Become a Martial Saint from a Servant

I don't understand what I wrote at all, the words don't convey the meaning and it's a mess.

Do you want to see for yourself what is written? It was clearly recommended by Manager Huang that a fellow villager from the work unit died and his parents took pity on him and came to work in the house. Why did he become a beggar? Master Liu is obviously optimistic about the protagonist, so why is he so easily targeted by the inexplicable Li Gui? How can Li Guihe De be assigned work to the protagonist? Aren't Grade A servants the ones who look after homes and homes? There are C and B servants doing chores. The logic is confusing and the text does not make sense. I dare to write anything. After reading ten chapters, there are so many questions. It is a very poisonous article.

It is extremely poisonous, and the plot design of the protagonist's behavior is completely illogical and random.

The subject matter is novel and there are breakthroughs, but the writing level feels like AI. If the first sentence is wrong, the next sentence is wrong. If you think about it carefully according to the introduction and revise it again, you should be able to become a fairy.

The writing is messy and I don't understand what the novel is about.

Xian Miao, the writing is very good Traveling through Gaowu, starting as a pharmacy apprentice

I feel like the author likes grasshoppers and other small animals. The plot jumps all over the chapter without explaining the causes and consequences.

Too childish, always shouting that strength is the basis, except for fighting, forgetting about strength, always using all kinds of clowns or tricking people to disgust people, just sitting here is a student gang

I want to know after his eye power reaches its maximum level. The power of the dragon and the sun and the moon condensed into the golden boy of the sun and the moon.

I don't know why the resentment finally merged into my eyes. The Holy Eye of Heaven and Earth. The golden pupils of the sun and the moon could be the yin and yang eyes.

I don't know why, but it always feels like the male protagonist has never seen a horror movie. You should know it when you put the talisman paper on it.

Lingxiao True Dragon, everyone is welcome to come and read it for free, I will be very happy that way