Laying Low as a Talent at the First Holy Demon Sect

Hajihe's recommendation to the Dogmatic Demon was really crucial. As a newcomer who didn't know anyone at the beginning, I was really touched. A Silver Alliance thanks Hajihe for his help, and hopes to open a new book as soon as possible so that I can continue to learn and imitate ()

Promise me, I'll learn how to copy from Wenzhi Public School

The important thing is the feeling(●• ̀ω•́ )✧

The scenes before and just after foundation building are the most interesting. After that, each one is smarter and stupider than the other. It seems that your protagonist is the only smart person in the world. Take Mrs. Chongguang as an example. The author has always emphasized that she is Mrs. Chongguang. She is usually well protected, so she is stupid. The question is, hasn't she lived several lifetimes, and was she born as Mrs. Chongguang? How did such a stupid thing reach perfection in the middle stage of foundation building, and it was still practiced in the Chu Sheng Sect. Compared with the previous one, Yu Su is really smart. Most of the time, it's fine to just watch it without thinking, but later on, when you take a closer look, you will find that there are flaws and loopholes everywhere. More than 90% of the powerful enemies that the protagonist fights are tribulations. This kind of common sense can make the protagonist fail every time. It's like the protagonist is the only one who can hold an umbrella on a rainy day, and no one else can. The author forcefully lowers the intelligence and lowers the intelligence. Don't fix the patches that can't be put on the table. If you don't have the writing power, don't write this big framework. It's over.

We may once again see a new author become a god with a book. There are many visible flaws at the beginning of this book, such as too many jokes that make people tired, the lack of a plot of their own, and the protagonist's eagerness to restart the book that makes people say that their IQ is off the line. But after seeing 450,000 words, these problems disappeared. The main plot is the main tone, and the jokes are the embellishment. After the world view is unfolded, it becomes more and more interesting, and the plot becomes more exciting. Especially the various birth operations of the protagonist make people unable to put it down. There is also a big advantage here, that is, the supporting characters are not witty. The supporting characters are not clever, and it is satisfying to watch the protagonist being born. Otherwise, it will be like bullying a kindergarten child, and it will just be boring.

Regarding Ang Xiao's ending, I hope he won't be included in the banner. Ang Xiao is a proud man. He has overcome obstacles all the way, and during the long five thousand years, he has continued to strive for what he wants in his heart. The arrogance of "not willing to be inferior to others" is engraved in his bones. Even if the road ahead is full of thorns, he has never flinched. For him like this, the ending should be upright and vigorous. At the last moment, even though he knew that his skills were inferior to others, he still had an unyielding fire. He will face death calmly, with the most heroic attitude, maintaining the heart of "no regrets even in body and mind". After five thousand years of persistence, he lost the result but never lost his spirit. He could accept failure and accept death, but he would not accept becoming someone else's slave or lower his proud head. As Hemingway said, "People can be destroyed, but they cannot be defeated." The body may disappear, but the stubbornness and dignity engraved in the soul will always shine brightly and will not be defeated by any force. The above is my personal opinion, just a suggestion

I feel that the realm is set beyond the standard, and you can play with luck and cause and effect in the foundation stage. If you reach perfection in Qi training, you will die if you mess with the cause and effect. It is only the early stage of the foundation stage. Things can be calculated casually. Without plug-ins, others can't play at all! You can practice the Sage Way during the Qi training period, it's beyond the standard! What kind of immortality can you cultivate if everything is bound by fate and fate?

To be honest, I only thought this book was good after reading the plot about asking for money, especially the part about Chongguang. I have never read Xuanjian. If this part is original, then you have the ability to be platinum, just write it well, but if it is plagiarized, it is just a piece of cake

Can it be less God's perspective? The logic of inferring causes from results appears too much. It's really awkward and the logic is very far-fetched.

The plot of Hades is pretty good, but those who just want to see the ending can stop talking so much.