Otto: Full of Passion and Resentment!

After reading the latest chapter, I felt it was okay, but the shortcomings are also obvious In the second act of the New Earth story, on the one hand, I want Aizen Makoto and Masaki Keigo to appear to pave the way for the subsequent plot. On the other hand, I want readers to know that the protagonist is a more intellectual person. But after reading the chapter, the overall feeling is very stiff, with stiff turns and stiff turns. Hard plot connections, stiff character changes, stiff comrades-in-arms... It seems that the whole story of a new earth is very bland, so bland that it can be deleted directly without anyone feeling pity The protagonist, as Nexus, is the most important thing, I think it is a growth process, whether it is for myself or the relationship with my partners, in my opinion. It is very necessary to polish it carefully The evolution of Nexus, Aizen's admiration for Kai to learning and becoming, Masaki Keigo's prejudice against Dagu to understanding and transcending, are all worthy of being slowly transformed and described in large chapters I think the most important thing about Ultraman is not the fight with monsters, but its core, otherwise why would every movie Odu's unit review, Zeta's unit review is very good, isn't it? To sum up, I think it is completely possible to write slower, lengthen the story of each scene, and write the content more naturally, but it does not mean to write some running accounts, polish the content twice for each update, it definitely has the potential to become a high-quality product Come on

The popularity of the king among the four Olympics is low, but he loses to his appearance in terms of strength Also ps: Nexus does not know how to kill.

It's so hard, changing the name changed the book to death. Are you happy, author?

I haven't opened this book since I changed its name.

Please, please change your name back. This name is so embarrassing now.

Although it's hard to hear, I feel that nowadays, if this title is thrown into the bookshelf, it will pollute the bookshelf.

Progress depends on the system, and the protagonist rarely relies on his own hard work to improve his strength and learn skills.

Another person who was fooled by a marketing account

Will this article have a CP? It's not that it's not good to have a female protagonist, it's mainly because I've seen too many people who don't know how to write emotional scenes but have to write them, and I'm overly addicted 😅 It's so well written that I didn't say it [Infinite Stacking Armor]

That thing is simply impossible to recover from. Like other Ultraman, he can completely recover from his strange rhythm. When there was Zaki, Nexus had no time to recover and could only use the Stone Wings to accelerate cell division to recover. That's why it seems like a life-saving thing. If you ask other Ultraman to come, do you believe that their transformation lights will all be red?

What Tang syndrome book title, did you sell it and change it?

This is the first time I abandoned a book because I changed its title...

I feel a headache when I look at this name now This name is too childish Did the review ask you to change it? Review editor?

Finally saw Owen who has an appetite

If you had this name before, I wouldn't even be able to click on the book and read it.

When Kirino Makoto said to the protagonist that he was not disappointed, I would have thought the protagonist would have given him two slaps with his backhand. He has some prophetic ability. He is so pretentious. The person asking for help is pretending to be a real boss.

Well, there is no time limit for the fittest, only physical energy limit. Other Ultraman only have a three-minute limit on Earth.

The plot is very interesting, but the changes to the characters are too big and the jokes are too serious. It doesn't look like the characters in the original work. Everyone's dialogues are added with Internet memes, which looks very strange. The characters have lost their innocent essence.

This name is too silly. Please change it.

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Give you a monthly pass and change your name back? This name doesn't quite match the protagonist

It was the first time I met that I changed the title of my book to death, but I didn't listen to my advice when I came back.

I think this one is even better than Mao Se's first two Ultrabooks. The other Ultrabooks are either too plot-y or weird and fun, and I can't watch them with any desire at all.

I don't know why, but this book always disappears from my bookshelf. I always have to find it in my browsing history, but I don't cancel it.

Judging from the plot at the beginning of the original, and the feeling that appears later, it feels like it is from the Star of Light. It may be the screenwriter of Tongfeng, or the will of the world. As for why the King of Ultra is not worried, because the ending is those routines anyway, and it is always good in the end (maybe)

So cool! ! ! I was so excited to see it!

Suddenly I finished the book, which is a bit...

Exquisite! Understand!

This month's monthly pass is all for you, hurry up and add more! ! ! ! ! !