The Battle Is Broken, Huo Linfei Travels Through Time and Becomes Xiao Yan

What are you writing about? Huo Linfei is not Huo Linfei, but a suture monster with Xiaoyan. Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. You are obviously writing a cool article. The whole Xiao family was massacred. Huo Linfei traveled through time and was massacred. That was not in vain. Your Douhuang cultivation is the same as if you haven't practiced it, you can't eat the fried cakes. Your time travel at the beginning was also very poor. What you wrote was about the anti-inflammatory period during the period when fire seizes the body and loses wood. Is that good? Xiao Xun'er's favorite anti-inflammatory was taken away from her, and she mistakenly regarded her enemy as her lover. Is this right? Written as Fire Lin Flying Through the Fetus to Reduce Inflammation, wouldn't it be bad if the true anti-inflammation is still on the earth without traveling through time? Huo has never awakened Su Hui and has been humiliated. Isn't it good to suddenly awaken and fight back? It really poisoned me

Fake geniuses: Xiao Yan, Shi Hao, etc. Real genius: From the first night when I got the power lock, no one guided me to transform independently, I realized the super beast god by myself, and smashed the ghost king's Huo Linfei (equivalent to starting from Wutan City for 7 days of training and running to the world to create endless Fire Territory is facing off with Tian Xie Shen, and Tian Xie Shen is probably still suppressed and beaten by Huo Linfei casually) Comparing Xiao Yan and Shi Hao (one became Dou Emperor at 37 years old, and the other became Huang Tian Emperor at 2.6 Million years old) Huo Linfei: Became Dou Emperor at 37 years old? Is there another person who only needs 2.6 Million years to become the Emperor of Desolate Heaven? I have heard that three days in Hedong, three days in Hexi, if you don't run for three days, you are like this😁👍, I can make you run away, I am like this 😏

What kind of reincarnation are you adding? Just bring in the Super Beast Team and the Ghost King, give the Dou Qi Continent and the Great Thousand World a little extra energy shock, and add a little collision of ideas from the seven universes. It's much more fun than the chaotic reincarnation time traveler you had ten years ago.

Huo Linfei belongs to re-cultivation, reincarnation, and retrieval, which is why he rose so quickly, unlike Xiao Yan and Shi Hao.

Alas, you are not Huo Linfei after all

If you remove the plot filter of Zi Gongxiang, the power system of Super Beast Arms is actually very good and cool enough. He can transform into a Kamen Rider (armor) at the primary level, and can further summon the Super Beast God to transform into a Titan of Light (no), and can also unite the team. The final form is the Nebula body (in the animation, only Pluto, Snow King, and Ghost King have reached the maximum power limit). This power system is not outdated even now. It's a pity that due to market restrictions at that time, the plot was still very supply-oriented.

The author should cut it early and stop wasting everyone's time.

I just saw the post on Tieba today, and Daily Guide recommended it to me.

Huo Linfei's setting is indeed quite outrageous. A few weeks of practice can catch up with others' efforts of 100,000 years.

The combat power of Super Beast should be higher than Doupo, right?

? How could it be turned into a novel if it wasn't just a joke?

The writing needs to be polished a little more, it's a bit unsustainable at the beginning.

I used to see a lot of Lu Mingfei coming back from somewhere, but now they don't wear pig's feet randomly.

The genius in the introduction can be changed to a fool, "I just say it's a fluke when I meet people, and those fools really believe it." I think this is better.

Don't let this book be unfinished. I like to read interesting articles. Please update me diligently 😍

The niche setting, writing skills that still need to be refined, and the innovations made in the fan fiction are bonus points, but they can only be said to be good and not hide their flaws.

Huo Linfei is quite infatuated, just don't create a harem to destroy the character.

There are really too many stitches 🙂

The author's writing is so confusing and completely illogical.

Why is it so bad after just a few chapters?

I've given you the monthly pass, and there are only 16 of them so far After reading around the book circles, I feel that the author's primary problem is that he didn't understand the audience. You wrote about Huo Linfei's fandom wearing Doupo. Does everyone want to read a Doupo fanfic? What everyone wants to read is Huo Linfei. Why is Versailles so slutty? Don't be afraid that the battle power will collapse. If the battle power increases too quickly, it will end quickly. Don't stress the protagonist's combat power. That will only show that the author's level is too low and others will run away. You can write Huo Linfei normally. If the power increases too fast, you can't change the map.