands.

The author said that the inability to solve the little girl's problem is due to insufficient cultivation, and I agree. After all, as the Emperor Light Immortal King, he definitely has the reincarnation technique, but in the end, he still has to rely on Ye Fan behind the diary to give him (reward), so what? Did he re-cultivate his own technique without bringing it with him? Do you still want to follow Ye Fan's route? You do whatever he wants?

Well, I feel like the protagonist of this book is still Ye Fan. The protagonist is just one to show off how awesome Ye Fan is. There are also a lot of content that retells the original plot. I can only say that it is indeed fresh, but it would be boring if the whole novel was just like this.

The setting of innateness is a piece of shit. Since there is a system, don't have anything to do with the Three Heavenly Emperors. Wouldn't it be more fun to directly become the Three Heavenly Emperors who are unpredictable?

The steps are too big. In the first few chapters, the most enjoyable realms of Immortal King and Immortal Emperor are revealed to the ant-like characters. Alas, the step is too big.

This book should be changed to: Covering the Sky, My Licking Daddy Ye Fan

Dude, find a class, you are not suitable for writing novels

Another Tomato author, the ironclad eunuch

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.

The main plot can be explained as: praising Ye Fan in the diary and then letting a bunch of female characters post about Ye Fan. Ye Fan is more of a protagonist than the protagonist. There is no content about cultivation or plot.

My remarks two days ago may have been a bit fierce, so to prevent others from calling me stupid, I will analyze the shortcomings of this book. 1. There is a problem with the design of the golden finger. No matter how I think about it, I feel that the plot of Ye Hei giving the protagonist a golden finger is outrageous. Let the protagonist be born with a short hair and a black head. Even if you design the legacy of the diseased Emperor, it will be more reasonable than this. 2. The spoiler-free version of the game without the main character (the god is hidden and the god is half hidden) is actually a better choice. The protagonist's participation in the plot is not high, so what is the need for this protagonist to exist? As this book is written, there is no distinction between priority and priority. The protagonist's article is not like the protagonist's article, and the group portrait article is not like the group portrait article. They are completely different from each other. 3. There are problems with the protagonist's positioning and plot design. I wanted to write about Lezi, but in the end Lezi didn't find myself and became Lezi. I wrote a spoiler about dark history, and got beaten up in the end. Is the main character designed to be a clown? Want to become friends and brothers with Ye Hei? It's a bit short in terms of settings. I have read a lot of Zhetian fics, but there are only three books that I really want to criticize. Apart from this one, there is also one about Marrying into Ye Hei's harem and one about licking a ruthless person. To be honest, if a newcomer writes a book, the setting is not bad, but readers are not looking for the protagonist to be a loser. It's okay if you're making yourself happy and think I'm farting.

In the future, if you write about ruthless people, you can use the Dao Diary to reveal the origin of her brother to the empress. I speculate that there are three possibilities. The first is a trace of the copper coffin owner's remnants, the second is a drop of blood from the ancient era that Shi Hao shed during his transformation into eternity, and the third possibility is the most likely - it involves Ye Fan's journey to the Immortal Emperor. Ye Fan may have performed an Immortal Game before he came to the Immortal Emperor. The dream of the emperor is eternal, and the ruthless brother is the reincarnation of Ye Fan's dream, so Brother Dong said that Ye Fan is not a reincarnation, just because he is the brother that the empress wants to wait for. Only these possibilities can explain why the empress did not resurrect her brother until the end, because Ye Fan formed a closed loop of time and space after he became the immortal emperor, and he recognized the ruthless brother and sister.

Are you a pimp for Ye Fan? 😅 It seems like you are writing a diary, but in fact you are sending the Holy Goddess to Ye Fan's bed?

It's similar to a movie-watching stream. The protagonist basically has no sense of existence. With the current plot, it feels like copying the original work. People's reactions are repeated over and over again.

When I saw that Ye Fan threw the male protagonist over in the introduction, I knew that this book was probably a dog-licking novel.

In fact, many people writing about Zhetian will fall into a misunderstanding, thinking that having more powerful skills and secret techniques will make them more powerful. This is actually contrary to the connotation of Zhetian itself. Zhetian has never had any invincible method, only invincible people, without an invincible heart. What can it do even if it is given to immortals? Zhetian is the world of Tietouwa, and everything is a single-plank bridge. Among the younger generation in the Beidou Star Territory, apart from the emperor's sons, the only ones who can be considered top geniuses are Yaoguang. In fact, he is a little bit behind. In the entire universe, there are only gods, Taichu, Yin Tiande, and Emperor. Huang, Huo Linzi, Dao Yi, Sheng Prince, Zhang Bairen, these people are truly geniuses of a certain level. As for Jiang Taixu, Old Madman, and Dongfang Taiyi, they are certainly of the same level. The others in Beidou are not even a little bit behind.

