Naruto: Starting from Kidnapping Kushina

The author doesn't think that the purpose of robbing blood stepwomen from other countries is to take them back and train them, right? You have to know that the little brats in the Naruto world have a world view that is not part of modern adults. Do you really think that the children of your parents are brats who can be brainwashed?

Like the title, very good. The protagonist is from the Kumogakure camp, and the time of time travel is when Kumogakure kidnapped Kumogakure in the original plot. He was one of the three Kumogakure ninjas kidnapped. Because he knew the plot, he reminded his teammates to discover the hair left by Kumogakure in advance. Finally, with the sacrifice of his teammates and the help of the golden finger that came with the time travel, he successfully brought Kumogakure back to Kumogakure Village. The protagonist's golden finger has the same name as the protagonist, called Druid, and its ability is to acquire the skills of the Druid in World of Warcraft. However, skills need to be unlocked and familiarized. While escaping with Kushina, the protagonist fumbled and took advantage of knowing the experience of the characters in the plot, and successfully captured Kushina's heart and made her join Kumogakure. This behavior and his revealed abilities successfully angered Konoha, so Konoha has joined forces with Kirigakure and Iwagakure to declare war on Kumogakure. The outstanding aspects of this book are that one is Kumo Gakure as the protagonist, which is quite fresh compared to the bad start of Konoha Ninja; the other is that the character creation is relatively successful. The changes in the protagonist's mentality and ability are well written and above the standard, and the characters of the supporting characters are also more vivid. Thirdly, the plot rhythm is good, the protagonist's behavior and other people's reactions are all logical. Compared with the original characters, there are currently no subversive magical changes. The fourth is the development of Golden Finger, which is quite interesting. There are also some bad points in this book. One is that the beginning of the book sets that Kyukina is already a Jinchuuriki. This setting has a significant promotion effect on the plot, but it is contrary to the understanding of most Naruto fans. Readers who do not accept it may just leave. The other is the author's explanation of this problem before the first chapter. I personally think it is unnecessary. When I saw the single-chapter explanation, I almost gave up the book. Fortunately, I resisted reading a few chapters and found it good, so I followed it. I suggested the author delete the single chapter. Believe me, if a reader reads a few chapters and discovers the problem with the Nine-Tails setting, even if he feels uncomfortable, the probability of abandoning the book is lower than if he sees this setting in the first chapter.

Looking at the front, I saw that the protagonist had just crossed over because he was afraid of being caught up by Minato Namikaze and wanted to run back to Kumogakure with Kushina feeling As a result, he was killed by Kushina because he ran out of chakra during the experiment and escaped. Fortunately, Kushina did not finish the attack Then Kushina ran away and the protagonist ran to chase her back. Thinking that the protagonist said before that he had to rush back as soon as possible for fear of being caught up by Minato Namikaze, and ended up wasting so much time, it felt so conflicting (although there was an explanation that he needed to experiment with better running skills to deal with it)

Unbelievable, the protagonist in the subsequent battles was either controlled or controlled, and was almost sealed by Konoha and turned into a tailed beast 😅

Put poison at the beginning. At that time, Minato was still a commoner. Illusions came from nowhere, and ninjas like this would commit suicide if they found out that the mission failed. If you are not good enough, just give Minato a set of illusions to track you. You can just send Xin Jiuna back. Anyway, you also like to set difficulties for the protagonist and get bullied.

The opening plot and the zombie movie can run together, but one must be forced to stay and die. In a horror movie, a ghost is coming and everyone has to stay and have a fight. In short, the scary atmosphere is wildly exaggerated. The protagonist is obviously scared to death, but he must not run away, but must take a walk.

The author wrote too little about Yunyin Village. The defense is the same as nothing. The rebel ninja and the Konoha ninja casually attack the protagonist.

Unable to complain, identified as a novice

It is recommended to jump directly to Chapter 17. The first chapter is full of a mixture of water and poison, with inexplicable words and sentences and self-interest, and the difficulty is deliberately increased. The protagonist is like a child who bought a new toy.

Also, Konoha has been strengthened too much. The author of this book is about the protagonist of an ancient novel. The protagonist is constantly being hit and beaten. Ten people can beat the protagonist, haha.

He can abduct Kushina just by talking, his strength is no less than that of the original Raikage

Are there multiple heroines? Robbing the female ninjas from each village, Xiang Xiangling and her daughter from the Cao Ren Village, Loulan, from the Country of Snow, the witch from the Country of Witches, Zhao Meiming from the Country of Water,

Yes, there are no poisonous points at the moment. It's a refreshing Yunyinwen.

Question You Yunling Village dares to steal the help of people from Konoha Village who signed the contract. Are you planning to fight Konoha again? If Mu Yi really fights to the end, he may have to summon the first generation and the second generation again. This is a big problem. It is purely a mindless novel.

You can always only do things in the county town, and you will always be suddenly interrupted by other things. Minato was chasing him, and his teammates risked their lives to help him delay the time. As a result, the protagonist was running and suddenly sat down to play, almost killing himself.

Personal summary of this book is just one sentence. The biggest advantage is Kushina and the interaction between Kushina and Kyuubi. The biggest disadvantage is that the protagonist is not as good as setting the protagonist as Uchiha. Although there are many people writing about it, you can't deny that it is really easy to write and improve the combat power. It would be an advantage if Hanako's pupil skills were sorted out. Your current protagonist looked at the weird World of Warcraft plug-in and it really doesn't feel good and it doesn't fit well with Naruto. Now the protagonist is strong because the transformation and the body create a sense of separation. If it weren't for Kushina, we would have withdrawn.

Interestingly, it was the first time I saw Kushina becoming a Kumo ninja. The emotional scene between the protagonist and Kushina is okay. Can we keep writing about Kushina? Ouch should do it.

It's a little bit toxic when you look at it from the front, but it gets better and better the more you look at it later😋

You can't take away the Nine-Tails Human Power Pillar, Kushina has the ability to explode at any time! What do you think when you are picked up by a stranger while you are awake? Although you are not living well in Konoha, you are a stranger or a member of another shinobi village, so you take it for granted.

The original comic was created based on the cultural background of my childhood, which is completely different from our culture. What I created is like a Chinese who traveled through time and became an Indian Muslim eating beef and pork. It's purely for fun.

Konoha is greatly strengthened, and it's a bit too much to suppress the protagonist.

The subject matter is good, but the author pulls his crotch

Looks good, come on. 🙂

The author pressed his brain to the ground and rubbed it.

Is there any article where Kushina is the heroine? Please recommend.

Come on👏

It's funny, Aburame's bugs are invincible. They can poison the protagonist who is protected in Kumogakure Village silently. If the poison does not kill the protagonist, they can also stun the protagonist again. All other Kumo ninjas are dead. . . . The Raikage probably won't be able to escape either, Konoha is invincible!

Please recommend a Naruto fanfic without a disgusting system.

Uncle Snake in this time and space is too dreamy right

The emotional line is great, but the heroine does not disgust me so far. She is sweet but not greasy. I am so jealous of me as a single person Dry Konoha is not procrastinating, Sarutobi and Danzo died very simply, Orochimaru is also good in the role The Raikage's portrayal has been restored Kushina's character has been restored, lively, brave and cute,