Leader, I'm Not Bothered Anymore.

I can feel that the author has a deep understanding of the original work. Maybe he doesn't want to destroy Lan Xiaolong's narrative structure and destroy some emotional arcs, but the protagonist really gives me the feeling of being messed up.

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So far, basically nothing has changed. I hope there will be some changes after Dragon comes out.

Not many people write about the group leader, and even fewer write about the young master. Write well.

Come on, six chapters of recommended votes every day

There is less writing, not enough to read, not enough to read

1. Regarding updates, I really can't update normally this month, but it will be normal next month 2. I'm a novice, so the score for this book is secondary. It's mainly about finishing a story I've been thinking about for a long time. At the same time, I should also follow the editor's suggestion to finish a book to exercise my writing skills, so even if I generate electricity for love, I will finish it. Those who are afraid of eunuchs can rest assured. 3. Asking for feedback, you should treat it as practicing your account and practicing an author account. Any encouragement, criticism or criticism are attribute values. Finally, I'm going to sleep, good night cannon fodder.

All the bells and whistles, just go to Yan'an and ask the boss to help you break the situation.

Pigeon? Dialects can be used, but too many and too difficult are too much.

There are too many unnecessary plots. We have to go to the British airfield, and halfway through, we play with the abandoned corpse pit. We don't say anything while we are playing. In the first sentence, Vet Hao is talking about philosophy, and in the second sentence, we get started. The scenes of filming a TV series are cut so quickly. The plot of Sangmen Xing looking for his younger brother in the original book is the best, clean and reasonable, but the scene where Sangmen Xing is at the edge of the pit is simply inexplicable. This section on the edge of the pit completely slowed down the development of the entire plot and affected the entire rhythm. It changed from a novel that looked good enough to continue reading, to a street product that can be quickly mastered with a running account.