Do You Know: Struggle in the Guangling Marquis Mansion

After reading more than a dozen of them, overall the author's writing is good. To a certain extent, you can directly write about a dynasty or write about the Song Dynasty. You don't have to bring your knowledge to write, because after bringing it up, there will definitely be fans of the male channel instead of the original work. There are drama fans who are arguing in the comment area. If the male channel is used, they may argue about the choice of the female protagonist. Of course, from my own perspective, I definitely hope that the female protagonist will choose. It belongs to the characters in the play, but the specifics actually depend on how well the author writes. The advantage of this book is that the author's writing style is delicate, and the characters, large and small, have their own characteristics after being described. Of course, this part has been mentioned in a previous post, so I won't go into details. If you look at the shortcomings now, it doesn't mean that the writing is not good at all, but it still belongs to the category after dozens of chapters have been written. For the prequel part, judging from the many online novels I have read, there are very few or none. Of course, it must be well written, and the causes and consequences are clearly explained. But if it is written too clearly, someone will definitely argue. I have read many posts arguing about this. It is still early to tell what the results will be. For me, it will be good if I can still read it. I hope the author will be able to read it in the future. The more I write, the better, because after reading some of the author's replies, it seems that the meaning is a bit like writing a group portrait (or a bit exaggerated), but the balance in the middle is not easy to grasp. I hope the author can grasp the master in the future, because after all, I am writing a fan, not a badly written fan like Death Fire Sea. Okay, my opinion, I will not participate in too much discussion. If you write after the author, the more you write, the better

This is a genius who revised the history of fictional historical house fighting dramas. It is well written, but you need to get through the first 40 or 50 chapters. It is a super slow-burn type.

I hope the author won't create any original heroine, I just like Hua Lan

Damn, I don't even know what I'm writing. The background description is too long. The protagonist hasn't even appeared yet

I've read half of it, and I'm not happy about it. The author used Zhifu's skin to write a semi-fictional historical novel. After reading half of the book, it's neither a farming novel nor a hegemony novel, nor a house-fighting novel. Furthermore, it is said to be a fanfic and it rarely writes about the heroine Minglan. You wrote this novel based on Zhifu, the heroine, but you put very little ink on the heroine, so the results are so poor. In fact, the author's writing style is very good, but the starting point and focus of the whole book are completely deviated. I hope the author will make a good outline for the next book, because after reading half of the book, the main line of the story is too vague, and the male protagonist's sense of existence is too low. It is all about the cultivation of the family's children, and the male and female characters. The problem with the marriage planning of a girl and a girl is that the focus is off. You have to feel immersed in the novel when reading it. You have a huge number of supporting characters and a huge amount of plot allocation. On the contrary, the male protagonist has very little sense of participation. This will make the readers less and less able to stand it. Forget it, I have talked too much. The author should just laugh it off!

TV drama screenwriters don't dare to write like you, so they have to complain about it. What is the core of your book? It's a pity to throw away tasteless food! Anyway, after reading about ten chapters, I didn't see any trace of the protagonist, so I'll explain everything I want to say. If you want to write so many other people's stories, you have to explore it from the protagonist's line!

If it were to be republished, I personally think it would be better not to create an original heroine. The main character should lie down and let the officials rest assured. In fact, it is just right to marry Hua Lan, and it is just right for the daughter of the fifth-grade general judge to be neither high nor low.

The pacing and framework arrangement are all confusing. The protagonist doesn't have much role in the first dozens of chapters, and there aren't many highlight moments after his appearance. It is obvious that Han Wuniang is arranged to be the heroine of the novel, a character who has never appeared in the TV series... It's a pity that the writing is not bad.

The protagonist has finally developed in the direction of being the nanny of the Sheng family.

Fuck, it feels like I'm actually pasting and copying.

There are too many names, it's so confusing that I can't remember them all. It's better to rewrite a character. The first few dozen chapters are not that exciting, so few people will read them. Now call it a backstory. It can be completely interspersed with the main line.

How many female protagonists are there now? This book is suitable for a single heroine, which is more serious, while multiple heroines are more worldly. Is there a suitable template? I recommend Chen Duling from Yun Zhiyu, and give a girl with a similar net worth as the Bai family, a wealthy daughter who can complement the male protagonist. Or the eldest princess spending her golden years, the collision of rights is more likely to cause sparks. The characters of Zhang Ruonan and Wen Yifan are okay, but it is easy for the male protagonist, who is very utilitarian, to get into a pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. The character of the good girl in the short drama can burn the world with the male protagonist, but it requires the male protagonist to have a certain degree of love brain.

If the author opens a new book, it would be a pity to delete the previous one. It just sits there in the background. Whoever wants to read it can just take a look.

Two generations died in battle, and there was no reward?

You can't write a novel like yours. The protagonist never appears. How many people are willing to read it? You're not writing a masterpiece.

Are you rebelling? If you rebel, I will take a look.

Let's start writing directly from Taizu. The male protagonist is the same as before. Write five million words before starting to write the male protagonist so you can earn more 👍

I'm trying my best. What I'm writing now can be summarized in two or three chapters. I have to get into the plot of the main character. The writing is good and I should know how to describe it in detail. You are not writing a literary masterpiece. Only by getting into the theme quickly can you attract readers. Anyway, I came here for the plot of Zhifu Nai. After reading it for about half a month, the main character is still an infant. To be honest, I don't have the patience to wait any longer.

What is the name of your other book?

The author updates, updates are too slow.

I always feel that the plot of this book limits the author's performance.

I feel like I was really affected by the plot of Do You Know?

The new book has been signed and put on the shelves. Book friends, please move on. "The Great Zhou Dynasty: From the Forbidden Army to the Founding Prince". The original legendary life of the first generation of Guangling Marquis.

Updates are unstable 😰 sometimes one and sometimes two.

I'm halfway through this novel. It's quite good. It's much better than most of the books on my bookshelf. It's a gift from a master. It's amazing.

This plot kills. Marquis Guangling led so many people into the inner city and entered the imperial city first, but it was Lao Gu who killed the rebels.

Congratulations on finishing this book, see you in the next one. I like the main line historical family story written by the author😍😍

Congratulations on finishing this book🎉, see you in the next book 🤭

The father and son died in battle to win a crucial battle, and they got 0 rewards. What the hell?