
Naruto: Akatsuki's Popular Group from Scratch
火影:从零开始的晓组织人气天团
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 106k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The last chapter... Serve ordinary people, are you kidding... Man, this is an ideological issue. You use these productivity to serve ordinary people. What do you do, and then it will still be the same as taking jobs from ordinary people, and then it becomes, the ninja middle class, the daimyo has a lot of money, what do ordinary people eat? He doesn't have to work anymore, so he has nothing to eat. You are in a world of blood, where strength is the most important thing. You have a golden finger. You have to spread chakra to slowly change the world, instead of... Serving ordinary people. This B world view can only play with capital, and the road to socialism will not work. Unless the strong people are very conscious and do not make more money, otherwise you will find from the age of 0 to the age of 20 that a Naruto, a man with a tailed beast, can work many times more than you.
I can see that the writing is average, the plot is attractive, and it will develop into farming, but there are many typos, and many people often label Danzo as Hanzo.
It's less than 100,000 words, and it's already so watery. To put it harshly, I can't stop the plot even after jumping through 4 chapters.
I have ideas, but my writing needs to be refined.