Rubbish, Ye Fan's dog-licking article?

Comments on "Zhetian: I Have a Diary": A brilliant work by Zhetian fan with unique ideas In the vast ocean of Zhetian fan, "Zhetian: I Have a Diary" is definitely a unique wave. The author uses the imagination setting of "diary system + Lao Liu system" to create a world-shattering adventure full of surprises and joy for readers. The setting is novel, and the imagination goes beyond the horizon A Lao Liu system that "runs away in panic" accidentally involves the protagonist Lin Yan in the decisive battle of the Holy Ruins, and then directly throws the blame and runs away. The protagonist is picked up by Ye Fan and sent to the world of Zhetian. He also gets a "diary system" - this opening is full of absurdity and fun. Copies of the diary have also been obtained by big bosses from all parties. This setting is naturally full of dramatic conflicts and suspense, making readers unable to help but wonder how this diary will affect the fate of the heroes of Zhetian, and what kind of waves it will cause the protagonist Lin Yan to make in the world of Zhetian. The labels of time travel, system flow, and invincible flow are integrated extremely smoothly, especially the "spoiler" diary, which creates new ways of information gap, making the protagonist's survival and development in the world full of infinite possibilities. The style is relaxed, and the protagonist of Leziren is very lovable The protagonist Lin Yan's "Leziren" attribute is throughout, and this character is particularly interesting in a world full of dangers. He is no longer a bitter and resentful protagonist in traditional fan fiction or a protagonist who is obsessed with hegemony. Instead, he has a mentality of watching the excitement and not taking it too seriously. He relies on the spoilers of the diary and his own adaptability to "make a living" in the world of Zhetian. He also watches the various reactions of various bosses because of the diary. This relaxed and humorous style allows readers to gain a lot of happiness when reading, and is very suitable for relaxing and decompressing. Character interaction, classic characters get a new look As the core character of Zhetian, Ye Fan's "black-bellied and righteous" attribute is fully demonstrated in this book. His interaction with the protagonist Lin Yan is full of highlights, including the guidance of the senior to the junior, and the curious exploration of the secrets of the diary. Other classic characters from Zhetian will probably have various ridiculous reactions after being exposed to copies of the diary. This secondary creation of the original characters not only respects the original characters, but also gives them new story lines, making old fans feel more familiar and full of freshness. Summary "Zhetian: I Have a Diary" stands out among Zhetian fan works with its unique imagination, relaxed style and interesting character interactions. If you are a fan of Zhetian and want to read a different Zhetian story; if you like novels with systematic flow, invincible flow and light-hearted and funny elements, then this book is definitely worth reading. It is like a spice that allows you to taste a new and interesting reading experience in the familiar world of Zhetian. The 1.02 Million words serialized so far are enough to prove that its content is solid and attractive, and it is worth collecting and updating!

(The author is right, everyone has their own opinions, but for me, the empress's reaction is really poisonous. I took advantage of my free time today to write a chapter with the effect I wanted. It only represents my personal thoughts. I have no intention of offending the author. Please feel free to comment~) ... Seeing this, the empress's beautiful face stiffened. She did not expect such a result. She cried with joy. Ye Fan was indeed her brother. Everything is clear. Her past is the future in Ye Fan's timeline. In her experience, her brother was the holy body more than 200,000 years ago, and was sacrificed to the immortal god for blood. For Ye Fan, that was what he would experience countless years later, when he was about to set foot on the Immortal Emperor. Naturally, he will not recall the so-called "previous life" now, because it was him alone from beginning to end. There are many factors involved between him and the Empress, and they are also very complicated. Time and space are confused, cause and effect are blurred, and the past and the future are intertwined between the two of them, forming a closed loop of time and space. In fact, this is only possible if it involves taboo methods at the level of the Immortal Emperor. Of course, many of the details, which the empress was still crying in the ancient forbidden land at this moment, are destined to be unable to be explored and thoroughly understood. But no matter what, she already understood that Mark was her real brother. The empress was filled with sorrow and joy, her shoulders were trembling, and a bronze grimace mask seemed to be crying but not crying, half smiling but not smiling. Just like her expression at the moment, there was laughter in it, bright and sentimental. Looking back on her life, it should be the same. In the past, she was extremely graceful, standing at the pinnacle of humanity, ruling over the nine heavens and ten lands. When the empress is in this world, all living beings worship her and the restricted areas are intimidated. But he... "If I live forever, can I wait until he comes back?" She looked back, and the eternal years were passing by. Since then, for more than 200,000 years, I have lived life after life, not to become an immortal or to live forever, but just to see the person I have longed for day and night again.       In the original time and space, she was in the realm of humanity after all. Although she could see through Ye Fan, she could not see through her brother. After all, he was the person who was about to become the Immortal Emperor, and there was a great cause and effect caused by the years of chaos. Moreover, the empress had never explored his true identity, but relied on a corner of blood clothes to use supreme means to trace the past, which was even more difficult. In order to get a glimpse of the essence of his brother's soul, the so-called difference is a thousand miles away. From this perspective, Ye Fan and his brother are naturally just two "similar flowers." Therefore, when the empress spied on Ye Fan again after becoming an immortal, she shed tears and said the words "You are not..." In a confused voice, and then turned around and left lonely. It will not be until Ye Fan ascends to the Immortal Emperor after endless years that the brother and sister will truly recognize each other. Now, the Dao Dao Diary has exposed everything, letting the empress know in advance that Ye Fan is the brother she has been waiting for in the mortal world. This is undoubtedly the best and most satisfactory result for the empress. Because, from the perspective of a bystander, Ye Fan was noticed by the Empress as soon as he was born, and then met the little girl, until the two became immortals, the Empress accompanied Ye Fan in person, and never separated until Ye Fan was sacrificed. From this spectator perspective, Ye Fan, his little girl, and the empress have been together all the time, and today's diary reveals everything, allowing the empress to also have this spectator perspective, and thus discover what a beautiful truth - it turns out that she was involved in her brother's entire life. Thinking of this, the empress' body trembled. At this moment, her Taoist heart was perfect, and her eternal obsession seemed to be dissipated, but it turned into a new obsession in an instant. She decided not to recognize her brother for the time being, but Continue to let the little girl stay with Ye Fan. She is the sister that Ye Fan really recognizes from his perspective at this time, but it is also her. She wants to accompany her brother to become an immortal like this. The secret of Dao Dao Diary should also be known to Ye Fan, and then she can get to know him. If anyone is present, you can see that the most elusive woman in ancient times, the empress with unparalleled magic power and fierce power, has a little smile in her eyes at this moment. She has a reason to practice again. She will stand unswervingly beside her brother Ye Fan to deal with the future enemy together.

When does the author plan to write about the Holy Ruins?

Isn't the Author's Law a common thing for a creature of this level? : Fighting in the realm first is already involving time and space; it is absolutely impossible to rely on the law of time to always stay at the top. Otherwise, Wuzhong, who is building the Time Avenue, will not be worn to death by the wheel station! ! !

Find two Bansheng from your own camp to pretend that Ye Fan is not paying attention, and arrest Ye Fan's parents Then they send out a message to threaten Ye Fan and ask Heihuang and others to secretly lay the trap With this link, you can wait for the enemy to come to deliver food.

Rubbish, pure dog-licking novel, the protagonist is an egg, useless at all, rubbish

There is no need to write a mortal as the heroine

If it's finished, click End

And now that I have come back, I can describe what has happened in the human world over the years. I can also use the narrator's perspective to tell the story of the growth of this group of people, and also talk about the fun of the fairies getting along with Ye Fan. I feel it is quite interesting.

The mindset needs to be opened up. Assistant Zaiyuan is the original timeline. Both Liu Shen and Ye Qingxian are Pan Ye's biggest debts and regrets. Although everything will be fine in the future, according to their personalities, they will definitely not let it happen again. Under this premise, who knows what backup they have left in the diary or in the eternal time and space. It is reasonable to say that people with potential can basically be saved, and they will definitely not be allowed to continue to die.

After listening to more than a hundred chapters, I felt pretty good, but the battle scenes were too overwhelming. Each one had four poles, transformed into a dragon, and started with the power to easily tear apart mountains and seas. However, during the battle, the Seven Heaven-defying Demon Swords only cut out a blade of more than ten feet, and there were also large hands with a radius of several feet falling. When I heard this, I thought it was a martial arts master who was in the fight, and it was a few martial arts masters fighting. The author can write it more grandly, not only that the great road is wiped out, but at least it must have a shocking feeling of destroying the world and destroying the mountains and rivers.